::dosti,meri aur baarish ki::

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«Reply #30 on: June 15, 2005, 09:14:13 AM »
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wow  very  nice  work  talat...........thy......khoobsurat_subah

dil todna humari adat nahi,
dil hum kisika dukhate nahi
bharosa rakhna humarae dosti pe
dost bankar hum kisiko bhulaathe nahi!! .....nm
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«Reply #31 on: June 15, 2005, 01:22:10 PM »
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Thanx a lot Waheed bhai........
well said.

Mana hai kissi ko dost par wo apna hi nahi hai,
Sab kuch diya usko par wo samajhta hi nahi hai,
Kya kare kaise dilayen yakeen usko hum,
Wo janta hai sab kuch phir bhi manta hi nahi hai...
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«Reply #32 on: June 16, 2005, 08:12:32 AM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."



kayi raaz aaise hote hain jo kahe nahi jate,
koi dil aaise hote hain jo tode nahi jate
aur kuch aap jaise dost hote hain jo
chode nahi jate
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«Reply #33 on: June 17, 2005, 07:10:35 AM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."


Its beautiful Nidhi.... !!


Thanx a lot Talat and very nice written Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: June 17, 2005, 07:16:22 AM »
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Quote from: "khoobsurat_subah"
bahut khoob talat and amit , and nidhi

baarish haan baarish jab bhi aati hai
har chehra khil sa jaata hai aur khushi chha jaati hai

dost to aur khush hote hain ke yehi rut unke liye dosti ka paigaam laati hai.

magar jab kisi ka paigam nahi aata , to woh sajani
udas si ho jaati hai..

us pyaare se chehre ko yaad karke sochti hai aur yaado me kho jaati hai..

phir uski aankho mein aansoo hoten hain par jalim duniya nahi jaan paati hai..

kyonke barasti hai baarish aankhon mein bhi us baarish ke saath jo aati hai.. har baar..


Thank u khoobsurat subah,apne bhi bohat khoob likha hai.
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«Reply #35 on: June 17, 2005, 07:19:37 AM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."



kayi raaz aaise hote hain jo kahe nahi jate,
koi dil aaise hote hain jo tode nahi jate
aur kuch aap jaise dost hote hain jo
chode nahi jate


Thank u skyweb for reading and liking the post Usual Smile

"Wo dost hi kya jo saath chod jaayein,
 tanhai me dost se muh mod jaayein,
 dost to wo hai jo muskaan laaye chehre pe,
 aur waqt waqt pe farz nibhaaye apne."
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«Reply #36 on: June 17, 2005, 10:48:47 AM »
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Thanx a lot Waheed bhai........
well said.

Mana hai kissi ko dost par wo apna hi nahi hai,
Sab kuch diya usko par wo samajhta hi nahi hai,
Kya kare kaise dilayen yakeen usko hum,
Wo janta hai sab kuch phir bhi manta hi nahi hai...


ur  welcome  thy................too  good  reply..............bahot  accha likha aap ne..........
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«Reply #37 on: June 17, 2005, 11:02:06 AM »
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"Is barish se mujhe pyar hai bohat,
 meri tanhaiyon ka ise abhaas hai bohat,
 jab-jab ye barish aayi mujhse milne,
 chehre pe ashq hote thhe mere.........,
 meri tanhai samajh gayi thhi yeh,
 hamesha saath mere roti rahi yeh,
 maine kaha tum jao,mujhe akele rehne do,
 is par wo boli,mujhe bhi apne saath rone do,
 phir na wo kuch boli,na main kuch boli,
 gumsum roti rahi main akeli.........,
 jab jab wo aati,muhe issi haal me paati,
 main bhi usse ankhe na thhi mila paati,
 aaj phir bohat din baad ye barish aayi,
 aur aaj usne mere hothon pe hansi payi,
 khush ho gayi.....tej baras padi..........,
 mere saath woh bhi khilkhilakar hans padi,
 maine poocha tum kyon hans rahi ho aaj,
 usne kaha meri dost jo khush hai aaj....,
 phir ansoo jhalak pade meri ankho se,
 par is baar khushiyon ki chamak thhi in ankho me,
 phir maine use sab kuch bataya,
 dil ka kissa usko sunaya.............,
 bohat khush hui wo sab kuch sun kar,
 phir chali bhi gayi duayein de kar,
 wada liya maine usse phir jaldi aane ka,
 use har baat dil ki batane ka.....,
 phir maine socha yahi to hai meri saathi,
 mera chehra dekhkar jo hai hansti-roti."



