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"Dost the phir bhi anjaan nikle tum,
Itne dhokhe khaye sabse shaitan nikle tum,
Kiya tha tujh par bahot bharosa,
Par kuch zyada hi beimaan nikle tum."
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«Reply #1 on: May 21, 2015, 05:19:18 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
waah waah waah waah kyaa kehne, bahut pyaari rachnaa hai...!!!


laakh  anjaano  mein  ek aur anjaanaa niklaa
jise dost samjhaa,  woh  to  begaanaa niklaa
hum to haqeeqat samajhke jee rahe the use
woh  bhi auron ki  tarhaa  ek afsaanaa niklaa
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«Reply #2 on: May 21, 2015, 07:34:43 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: May 21, 2015, 11:24:21 AM »
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Good but cud hv been lot better considering yr previous compositions. However one thing for sure it sounds n comes across as genuine. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: May 21, 2015, 11:53:20 AM »
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Quote from: vinery on May 21, 2015, 01:08:48 AM
"Dost the phir bhi anjaan nikle tum,
Itne dhokhe khaye sabse shaitan nikle tum,
Kiya tha tujh par bahot bharosa,
Par kuch zyada hi beimaan nikle tum."

main to hamesha ki shaitaan hoon per beimaan nahin icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #5 on: May 21, 2015, 01:01:04 PM »
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waah waah kyaa baat khoob
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«Reply #6 on: May 21, 2015, 02:39:30 PM »
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Quote from: vinery on May 21, 2015, 01:08:48 AM
"Dost the phir bhi anjaan nikle tum,
Itne dhokhe khaye sabse shaitan nikle tum,
Kiya tha tujh par bahot bharosa,
Par kuch zyada hi beimaan nikle tum."
Kyaa baat hai Vinery Jee bahut khoobsurat likhaa hai aapne, daad with Rau.
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«Reply #7 on: May 21, 2015, 03:48:02 PM »
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Thank you so much everyone.
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Kyaa baat hai Vinery Jee bahut khoobsurat likhaa hai aapne, daad with Rau.
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Thank you so much for Rau.
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«Reply #9 on: May 21, 2015, 04:18:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bohat bohat umda peshkash waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh daaaaaaaaaddddddd keep writing
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«Reply #10 on: May 21, 2015, 04:25:32 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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bohat bohat umda peshkash waaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh daaaaaaaaaddddddd keep writing
Thank you so much.
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«Reply #11 on: May 22, 2015, 03:05:43 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: May 24, 2015, 03:50:48 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thank you so much.
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