For Some Nice Persons And Friends Of Yoindia:Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry)

@kaash

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though everyone is friend there are some jinki posts hum zyada padhte hain aur jinka hamari post par bhi ana hota hai to obviously aur ache se samajhte hain,these persons sustain with the same id and promote everyone and they see the persona of poem as poem and write their poem in the same manner
but here i am writing mainly because they are nice persons and frnds

Pooja ji aajkal aapki kavita ke darshan nahi hote
kuch na kuch likhti raha kijie aisa nahi karte
Celmira ji aap kabhi to bahut aati hai kabhi nahi aati hai
likhti kum hain par hamesha hi aapki kavita umda hoti hai
Khwaish ji aap hamesha jaandaar aur shaandaar likhte rahe hain
par phir bhi hum reply me aapki kavita ko kum dekhte rahe hain
Sophi ji aajkal aap chup chup si rahti hain
likhti to zarur hain par shayad post nahi karti hain
Roja ji aapki hindi kavitayen achi lagti hain
Angel ji aapka collection hum sab roz padhte the
par aajkal tala laga hain vahan kabhi jokes bhi padhte the
Nikhaar ji aapki punjaabi kavitayen bhi achi lagin
phir bhi aap unhe zyada kyun nahi likhitin
Riyaaz ji aapka har tarah ki poem likhna prashanshneeya hai
har poem ka ache se padhna reply dena bhi prashanshneeya hai
dosti ke is upwan ko milke yun hi mahkate raho dosto
yehi dua hai hamesha khush raho jahan bhi raho dosto

thank u all
God bless u


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Re: For Some Nice Persons And Friends Of Yoindia

«Reply #1 on: March 28, 2010, 02:30:53 PM »

Aapki Yeh Dedications se bhari kavita bahut achi lagi kaashji..

Aur Aage se zaroor yeh koshish Hogi ke reply mein bhi koi kavita post ho,Pehle main reply mein hi zyaada post kiya karta tha..par ab woh pehle wali Jugal-bandi nahi rahi..isliye kam ho gaya hai..

Thankyou Soooooooooo Much!!!!


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Re: For Some Nice Persons And Friends Of Yoindia

«Reply #2 on: March 28, 2010, 03:09:21 PM »

TOoooooooo goooooooood kaash ji.....bahut bahut pyara likha aapne
Teh dil se shukriya kaash ji........ notworthy

Dil k jajbaat jab kalam k zariye kaagaz par utarte hai to waise hi likh jaati hu jo dil mein hota hai....jaisa aapne kha....punjabi mein likhne ki koshish jarur karugi.... icon_flower

God bless u too....... Usual Smile


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Talat

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Re: For Some Nice Persons And Friends Of Yoindia

«Reply #3 on: March 29, 2010, 02:41:16 PM »

Thank you so much Kaash Ji..... Applause

Kya kahun, kabhi kaam itna ziyada hota hai ki ek pal ko fursat nahin milti isiliye aana nahin ho paata..magar main kabhi bhi Yoindia se door nahin hoon...

Thank you so much, I will try to give more time here read2


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riyaz106

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Re: For Some Nice Persons And Friends Of Yoindia

«Reply #4 on: April 01, 2010, 05:29:03 AM »

Kaash ji aapka tahe dil se shukriya ke aapne mujhe yaad kiya.Ye to aapki zarranawazi hai varna khaksaar kis qabil hai. Aapne mere poem likhne ki bhi prashansa ki iske liye bhi shukriya. Mera manna hai thoda likho lekin achha likho. Bahut saari poems likhna kamaal nahi, achha likhna kamaal hai. Bas main yahi koshish karta hun. Kain saare shayar, kavi aise hain jo apni sirf ek rachna se amar ho gaye.

Aap bhi prashansa ke qabil hain ke ek se ek jwalant mudde uthate hain jo waqai chinta ka vishay hote hain aur aise samasyaon ka nidaan bahut zaroori hai varna bahut bade nuqsaan ka khatra hai.

Aapka phir se thanks.


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