Ghazal : Mere bichre hue saathi !

by khalidrawat on February 15, 2008, 08:20:22 AM
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Mujhe phir yaad aate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi
Lahoo mujh ko rulate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Mere takleef se hoti the un ko jo pareshaani
Usi ke yaad laate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Usi mehfil mai.N jis ki yaad se mujh ko muhabbat he
Abhi bhi khench late hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Shanaasa haal se mere wo mujh se bhi zayaada hai.N
Mujhe khud se milate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Unhai.N shamo-sahar mai.N bhi hamesha yaad rakhta hoo.N
Mujhe kab bhool pate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Bula leta hoo.N akser khaab mai.N maazi ki yaadoo.N ko
Mujhe jab yaad aate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Kabhi jo neend aa jaye tu khaboo.N mai.N mere aaker
Mujhe pehroo.N sulate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Khalid Jamil Rawat
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«Reply #1 on: February 15, 2008, 10:35:44 AM »
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bahut acche khalid
aapne apni shayari se hume bhi apne doston ki
purani bhuli hui saari yaadein yaad aa gayi
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«Reply #2 on: February 15, 2008, 10:52:20 AM »
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Very Nice Khalid....
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«Reply #3 on: March 08, 2008, 08:17:40 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on February 15, 2008, 10:35:44 AM
bahut acche khalid
aapne apni shayari se hume bhi apne doston ki
purani bhuli hui saari yaadein yaad aa gayi

bohut shukriya aap ki inayat ka
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«Reply #4 on: March 08, 2008, 08:21:46 AM »
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Quote from: diya786 on February 15, 2008, 10:35:44 AM
bahut acche khalid
aapne apni shayari se hume bhi apne doston ki
purani bhuli hui saari yaadein yaad aa gayi

bohut shukriya aap ki tawajjah ka , aur pasand ka ,
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«Reply #5 on: March 08, 2008, 10:12:08 AM »
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Quote from: khalidrawat on February 15, 2008, 08:20:22 AM
Mujhe phir yaad aate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi
Lahoo mujh ko rulate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Mere takleef se hoti the un ko jo pareshaani
Usi ke yaad laate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Usi mehfil mai.N jis ki yaad se mujh ko muhabbat he
Abhi bhi khench late hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Shanaasa haal se mere wo mujh se bhi zayaada hai.N
Mujhe khud se milate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Unhai.N shamo-sahar mai.N bhi hamesha yaad rakhta hoo.N
Mujhe kab bhool pate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Bula leta hoo.N akser khaab mai.N maazi ki yaadoo.N ko
Mujhe jab yaad aate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Kabhi jo neend aa jaye tu khaboo.N mai.N mere aaker
Mujhe pehroo.N sulate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Khalid Jamil Rawat


Beautiful....aap ki ghazlon se bohot seekhne ko milta hai Khalid Sahab...aise hi yahan likhte rahiyega.
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«Reply #6 on: November 18, 2009, 04:59:28 PM »
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 Applause Dear bhai, aapke sher dil ko chhoo gaye, do lines aapki zameen mein kahin hain:

Khushi ke saath gham bhi hain, hansi ke saath aansu bhi
Mujhe jeena sikhate hain mere bichre hue saathi
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«Reply #7 on: November 18, 2009, 05:41:58 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Khalid ji,very beautiful gazal,lovely creation.excellent Thumbs UP Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: December 21, 2010, 03:10:00 PM »
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bohat zbrdst,mujhay b apne frndz yad aa gaye.
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«Reply #9 on: January 20, 2011, 10:16:01 AM »
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Aik bahut hi khoobsurat takhleeq. Aap to janab bahut achchha kahte haiN. Ye main ne aapki pahli kaawish paRhi, aap ne impress kiya. Aisi purmaghz kaawish par hazaroN daad qubul kijiye.

(Waquif Ansari)

Quote from: khalidrawat on February 15, 2008, 08:20:22 AM
Mujhe phir yaad aate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi
Lahoo mujh ko rulate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Mere takleef se hoti the un ko jo pareshaani
Usi ke yaad laate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Usi mehfil mai.N jis ki yaad se mujh ko muhabbat he
Abhi bhi khench late hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Shanaasa haal se mere wo mujh se bhi zayaada hai.N
Mujhe khud se milate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Unhai.N shamo-sahar mai.N bhi hamesha yaad rakhta hoo.N
Mujhe kab bhool pate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Bula leta hoo.N akser khaab mai.N maazi ki yaadoo.N ko
Mujhe jab yaad aate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Kabhi jo neend aa jaye tu khaboo.N mai.N mere aaker
Mujhe pehroo.N sulate hai.N mere bichre hue saathi

Khalid Jamil Rawat
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«Reply #10 on: January 22, 2011, 10:48:56 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: May 06, 2014, 05:47:57 AM »
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thanks to my friends.
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