EK Din.......... (Neel)

by neelgold on May 04, 2010, 10:37:27 PM

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neelgold

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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2010, 10:23:39 PM »

Thanx a lot Madhu ji !!!!!!
Pls aise hi housla afazai karte rehiye ...

I m tlling every tym its jst my hobby muze likhna bilcul bi nahi aata bus kuch feelings hai kuch apni kuch surroundings ki jo kuch baan jata hai .....

Quote from: madhuwesh on May 05, 2010, 09:23:00 AM

Wah wah Neel ji bahut khoob,beautiful lines by Kapil ji,Touhid ji,Cara ji.kamaal ke likha aap sabhi ne. icon_thumleft


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Re: EK Din.......... (Neel)

«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2010, 10:29:28 PM »

My God Riyaz ji U r so Very gud alwys lyks ur wiritngs..

abhi bi bhut khoob kaha Kya kehne aap ke !!!!

bt word jo samz nahi aaya " Tassuraat"

& Marhaba means Good

Pls let me know

Thnx 4 ur time & commnt

Quote from: riyaz106 on May 05, 2010, 09:43:13 AM

Behtreen peshkash hai ye aapki Neel ji. Dil ke tassuraat ko umdaa lafzon ke saath shandaar dhang se poem ka roop diya hai. Marhaba. Ek sher arz hai:

Karam nahi to phir uska itaab aayega (itaab = anger)
Ke kuchh na kuchh mere khat ka jawaab aayega
(riyaz)


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neelgold

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Re: EK Din.......... (Neel)

«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2010, 10:30:25 PM »

Thnx Khawish ji !!!!!!!!

Quote from: khwaish on May 05, 2010, 10:05:33 AM

Bahut Ache Neelji..Bahut Khoob


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neelgold

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Re: EK Din.......... (Neel)

«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2010, 10:31:38 PM »

Thanx a lot Nazar ji ..
Really thnx .....

Quote from: nazar ghouri on May 05, 2010, 02:22:32 PM

xcelent work...beautiful creation..


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neelgold

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Re: EK Din.......... (Neel)

«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2010, 10:36:15 PM »

Thnx Tanha ji ......

Itni sari clapping ...wow!!!!
so nyc of u ....

Quote from: Tanha(Saurabh) on May 05, 2010, 04:09:06 PM

bohat bohat khoob Neel ji. behtareen... Applause

bohat khoob likha hai sabne... Applause


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riyaz106

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Re: EK Din.......... (Neel)

«Reply #20 on: May 06, 2010, 06:19:26 AM »

Thanks Neel ji for appreciation. Jin words ke meaning aapne pooche hain wo ye hain:

Tassuraat = Reminiscences, the act or process of recollecting past experiences, events or effects.
Marhaba = Greetings, Welcome,(also used for 'bravo')

Quote from: neelgold on May 05, 2010, 10:29:28 PM