::dosti,meri aur baarish ki::

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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."
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«Reply #1 on: May 02, 2005, 04:40:35 PM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."



wow .........nice............ bahut hi khoob
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«Reply #2 on: May 02, 2005, 04:45:36 PM »
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Shukriya humtum. Usual Smile !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: May 03, 2005, 01:33:07 AM »
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Very nice Nidhi ji,
   Kisi ke liye paani barasta hai to lagta hai baarish ho rahi hai,
  Kisi ke liye paani barasta hai to lagta hai fiza bhi uske sath ro rahi hai....
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«Reply #4 on: May 03, 2005, 02:11:11 AM »
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww


sho shweet........................................my nidhi u write superb it`s mind blowing...................

Quote from: "nidhi_yadein"
"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."
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«Reply #5 on: May 03, 2005, 02:21:09 AM »
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It is well written Nidhi...

Always Anjli
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«Reply #6 on: May 03, 2005, 04:26:33 AM »
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Thank u adesh ji,sahi kaha aapne,sabke liye barish k alag alag maayne hain.

Thanx naveed and anjali for liking my work Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: May 03, 2005, 06:09:42 AM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."


kya kaho sis really mein buhut achi lagi mujhe apki aur barish ki dosti
aise hi likhti rehna
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«Reply #8 on: May 03, 2005, 06:49:32 AM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."


kya kaho sis really mein buhut achi lagi mujhe apki aur barish ki dosti
aise hi likhti rehna
Thanx simran Usual Smile thank u so much fo ur comment.

"Insaan chod jaate hain saath duniya me,
 mehfooz na reh paate hain dosti k tarane,
 khamoshi me jo kuch keh jaaye,samjha jaye,
 wohi to jaane kya dosti ke taraane."
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2005, 03:04:31 PM »
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Baarsaat aur aapka fasana,
lagta hai bahut hai purana.
Barsaat to aati hai jati hai,
par aap-dono ka sambandh,
bhai mushkil hai bhulana....

Xcempllary piece of work nidhi ji!

Pundreek.
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2005, 03:41:04 PM »
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Baarsaat aur aapka fasana,
lagta hai bahut hai purana.
Barsaat to aati hai jati hai,
par aap-dono ka sambandh,
bhai mushkil hai bhulana....

Xcempllary piece of work nidhi ji!

Pundreek.
Thanx a lot Pudreek ji , well written :D !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2005, 12:17:23 AM »
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Thank you adesh ji,sahi kaha aapne,sabke liye barish k alag alag maayne hain.

Thanx naveed and anjali for liking my work Usual Smile





you welcome..............................


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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2005, 12:29:07 PM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."


dosti tumhari or barish ki  mujhe samajh aati hai,..
kyuki wo bhi har kisi ko khush dkhna chahati hai,...
lakin ek batt mujhko bahut satati hai,...
tumkyu roti ho or tumhe kiski yadd aati hai,...
barish ko to tumne haal e baya kar diya,.....
lakin kyu tum mujhe nahi batati ho,....
hum kya tumhare dost nahi,....
nahi to koi  batt nahi ,lakin hum bhi itne khudgarz nahi,....
jo puche na tujhe ,jo chahe na teri khushia,..
na bata sako to mat batana,lakin humara naam hai dukhia,...
hum ye sawal tumse rooz pouchange,..
tumhari aakho k  aasho hum hi sambhalange,.
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2005, 07:03:37 AM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."


dosti tumhari or barish ki  mujhe samajh aati hai,..
kyuki wo bhi har kisi ko khush dkhna chahati hai,...
lakin ek batt mujhko bahut satati hai,...
tumkyu roti ho or tumhe kiski yadd aati hai,...
barish ko to tumne haal e baya kar diya,.....
lakin kyu tum mujhe nahi batati ho,....
hum kya tumhare dost nahi,....
nahi to koi  batt nahi ,lakin hum bhi itne khudgarz nahi,....
jo puche na tujhe ,jo chahe na teri khushia,..
na bata sako to mat batana,lakin humara naam hai dukhia,...
hum ye sawal tumse rooz pouchange,..
tumhari aakho k  aasho hum hi sambhalange,.
Thank u Tushar,ofcourse u r a frnd :D
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«Reply #14 on: May 06, 2005, 06:01:07 PM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."


wah kya baat hai nidhi!!!! bohot ache!!!

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