EK Din.......... (Neel)

by neelgold on May 04, 2010, 10:37:27 PM
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Yakin Tha ki Tum vapis aonge Ek Din
Ahh ke fir se hume manoge Ek din
Kamosh darkan ki awaz sun ke
Fir gale se hume lagoge Ek Din

Voh Ek Din bi guzar gaya aur voh sham bi dhal gayae
Na tum aye na hi koi tumara paigaam aaya
Khali Jholi le ke bethe rehe hum
Us khuda ke aage jo tha faliya

Aaj fir roshni ki ek kiran jagi hai
Fir ek khayal dil main aya hai
Tum aonge jaroor Ek Din
Fir Dil ko aaj yeh yakin dilaya hai

**Neel**
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«Reply #1 on: May 04, 2010, 11:23:10 PM »
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bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Neel.... isme aapne intzaar ko bahut khoobsurat shabdon me pesh kiya hai... bahut khoob...!!!

haan wo ek din tumhaari zindagi me jaroor aayega,
jis din tumhaara piya tumhaare paas laut aayega,
khuda k aage failaya hai jholi, khaali kaise rahega,
wo tumhaare aangan me pyaar ka diya jaroor jalayega...
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«Reply #2 on: May 04, 2010, 11:26:02 PM »
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Wah WAh kya baat hai ji ...

Thnx

Bhut hi khoob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Quote from: klaskar on May 04, 2010, 11:23:10 PM
bahut khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne Neel.... isme aapne intzaar ko bahut khoobsurat shabdon me pesh kiya hai... bahut khoob...!!!

haan wo ek din tumhaari zindagi me jaroor aayega,
jis din tumhaara piya tumhaare paas laut aayega,
khuda k aage failaya hai jholi, khaali kaise rahega,
wo tumhaare aangan me pyaar ka diya jaroor jalayega...
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«Reply #3 on: May 04, 2010, 11:28:57 PM »
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wah bahoth qoob acha hausla hai .. bahoth qoob ..dad hazir hai qubool karen.. allah tumhe khush rakhe .. aur din jald hi naseeb ho ..



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«Reply #4 on: May 04, 2010, 11:35:01 PM »
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U r always welcome... n thanx for ur compliments...!!!

Quote from: neelgold on May 04, 2010, 11:26:02 PM
Wah WAh kya baat hai ji ...

Thnx

Bhut hi khoob !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 04, 2010, 11:35:54 PM »
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Thanx a lot!!!!

Really apreciate


Quote from: qadeer_junaid on May 04, 2010, 11:28:57 PM
wah bahoth qoob acha hausla hai .. bahoth qoob ..dad hazir hai qubool karen.. allah tumhe khush rakhe .. aur din jald hi naseeb ho ..



duwa go

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«Reply #6 on: May 05, 2010, 06:01:40 AM »
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bahut khoob neel ji.. Applause Applause

mat hona udash ke koi nahi hai tere paas,
tere aankho ko deedar se rahat milegi ek din.,
dil me intezar ke phool khilaye rakhna 'neel',
ke woh jarur aayenge tadap kar tere paas ek din.,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya...
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«Reply #7 on: May 05, 2010, 07:33:54 AM »
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Wah kya baat hai       NeelGold ji.....

Hamse dosti kiya unhone EK DIN
jeevan bar dosti ka wada kiya EK DIN
choti si baat par hamse rooth gaya woh EK DIN
bin unse baat kiye mushkil se kat raha hai har EK DIN
par yakeen hai apni galti ka ehsaas hojayenga usko EK DIN
aur laut kar jaroor aake gale lag jaayenga mujhse woh "EK DIN"..
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«Reply #8 on: May 05, 2010, 09:23:00 AM »
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Wah wah Neel ji bahut khoob,beautiful lines by Kapil ji,Touhid ji,Cara ji.kamaal ke likha aap sabhi ne. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: May 05, 2010, 09:43:13 AM »
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Behtreen peshkash hai ye aapki Neel ji. Dil ke tassuraat ko umdaa lafzon ke saath shandaar dhang se poem ka roop diya hai. Marhaba. Ek sher arz hai:

Karam  nahi  to  phir  uska  itaab aayega          (itaab = anger)
Ke kuchh na kuchh mere khat ka jawaab aayega
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«Reply #10 on: May 05, 2010, 10:05:33 AM »
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Quote from: neelgold on May 04, 2010, 10:37:27 PM
Yakin Tha ki Tum vapis aonge Ek Din
Ahh ke fir se hume manoge Ek din
Kamosh darkan ki awaz sun ke
Fir gale se hume lagoge Ek Din

Voh Ek Din bi guzar gaya aur voh sham bi dhal gayae
Na tum aye na hi koi tumara paigaam aaya
Khali Jholi le ke bethe rehe hum
Us khuda ke aage jo tha faliya

Aaj fir roshni ki ek kiran jagi hai
Fir ek khayal dil main aya hai
Tum aonge jaroor Ek Din
Fir Dil ko aaj yeh yakin dilaya hai

**Neel**
Bahut Ache Neelji..Bahut Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: May 05, 2010, 02:22:32 PM »
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xcelent work...beautiful creation..
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«Reply #12 on: May 05, 2010, 04:09:06 PM »
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bohat bohat khoob Neel ji. behtareen... Applause Applause Applause Applause


bohat khoob likha hai sabne... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: May 05, 2010, 10:10:49 PM »
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Thanx a lot Touhid ji , u r too gud ....
vry gud reply ...

Apne ass ke diyae jalaye hue hai maine aaj bi
Voh ayega idhar ek din jarror , bhool se hi sahi  

***Neel***

Quote from: Mohammad Touhid on May 05, 2010, 06:01:40 AM
bahut khoob neel ji.. Applause Applause

mat hona udash ke koi nahi hai tere paas,
tere aankho ko deedar se rahat milegi ek din.,
dil me intezar ke phool khilaye rakhna 'neel',
ke woh jarur aayenge tadap kar tere paas ek din.,

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Shukriya...
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2010, 10:19:58 PM »
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Thnx CAra ji ......

Appka haar andaz hume pasand aata hai ...
Ashar ke reply main aage se bi jo Ashar aata hai
Bhut hi acha reply karti hai aap cara ji
Haar ek peom ka jawab fir poem main jo aata hai

Quote from: cara on May 05, 2010, 07:33:54 AM
Wah kya baat hai       NeelGold ji.....

Hamse dosti kiya unhone EK DIN
jeevan bar dosti ka wada kiya EK DIN
choti si baat par hamse rooth gaya woh EK DIN
bin unse baat kiye mushkil se kat raha hai har EK DIN
par yakeen hai apni galti ka ehsaas hojayenga usko EK DIN
aur laut kar jaroor aake gale lag jaayenga mujhse woh "EK DIN"..
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