kayi raaz aaise hote hain jo kahe nahi jate,
koi dil aaise hote hain jo tode nahi jate
aur kuch aap jaise dost hote hain jo
chode nahi jate


Thank you skyweb for reading and liking the post Usual Smile

"Wo dost hi kya jo saath chod jaayein,
 tanhai me dost se muh mod jaayein,
 dost to wo hai jo muskaan laaye chehre pe,
 aur waqt waqt pe farz nibhaaye apne."


bahot  khoob  nidhi...................

Ghum Ka Badal Khul Ke Mere Ruh Per Barsa Boohat
Main Jiya Jab Tak To Jinee Ke Liye Tarsa Boohat

Log Kehte Thai Bahot Kuch Humne Akhir Sun Liya
Warna Tumse Dosti Kerne Ko Dil Tarpa Bohat....nm
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«Reply #38 on: June 22, 2005, 09:08:07 AM »
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wow, very nice nidhi, abtak maine ye thread dekha nahi tha...bohot hi achha likha hai..sabne..
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«Reply #39 on: June 22, 2005, 09:13:22 AM »
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wow, very nice nidhi, abtak maine ye thread dekha nahi tha...bohot hi achha likha hai..sabne..
Thanx Sanya Usual Smile .

Bohat khoob waheed,excellent poetry,and thanx a lot.

"Dost ki dosti aaj aise tadpaai hai,
  aisi nahi dilbar ki bhi judaai hai,
  mujhe aaj phir teri yaad ayi hai,
  teri tasveer kuch is tarah ankho me lehraai hai."
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«Reply #40 on: June 24, 2005, 04:09:29 PM »
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wow, very nice nidhi, abtak maine ye thread dekha nahi tha...bohot hi achha likha hai..sabne..
Thanx Sanya Usual Smile .

Bohat khoob waheed,excellent poetry,and thanx a lot.

"Dost ki dosti aaj aise tadpaai hai,
  aisi nahi dilbar ki bhi judaai hai,
  mujhe aaj phir teri yaad ayi hai,
  teri tasveer kuch is tarah ankho me lehraai hai."


thanxxxxxxxxx  sanya...............nidhi...........superbssssss  nidhi.........very nice  words...........
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«Reply #41 on: June 27, 2005, 07:35:13 AM »
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nidhi its great..kis kis ke liye paani barsata hai..kyuin barsata hai..ye wahi jaanta hai jis per gujarata hai.. a lovely and deep post....


always Harash
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«Reply #42 on: June 27, 2005, 07:50:14 AM »
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khushbu ki tarah aapke pass bikhar jaenge .
sunkun bankar dil me utar jaenge.
mehsus karne ki koshish to kijie.
door hote hue bi pas nazar ayenge. [NM].......
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«Reply #43 on: June 29, 2005, 04:57:22 PM »
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nidhi its great..kis kis ke liye paani barsata hai..kyuin barsata hai..ye wahi jaanta hai jis per gujarata hai.. a lovely and deep post....


always Harash


Aapka bohat bohat shukriya Harsh ji jo aapne kavita padhi,i m so happy ki aapko post pasand aayi Usual Smile Thanx a lot.

Nice one bhambhra .
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«Reply #44 on: June 29, 2005, 05:02:10 PM »
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wow, very nice nidhi, abtak maine ye thread dekha nahi tha...bohot hi achha likha hai..sabne..
Thanx Sanya Usual Smile .

Bohat khoob waheed,excellent poetry,and thanx a lot.

"Dost ki dosti aaj aise tadpaai hai,
  aisi nahi dilbar ki bhi judaai hai,
  mujhe aaj phir teri yaad ayi hai,
  teri tasveer kuch is tarah ankho me lehraai hai."


thanxxxxxxxxx  sanya...............nidhi...........superbssssss  nidhi.........very nice  words...........


Thanks waheed Usual Smile

"Aaj phir barish ne di hai dastak mere dil ke darwaaze,
      band ankho me meri reh gaye sapne kuch lehraate,
      kuch kahe binaa wo samajh jaati hai haal mere dil ka,
      badalte rishte kuch aise hain,jo haal hai mausam ka."
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