*****ek wada*****

by kaushikbhawna008 on September 01, 2008, 04:49:45 AM
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E-mere dosto kuch to saath nibha jaao tum

saj rahi hai meri maiyat k ab to aajao tum

chali hoon aaj mein hokar ruksat is jahan se tumhare

ho sake to kandha mujhko laga jaao tum


aane se phel ek wadaa karna hoga

na royoge jam mujhe dafnaoge tum

bana kar mere lafzo ko adhuri si khushi

sada apne labo par sajaoge tum


waqt beete chahe jitna na yaad karna mujhe

ho sake to bas maaf karna mujhe

mujhpar kya beeti na unko bataoge tum

sach kehna dosto ye wada to nibhaoge tum


kati patang si meri zindgaani ho chali thi

unko kehna BHAWNA unki diwani ho chali thi

khwaab adhura lal jode mein mere sajne ka reh gaya

ab mujhe safed kafan se to sajaoge tum


sach kehna dosto ye wada to nibhaoge tum

ho sake to kandha mujhe bhi laga jaao tum
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«Reply #1 on: September 01, 2008, 06:18:31 AM »
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BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI Applause
KAUSHIK...
KEEP GOING...
BY. K.SHAEL
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«Reply #2 on: September 01, 2008, 06:20:43 AM »
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thnk u shally
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«Reply #3 on: September 01, 2008, 06:29:02 AM »
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kya baat hai wah
bhawna ji


Baadal
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«Reply #4 on: September 01, 2008, 06:29:33 AM »
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nice kaushik ji


gul
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«Reply #5 on: September 01, 2008, 06:33:38 AM »
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shukriya gulzar ji and baadal ji
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«Reply #6 on: September 01, 2008, 06:57:28 AM »
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 Applause very nice lines good one bhawna ji..
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«Reply #7 on: September 01, 2008, 07:08:09 AM »
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shukriya honeyrose ji
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«Reply #8 on: September 03, 2008, 05:07:47 PM »
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very sweet written accordingly bhawana sis
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«Reply #9 on: September 04, 2008, 07:47:11 AM »
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shukriya kanta
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