"ek dost ke naam"

by aaina on April 26, 2009, 01:46:36 PM
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Ek naya dost hai zindagi mai aaya hua
Thoda sa ghabraya thoda sa sharmaya hua

Uski batao.n ke andaaz thode se hain nirale
Isliyn zehen o dil pe hai mere wo chaya hua

Dar haqeeqat saadgi uski ek haqeeqat hai lagi
Na ke ho wo lehja uska aise hi banaya hua

Uske soch ke andaaz ye bhi mujhko batate hain
Sab riwayato.n ko usne hai bakhoobi nibhaya hua

Hota hai mehsoos kiyn mujhko saare raaz usse keh dun
Lagta hai jaise usko, hai meine aazmaaya hua

Daikho to aslam uski jheel si aankho mein
Ek anokha manzar jaise lagta hai itraya hua
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2009, 02:07:50 PM »
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Bahut pyara kalam likha hai aapne aaina ji.
Mubarak ho Naya Dost aapko.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2009, 03:14:04 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on April 26, 2009, 01:46:36 PM
Ek naya dost hai zindagi mai aaya hua
Thoda sa ghabraya thoda sa sharmaya hua

Uski batao.n ke andaaz thode se hain nirale
Isliyn zehen o dil pe hai mere wo chaya hua

Dar haqeeqat saadgi uski ek haqeeqat hai lagi
Na ke ho wo lehja uska aise hi banaya hua

Uske soch ke nadaaz ye bhi mujhko batate hain
Sab riwayato.n ko usne hai bakhoobi nibhaya hua

Hota hai mehsoos kiyn mujhko saare raaz usse keh dun
Lagta hai jaise usko, hai meine aazmaaya hua

Daikho to aslam uski jheel si aankho mein
Ek anokha manzar jaise lagta hai itraya hua


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Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji....Behad achcha likha hai aapne....Dosti ek bohot haseen aur pakeezah jazba hai....Aapko aapka dost mubarak ho ! Khuda aapki dosti ko aur mazboot kare.
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2009, 03:37:29 PM »
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Again A Great Work From Ur Side Aslam Bhai, Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2009, 03:40:07 PM »
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wah wah Aslam JI bahoot khoob likha hai. Too Gud!
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2009, 04:10:24 PM »
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Bohat khoob Aslam..

Awwal awwal aise hi kuch halaat hote hain

Aur aakhir aakhir sirf sawalaat hote hain.....

-SG-
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2009, 05:56:30 PM »
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bhot omda kalam likha hay app nay aaina ji dad qabool ho
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«Reply #7 on: April 26, 2009, 10:57:47 PM »
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very nice aaina,beautiful,keep it up.
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«Reply #8 on: April 27, 2009, 12:29:35 AM »
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good work aaina ji
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2009, 05:34:47 AM »
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Quote from: Roja on April 26, 2009, 02:07:50 PM
Bahut pyara kalam likha hai aapne aaina ji.
Mubarak ho Naya Dost aapko.  Usual Smile

thnxxxx so much roja................
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«Reply #10 on: April 28, 2009, 05:42:41 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on April 26, 2009, 03:14:04 PM
Applause Applause Applause

Bohot Khoob Aslam Ji....Behad achcha likha hai aapne....Dosti ek bohot haseen aur pakeezah jazba hai....Aapko aapka dost mubarak ho ! Khuda aapki dosti ko aur mazboot kare.

shukriya celmira ji..........ji sahi kaha aapne ke ye ek bhut pakeezah jazba hai.........thnxxxxx
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«Reply #11 on: April 28, 2009, 05:44:08 AM »
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Quote from: Azeem on April 26, 2009, 03:37:29 PM
Again A Great Work From Ur Side Aslam Bhai, Yunhi Likhte rahiye,.

shukriya azeem sahab............yunhi saath nibhate rhiye....thnxxx so much ke aapne pasnd ki
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«Reply #12 on: April 28, 2009, 05:44:54 AM »
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Quote from: Sophi on April 26, 2009, 03:40:07 PM
wah wah Aslam JI bahoot khoob likha hai. Too Gud!

thnxxxxx sophi ji.......
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«Reply #13 on: April 28, 2009, 05:47:00 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on April 26, 2009, 04:10:24 PM
Bohat khoob Aslam..

Awwal awwal aise hi kuch halaat hote hain

Aur aakhir aakhir sirf sawalaat hote hain.....

-SG-

shukriya sajid sahab................
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«Reply #14 on: April 28, 2009, 05:48:05 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 26, 2009, 05:53:49 PM
Bahot khoob Aslam ji..very nice ashaars..apne lie to har koi likhta hai par doosron pe likhne vale kum hote hain..bahot acha likha hai aapne

thnxxxx so much kaash.................
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