Hume Dosti Nibhani na aai!!!

by Pooja on July 11, 2008, 08:45:51 PM
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Shayad "Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry)" main yah mera pahla thread hoga, na kabhi koi mera dost bana, na he shayd maine kabhi kisi ko apna dost banaya!! Yahi wajah lagti hai ki maine is section main shayd he kabhi kuch likha ho!!

Magar ajj aise he kisi baat per man mai kuch lines aa gai, pahle socha Misc. mai likh du.. magar dosti per hai to yahi likh rahi hu.

Na jaane kaise chali yah purwaai
Hume dosti nibhani na aai

Bigade hue the kal tak sabhi dosto ke pyar se
Barso phir ek lambi tanha zindagi beetai

Loute hai to bhool gaye her ek rishte ko
Ajnabipan ki bhawna, her taraf maine paai

Chah kar bhi na jhooth hum kabhi kah sake
Na puch suchai per rah kar, kaise hai zindagi beetai

Such aor jhooth ke dorahein main itna he kaha ki na puch kuch
Bas itani si baat per, dost ne apne dil ko hai thokar lagaai

Badi himmat se kholi thi ek choti se khirki khushio ki taraf
Lo humne phir se band kar, ander se chitkani lagai

Na jaane kaise chali yah purwaai
Hume dosti nibhani na aai…….
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«Reply #1 on: July 11, 2008, 09:49:56 PM »
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Chalti hai hava par rukti nahin kabhi,,
Yeh dosti hava hai jo toot-ti nahin kabhi,,

Doston ne jab hamen itni muhabbat di,,
Bhool gaye hum ki hain hum bhi ajnabi..

Hum bar bar aaye bin manaaye yahan par,,
Yahi baat man men thi shayad ghalti hai apni..

Kuchh raaz hain agar, par ki thi dosti,,
Phir dosti men kya sachi aur kya jhooti..

Dekho zara haqeeqat aur daana bano tum,,
Thhukrao nahin dosti ko yun Dahleez se apni..

Jab khol diye saare dosti ke darvaaze,,
Ab unko band karne ki karna nahin ghalti..

Milte hain dost aap jaise khush naseebon ko,,
Aap se hai dosti hamari badi khatti meethhi si..


|Syed Naami|

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Aap ke is andaaz-e-bayaan ko dekh buhat dil bhar aaya aur kuchh kahne ki himmat jutaai,,, bas aap qabool farmaaiye...
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«Reply #2 on: July 11, 2008, 11:28:04 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 11, 2008, 08:45:51 PM

Na jaane kaise chali yah purwaai
Hume dosti nibhani na aai

Bigade hue the kal tak sabhi dosto ke pyar se
Barso phir ek lambi tanha zindagi beetai

Loute hai to bhool gaye her ek rishte ko
Ajnabipan ki bhawna, her taraf maine paai

Chah kar bhi na jhooth hum kabhi kah sake
Na puch suchai per rah kar, kaise hai zindagi beetai

Such aor jhooth ke dorahein main itna he kaha ki na puch kuch
Bas itani si baat per, dost ne apne dil ko hai thokar lagaai

Badi himmat se kholi thi ek choti se khirki khushio ki taraf
Lo humne phir se band kar, ander se chitkani lagai

Na jaane kaise chali yah purwaai
Hume dosti nibhani na aai…….

Subhaanallah!
Ye andaaz ye naye naye alfaaz yuN jazbaat meN aap ka behte jaana, bohot hi khoooooooob he, ek naya andaaz he magar dil ki aawaaz lagti he, duaa karta huN aap ko apnaa dost marzii ke mutabiq mile, or mit jaaye dil ke saare gile, hameN bhi apnaa dost hi jaaniye.

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«Reply #3 on: July 12, 2008, 02:47:14 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause bahoot khoob likha hai aapne..in do line ne to dil ko choo liya....

Bigade hue the kal tak sabhi dosto ke pyar se
Barso phir ek lambi tanha zindagi beetai

Loute hai to bhool gaye her ek rishte ko
Ajnabipan ki bhawna, her taraf maine paai
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«Reply #4 on: July 12, 2008, 02:51:18 AM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 11, 2008, 09:49:56 PM
Chalti hai hava par rukti nahin kabhi,,
Yeh dosti hava hai jo toot-ti nahin kabhi,,

Doston ne jab hamen itni muhabbat di,,
Bhool gaye hum ki hain hum bhi ajnabi..

Hum bar bar aaye bin manaaye yahan par,,
Yahi baat man men thi shayad ghalti hai apni..

Kuchh raaz hain agar, par ki thi dosti,,
Phir dosti men kya sachi aur kya jhooti..

Dekho zara haqeeqat aur daana bano tum,,
Thhukrao nahin dosti ko yun Dahleez se apni..

Jab khol diye saare dosti ke darvaaze,,
Ab unko band karne ki karna nahin ghalti..

Milte hain dost aap jaise khush naseebon ko,,
Aap se hai dosti hamari badi khatti meethhi si..


|Syed Naami|

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Aap ke is andaaz-e-bayaan ko dekh buhat dil bhar aaya aur kuchh kahne ki himmat jutaai,,, bas aap qabool farmaaiye...


bahoot sahi salah and nice reply......sadhe hue shabdon me ....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2008, 02:55:50 AM »
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pahle do line hi itani taqtwar hain ki aur kuch kahne ki zaroorat hi nahi....bahoot khoob randeri sahab..... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2008, 05:39:29 AM »
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AAP NE APNE DIL KI BAAT BAHUT HI KHUBSURATI SE PESH KIYA HAIN.LAAJAWAB

TWO THINGS I WOULD LIKE TO SHARE WITH YOU MY FRIEND

ONE HURTS YOU SO THAT YOU CAN FIND SOMEONE WHO HEALS YOU. IF NO ONE HURTS YOU YOU WOULD NEVER KNOW WHO CARES FOR YOU.

