Ek tera nam he.....jyuthika...

by jyuthika on October 21, 2013, 08:21:56 PM
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♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫

Ek tera nam he, jo rabka diya inam he,

Ek tera khayal he ,jo kar deta kamal he,

Ek teri bate he, jo ban jati khubsurat yade he,

Ek tera khvab he, jo dilko lage lajvab he,

Ek tera surur he , jo mera gurur he,

Ek teri yari he, jo hame sabse pyari he....

♫♫ & ♫♫ jyuthika ♫♫ & ♫♫

♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫ &♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫&♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫ & ♫♫
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2013, 08:25:48 PM »
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superb jyuthika ji waise jiske liye bhi likha khush naseeb hai woh very gud keep writing
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2013, 08:42:51 PM »
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Ek teri bate he, jo ban jati khubsurat yade he,

Ek tera khvab he, jo dilko lage lajvab he,



Nice One
Jyuthika ji.
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2013, 09:27:04 PM »
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zabardasht, dheron daaaad...
Ek tera khvab he, jo dilko lage lajvab he,

Ek tera surur he , jo mera gurur he,

Ek teri yari he, jo hame sabse pyari he....
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2013, 09:52:19 PM »
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kya baat hai bai ye to mere dilog se juda huaa hai

ek tera sath hai jo zindgi ka ahsaas hai.
ek tera ahsaas hai jo manjilo ka hisaab hai.
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2013, 10:11:43 PM »
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humari poem par bhi reply kar diya karo
aap itna achha likhte ho aap se reply pakar hum motivate honge.
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2013, 10:15:19 PM »
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Wah bahot achha likha hai aapne..

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«Reply #7 on: October 21, 2013, 10:37:22 PM »
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waah waah
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2013, 02:04:13 PM »
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2013, 02:35:21 PM »
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thanks thanks thanks to everyone, aap jisne bhi comment ki he aap sab bahot achha likhte ho, muje bhi achha. its my pleasure k muje aap sab logone encourage kiya. thanks a lot again.
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