dost..ka mil jaana hua.

by guhar on November 26, 2009, 06:33:35 AM
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bheed me ik shaks se takraana hua,
 haath  milne ke baad uska dil me utar jaana hua,

shuruaat me baatein sukhi hi hoti rahi ,
kuch din me usme raazon ka mil jaana hua,

roothe jab bhi janaab tab chen lut gaya,
par jab maafi ne asar kiya,
to chote se gum me badi khushi ka mil jaana hua;

ab door hoon lekin us ki har khabar hai mujhe,
aadat si ho gayi hai,
so dooriyo mein bhi nazdikiyo ka simat aana hua..

is tarah ik ajnabee ki mujh ko lat lag jaana hua,
ki dost na hua  koi khazaana hua,,,
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: November 26, 2009, 06:36:46 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Guhar Ji
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #2 on: November 26, 2009, 06:49:27 AM »
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Wow bahut khoob Guhar ji,mindblowing creation,excellent,great work.keep it up. Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 26, 2009, 07:19:22 AM »
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Hello Madhu ji kya aap ye text copy paste karti hain : mindblowing creation,excellent,great work.keep it up. Pl.dont mind it.
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«Reply #4 on: November 26, 2009, 08:03:21 AM »
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Gud question Riyaz ji,main copy paste nahi karti par sabko ek barabar maanti hoon,sab apne mahenat se chahe acha likhe ya bura par main hausla zarur badaati hoon.kisike bhi dil nahi dhukana chahti.thanks.
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«Reply #5 on: November 26, 2009, 08:11:30 AM »
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Arre waah guhar ji kya khoob apni feelings ko lafzo mein utara hai apne...verry impressive..Applause Applause..

madhuji aap bahut hi ache ho aur bahut hi acha karte ho apke aesa karne se kaafi logo ko hausla milta hai unme se ek main bhi hu...
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«Reply #6 on: November 26, 2009, 08:13:49 AM »
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HAY...MAUSAM GARAM MAT BANAO YAAR...HERE U HAV TO GIVE UR REVIEWS ABT THE POEM U READ INSTEAD OF ANY ADVICE OR COMMENT....SO NO NEED OF NASIHATS AND PALAT JAWAABZZ.... love4
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«Reply #7 on: November 26, 2009, 08:14:54 AM »
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Thank you so much Geet ji, love4
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«Reply #8 on: November 26, 2009, 08:20:01 AM »
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u r alwayz welcome madhuji....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #9 on: November 26, 2009, 01:26:50 PM »
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Guhar-di...dil mai spandan paida kati aapki ye kavita
lajawaab hai...dosti ko ek naya aayaam de diya hai aapne... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Chhoti si ghatna thee,ay ajnabee
Sahsa bheed mai takkraa jane ki
Teri EK ungli k sparsh ne Jadoo kiya
Mere ujde dil mai ek phool khila diya
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Quote from: guhar on November 26, 2009, 06:33:35 AM
bheed me ik shaks se takraana hua,
 haath  milne ke baad uska dil me utar jaana hua,

shuruaat me baatein sukhi hi hoti rahi ,
kuch din me usme raazon ka mil jaana hua,

roothe jab bhi janaab tab chen lut gaya,
par jab maafi ne asar kiya,
to chote se gum me badi khushi ka mil jaana hua;

ab door hoon lekin us ki har khabar hai mujhe,
aadat si ho gayi hai,
so dooriyo mein bhi nazdikiyo ka simat aana hua..

is tarah ik ajnabee ki mujh ko lat lag jaana hua,
ki dost na hua  koi khazaana hua,,,
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«Reply #10 on: November 26, 2009, 01:56:48 PM »
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koyal...pehli shaks ho jisne apne poore vichaar hindi aur urdu me diye...me yahi caahti hoon is jagah sab zyaada se zyaada inhi do bhaasha ko aihtraam de..aur inme hi khud ka aur doosro ka shbd bhandaar bhdaane me madad kare...

aur haan wo kavita aur spandan shabd ka prayog behad khoobsurat tha....

 fish fish fish
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«Reply #11 on: November 26, 2009, 02:09:21 PM »
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Shukriya...dhanyawaad....aapke prohtsaan dete shabdo k liye....
Chaliye hum do is baat ka khayaal rakhen....bhaashaa ka


Quote from: guhar on November 26, 2009, 01:56:48 PM
koyal...pehli shaks ho jisne apne poore vichaar hindi aur urdu me diye...me yahi caahti hoon is jagah sab zyaada se zyaada inhi do bhaasha ko aihtraam de..aur inme hi khud ka aur doosro ka shbd bhandaar bhdaane me madad kare...

aur haan wo kavita aur spandan shabd ka prayog behad khoobsurat tha....

 fish fish fish
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«Reply #12 on: November 26, 2009, 04:00:36 PM »
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Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Guhar Ji Aapne Nice And Excellent Wrok Applause Applause

Riyz Ji Madhu Ji Humesha Sabki POem Mein likhti aisa kyuki unhe lagta hai sabne badhiya likha hai kyuki usni itni mehnat se likha to hai na aur kisi ka hausla badhane ke liye ye wording hi bahut hoti hai bro Aisa karne Se Kisi Ki Mehnat Kharab Nahi jati aur uska Hausla Badhta hai


Aur Geet Ji Mein Aapki Is Bat Se Sehmat Nahi Hu Ki Aap Bhi Madhu Ji Ki Tarah Hausla Badhati Ho Mein Nahi Manta Is Bat Ko Agar Bura Laga Ho To Sory But Jo such hai wo hi bola hai meine bus
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«Reply #13 on: November 26, 2009, 05:15:17 PM »
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Main aapki baat se sehmat nahi hu Rishiji......
Hosla bhdhana ek baat hai...par galat ya kamjoor rachna ka vishleshan hona chahiye.....sahi criticisam ka koi bura nahi maanta....is se achha likhne ka mauka milta hai...nahi tou wahi galti repeat hoti jaayegi.....
Geet-di sahi ko sahi aur galat ko galat kehti hai....aap use samjho....


Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 26, 2009, 04:00:36 PM
Bahut Hi Sundar Likha Hai Guhar Ji Aapne Nice And Excellent Wrok Applause Applause

Riyz Ji Madhu Ji Humesha Sabki POem Mein likhti aisa kyuki unhe lagta hai sabne badhiya likha hai kyuki usni itni mehnat se likha to hai na aur kisi ka hausla badhane ke liye ye wording hi bahut hoti hai bro Aisa karne Se Kisi Ki Mehnat Kharab Nahi jati aur uska Hausla Badhta hai


Aur Geet Ji Mein Aapki Is Bat Se Sehmat Nahi Hu Ki Aap Bhi Madhu Ji Ki Tarah Hausla Badhati Ho Mein Nahi Manta Is Bat Ko Agar Bura Laga Ho To Sory But Jo such hai wo hi bola hai meine bus
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«Reply #14 on: November 26, 2009, 06:40:56 PM »
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Madhu ji aap sabka utsahvardhan karti hain qabile-tareef hai. Kintu sahi aalochna se samajhdar ko sahi disha bhi milti hai. Aap har baar bilkul eksi wordings ka prayog karti hain to laga ye copy paste hai. Thanks
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