SECOND IS THE BEST KIND OF FRIEND IS ONE WITH WHOM YOU SIT ON A BENCH SAYING NOTHING AND WHEN YOU GET UP AND GO, YOU FEEL YOU HAD THE BEST CONVERSATION OF YOUR LIFE.
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2008, 07:00:03 AM »
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Subhan Allah..La-Jawaab..La-Raib

Is Yoindia Me Agar Kisi Ko Shayri-e-Dost Padhni Ho To..

Pooja Ji
Bhai Syed
Sayyid Saab...A'ala Paaoge Sub Main..

Waah Kya Khoob Likhte Ye Shoa'ra Hazraat..

Aur Waise Bhi..Bhai Syed,sayyid Saab,Bhai Azeem,bekarar ji,abd ji,
Ek Se Badhkar Ek..A'ala se a'ala Kalaam Pesh Karte Hai...

Wo Alfaaz Inki Kalam Se Rawaa'n Dawaa'n Har Dam Rehte Hai Ki..Jiska Main Taswwur Bhi Nahi Kar Sakta Kabhi..!!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2008, 11:05:24 AM »
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Quote from: ANKIT RAO on July 12, 2008, 05:39:29 AM
AAP NE APNE DIL KI BAAT BAHUT HI KHUBSURATI SE PESH KIYA HAIN.LAAJAWAB

TWO THINGS I WOULD LIKE TO SHARE WITH YOU MY FRIEND

ONE HURTS YOU SO THAT YOU CAN FIND SOMEONE WHO HEALS YOU. IF NO ONE HURTS YOU YOU WOULD NEVER KNOW WHO CARES FOR YOU.

SECOND IS THE BEST KIND OF FRIEND IS ONE WITH WHOM YOU SIT ON A BENCH SAYING NOTHING AND WHEN YOU GET UP AND GO, YOU FEEL YOU HAD THE BEST CONVERSATION OF YOUR LIFE.

Well said my friend...
The second thing is heart touching point...
But only conversations does not prove one as a best friend... The one who stood firm with you in good and bad situations is a real friend...
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2008, 11:10:47 AM »
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Quote from: Muhammed on July 12, 2008, 07:00:03 AM
Subhan Allah..La-Jawaab..La-Raib

Is Yoindia Me Agar Kisi Ko Shayri-e-Dost Padhni Ho To..

Pooja Ji
Bhai Syed
Sayyid Saab...A'ala Paaoge Sub Main..

Waah Kya Khoob Likhte Ye Shoa'ra Hazraat..

Aur Waise Bhi..Bhai Syed,sayyid Saab,Bhai Azeem,bekarar ji,abd ji,
Ek Se Badhkar Ek..A'ala se a'ala Kalaam Pesh Karte Hai...

Wo Alfaaz Inki Kalam Se Rawaa'n Dawaa'n Har Dam Rehte Hai Ki..Jiska Main Taswwur Bhi Nahi Kar Sakta Kabhi..!!!

Raza bhai,,, kahte hain na ki dil se nikli baat jab zubaan par na ruke to sukhanvari men khud-ba-khud tabdeel ho jaati hai...
Bas aisa hi kuchh apna haal hai...
Aap ki be-intaha haosla afzai ka jitna bhi shukriya ada karun kam hai...
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2008, 01:14:07 PM »
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SYEDNAAMI JI MERE KEHNE KA MATLAB THA KI JO BIN KAHE BAAT AUR HAAL KO SAMAJH JAYE WOHI SACHA DOST HAIN.BUT IF YOU THINK THE LINE IS COMPLETE THEN THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLETION.AAJ SE MERA EK AUR DOST BANGAYA WOH AAP HO.I WILL BE HAPPY TO HAVE YOUR COMMENTS ON CORRECTION OF MY LINES.
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2008, 02:10:39 PM »
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Bahoot Khoob Pooja Ji And Syed Saahib. Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2008, 04:52:50 PM »
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Mr. Sammual,,, Thanks a lot but Syed Saahibaan kahiye... do jo hain...

Quote from: ANKIT RAO on July 12, 2008, 01:14:07 PM
SYEDNAAMI JI MERE KEHNE KA MATLAB THA KI JO BIN KAHE BAAT AUR HAAL KO SAMAJH JAYE WOHI SACHA DOST HAIN.BUT IF YOU THINK THE LINE IS COMPLETE THEN THANK YOU FOR THE COMPLETION.AAJ SE MERA EK AUR DOST BANGAYA WOH AAP HO.I WILL BE HAPPY TO HAVE YOUR COMMENTS ON CORRECTION OF MY LINES.

Ankit chalo to ho jaaye,,, kuchh dhoom dhadaka...
And I had corrected nothing dear,,, just added something which I felt personally as a best thing to say...
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«Reply #13 on: July 13, 2008, 05:08:22 AM »
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pooja ji,

bahut sundar abhivyakti ki he aapne.

naami ji,

bahut sadha hua likha he aapne mitr.

Prateek
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«Reply #14 on: July 13, 2008, 02:54:14 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 12, 2008, 02:55:50 AM
pahle do line hi itani taqtwar hain ki aur kuch kahne ki zaroorat hi nahi....bahoot khoob randeri sahab..... Applause Applause Applause

Meherbaani bekarar bhai.

Aaj aap ka qalam khaamosh he?
Me ne andaza lagaya he ke hamenshaN sanjeedah mauzu'a aapa ka pasandeedah mauzu'a raha he.

khush rhaiye.

-: Sayyid :-
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