DUA CHAHTA HU......(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on October 13, 2008, 06:52:59 AM
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MUJE DAULAT NAHI SHOH_RAT NAHI TAKAT KI ARZOO NAHI
SHAYER HU EK ADNA SA, FAKAT TUMHARI DAD CHAHTA HU

ACHCHA LIKHU ACHCHA KAHO, JO BURA LIKHU BURA KAHO
MERA APNA KOI WAJOOD NAHI, TUMSE APNI PEHCHAAN CHAHTA HU

SIKHA TUMHI SE SAMJHA TUMHI SE, MERA APNA KOI GURU NAHI
MUJE BADDUA MILE GILA NAHI, MERE SHERO KE LIYE DUA CHAHTA HU

TUMHE DEKHA NAHI TUMHE SAMJHA NAHI, TUMSE MERA KOI RISHTA NAHI
GHAYEL KA HAIN MAQSAD YAHI, TUM SABSE APNAPAN CHAHTA HU

                                         -SAJID GHAYEL-
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farah ali
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«Reply #1 on: October 13, 2008, 07:33:17 AM »
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sajid sahib kuch samjh nahin aai
ke ap ne kya likha.
aik taraf tu ap ne kisi anjaan se kaha ke ap ne sab usi se sekha.
aur dosri taraf ye baat ke ap ne us ko dekha tak nahin samjha nahin
aur koi us se rishta bhi nahin..
he na ajeeb sii baat..
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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2008, 09:03:12 AM »
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Bohat khoob achcha likha hai Sajid ji.. Applause Applause
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2008, 10:38:46 AM »
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Ghayel ji aap to bahut achcha ho likhte
Baraapan hai aap ki apne adna shayer ho kahte

Teri pehchaan hai yeh shayarian jo aap ho likhte
Teri shayarian bemishaal ho yahi dua hai hum dete

Na dekha na samjha phir bhi kalam ka rishta hai
Ab ise aap ko hum sab ka apnapan hi samajhna hai
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Tanha(Saurabh)
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2008, 11:06:33 AM »
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sajid ji bahot bahot khoob, aapke kamaal mein bahot achchha khayal nazar
aa raha hai. khoob likha.. Applause Applause
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: October 13, 2008, 12:10:37 PM »
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maine aap ke liye yeh ghazal likhi thi ab dekhe na hum dono me koi rishta nahi hum ek dusre ko jante bhi nahi phir bhi aaj aapne kitni pyaari baat muje samjhayee ya sikhayeee.
Quote from: farah ali on October 13, 2008, 07:33:17 AM
sajid sahib kuch samjh nahin aai
ke ap ne kya likha.
aik taraf tu ap ne kisi anjaan se kaha ke ap ne sab usi se sekha.
aur dosri taraf ye baat ke ap ne us ko dekha tak nahin samjha nahin
aur koi us se rishta bhi nahin..
he na ajeeb sii baat..
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«Reply #6 on: October 13, 2008, 12:12:55 PM »
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Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on October 13, 2008, 11:06:33 AM
sajid ji bahot bahot khoob, aapke kamaal mein bahot achchha khayal nazar
aa raha hai. khoob likha.. Applause Applause
Quote from: honeyrose on October 13, 2008, 09:03:12 AM
Bohat khoob achcha likha hai Sajid ji.. Applause Applause

thank you tanha and honey
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2008, 12:14:45 PM »
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aapki dua ke liye bohat shukriya rajesh aur yakinan hamere beech kalam ka bhi rishta hain aur dosti ka bhi.
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 13, 2008, 10:38:46 AM
Ghayel ji aap to bahut achcha ho likhte
Baraapan hai aap ki apne adna shayer ho kahte

Teri pehchaan hai yeh shayarian jo aap ho likhte
Teri shayarian bemishaal ho yahi dua hai hum dete

Na dekha na samjha phir bhi kalam ka rishta hai
Ab ise aap ko hum sab ka apnapan hi samajhna hai
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«Reply #8 on: October 14, 2008, 07:00:17 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut aacha likha hai sajid ji aap ne





Baadal
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«Reply #9 on: October 14, 2008, 07:25:18 AM »
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thank you badal
Quote from: baadal102 on October 14, 2008, 07:00:17 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut aacha likha hai sajid ji aap ne





Baadal
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«Reply #10 on: October 15, 2008, 07:35:13 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 13, 2008, 06:52:59 AM
MUJE DAULAT NAHI SHOH_RAT NAHI TAKAT KI ARZOO NAHI
SHAYER HU EK ADNA SA, FAKAT TUMHARI DAD CHAHTA HU

ACHCHA LIKHU ACHCHA KAHO, JO BURA LIKHU BURA KAHO
MERA APNA KOI WAJOOD NAHI, TUMSE APNI PEHCHAAN CHAHTA HU

SIKHA TUMHI SE SAMJHA TUMHI SE, MERA APNA KOI GURU NAHI
MUJE BADDUA MILE GILA NAHI, MERE SHERO KE LIYE DUA CHAHTA HU

TUMHE DEKHA NAHI TUMHE SAMJHA NAHI, TUMSE MERA KOI RISHTA NAHI
GHAYEL KA HAIN MAQSAD YAHI, TUM SABSE APNAPAN CHAHTA HU

                                         -SAJID GHAYEL-

Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji Aap ko daad ki kya zaroorat..diya andhere ko dikhate hain, suraj ko nahin...aapki shayari chamakta hua suraj hain !!
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«Reply #11 on: October 15, 2008, 07:41:56 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on October 15, 2008, 07:35:13 AM
Bohot Khoob Sajid Ji Aap ko daad ki kya zaroorat..diya andhere ko dikhate hain, suraj ko nahin...aapki shayari chamakta hua suraj hain !!

MUJE SURAJ KEHKAR WOH KARTE HAIN DILLAGI
RAAT ME CHAND BANKAR MERI CHURATE HAIN ROSHNI

                             -SG-
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«Reply #12 on: October 15, 2008, 07:45:09 AM »
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Sajid Ji,

Na aasman hai mera, na koi suraj mere liye,
Maah-e-roshan nahin, ek nanha sa diya main !!
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«Reply #13 on: October 15, 2008, 07:55:20 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 13, 2008, 10:38:46 AM
Ghayel ji aap to bahut achcha ho likhte
Baraapan hai aap ki apne adna shayer ho kahte

Teri pehchaan hai yeh shayarian jo aap ho likhte
Teri shayarian bemishaal ho yahi dua hai hum dete

Na dekha na samjha phir bhi kalam ka rishta hai
Ab ise aap ko hum sab ka apnapan hi samajhna hai




Nice reply Rajesh
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«Reply #14 on: October 15, 2008, 08:28:47 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on October 15, 2008, 07:45:09 AM
Sajid Ji,

Na aasman hai mera, na koi suraj mere liye,
Maah-e-roshan nahin, ek nanha sa diya main !!

andhera jitna gehra ho diya utna hi jagmagata hain
uski nanhi si koshish pe suraj bhi sharma jata hain

                -sg-
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