Hume Dosti Nibhani na aai!!!

by Pooja on July 11, 2008, 08:45:51 PM
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«Reply #45 on: July 18, 2008, 05:47:35 PM »
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Jab se yeh thread Pooja di start ki tab se padh toh rahi hun...
par yehan kuch kehne sahas joota nahi payi...
kyun k Pooja di..Atiq bhaiya (sayyid Randeri)..syed ji...
jaise shayaron ko wah wah karne ki kabil main nahi hun...
sab ko tahe dil se salam karti hun...
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«Reply #46 on: July 18, 2008, 08:17:55 PM »
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Apne Andar Ki Khusboo se hi kaam le,
Man Mein Khilte hue Phool Ka hi naam le...

hamesha sirf Apno ko liye hi apna haath na badha,
Kabhi Gairo ka Bhi haath thaam le...

Dushman Bhi dost ban jaayenge "khwaish"
Sab KI Suun, har ek se mohabbat ka paigaam le...

Tujhe Rote Dekh kar, Dusra Bhi Ro Padhe,
Har ek se itna pyaar aur samaan le...

Kabh Tak Insaan Chalte rahega yuhi
Dil mein Gile aur shikwe liye...
Mita de har uss sawaal ko jo
tere apno se tujhe door karta hai,

Kat chuki hai bahut si zindagi apni,
Inn Betuki Baaton mein "Khwaish"
Ab to Vishraam le....

Apne Andar ke Khusboo se hi kaam le,
Man mein khilte hue phool ka hi naam le....
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«Reply #47 on: July 18, 2008, 08:19:31 PM »
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Quote from: punam on July 18, 2008, 05:47:35 PM
Jab se yeh thread Pooja di start ki tab se padh toh rahi hun...
par yehan kuch kehne sahas joota nahi payi...
kyun k Pooja di..Atiq bhaiya (sayyid Randeri)..syed ji...
jaise shayaron ko wah wah karne ki kabil main nahi hun...
sab ko tahe dil se salam karti hun...


tahe dil se shukaria. Punam mai apki kavitaye takriban roj he oadti hu... app bahoot acha likhti hai.. yaha bhi likhegi to mujhko dil se khushi hogi!!
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«Reply #48 on: July 18, 2008, 08:22:34 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 18, 2008, 08:17:55 PM
Apne Andar Ki Khusboo se hi kaam le,
Man Mein Khilte hue Phool Ka hi naam le...

hamesha sirf Apno ko liye hi apna haath na badha,
Kabhi Gairo ka Bhi haath thaam le...

Dushman Bhi dost ban jaayenge "khwaish"
Sab KI Suun, har ek se mohabbat ka paigaam le...

Tujhe Rote Dekh kar, Dusra Bhi Ro Padhe,
Har ek se itna pyaar aur samaan le...

Kabh Tak Insaan Chalte rahega yuhi
Dil mein Gile aur shikwe liye...
Mita de har uss sawaal ko jo
tere apno se tujhe door karta hai,

Kat chuki hai bahut si zindagi apni,
Inn Betuki Baaton mein "Khwaish"
Ab to Vishraam le....

Apne Andar ke Khusboo se hi kaam le,
Man mein khilte hue phool ka hi naam le....



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bahoot khoob khwaish ji... bahoot intzaar karwaya apne.. bahoot acha laga apki is kavita ko pard kar!!
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«Reply #49 on: July 18, 2008, 08:26:21 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 18, 2008, 08:17:55 PM

Kabh Tak Insaan Chalte rahega yuhi
Dil mein Gile aur shikwe liye...
Mita de har uss sawaal ko jo
tere apno se tujhe door karta hai,



Kab Tak Insaan Chalte Rahega Yunhi...Dil main Gile aur Shikwe Liye...Waaah Bohot Khoob..behtareen peshkash Khwaish  Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #50 on: July 18, 2008, 08:32:47 PM »
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Ek dost hai hamara,,
Par woh kahta nahin kuchh,,
Baat nahin koi bhi,,
Par rahta kyun hai chup..

Poochhne ko to poochh len,,
Kyun mere liye nahin alfaaz,,
Ya buri lagi unko koi baat,,
Jaante nahin hain hum asbaab..

Milte bhi roz hain,,
Par karke nazar andaaz,,
Kahte nahin hain dono,,
Kyun hum khafa hain yaar..

Hum to thhahre naasamajh,,
Par woh to hain ustaad,,
Shaagird ko daantenge to,,
Sudhar jaayengi hamari harkaat..

|Syed Naami|
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«Reply #51 on: July 19, 2008, 04:00:18 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 18, 2008, 03:13:16 PM
muhammed saab bahut afsos ke saath yeh Baat kehni padh rahi hai ki aapne iss khoobsurat thread ko apni soch Ke Zariye kahan se kahan le gaye..

poojaji, syednaami saab, randeri saab ne bahut khoob kaha..aur hum sab ne milkar iss baat ki tareef ki par jo aap yeh likh rahe ho,yeh sab kya hai???

agar celmira ne yeh kaha ki yahan par aur bhi ache shayar hai to KYA GALAT KAHAN???

aapne jo yeh lambi explanation di,iss mein kahin bhi iss baat ko related koi jawab naa tha..aapne yeh baat ko kuch aur hi rang de diya..

umeed karta hoon ki aap yeh baat samjhe!!!

celmira  aapki jo baaton ko highlight kar muhammed saab ne jo yeh likha hai,
sirf aapko itna keh sakta hoon



"GHALIB" BURA NA MAAN VAAYAZ BURA KAHEIN

AISA BHI KOI HAI JO SIRF ACHA KAHE.......

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Maaf Kigiyega...Main aap sub Log Jitna To Shayari Main Perfect Nahi Hoon..Jo Bhi Maine Kaha.." Wo Meri Imaani Soch " Thi.
Shayad Tabhi To Sabse Alag Thi.Main Celmira Ji Se Maafi Mangta Hun..Shayad Unhe Bura Laga Hoga.
Main Jald Hi Meri Reply Waapis Le Leta Hun.
Aur Aapka Ye Khubsoorat Thread Tha..Aur Rahegaa Bhi..INsha allah
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«Reply #52 on: July 19, 2008, 01:33:06 PM »
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Raza bhai,,,
SubhanAllah,,, aapka yeh qadam buhat achha laga... Mazeed guftagoo ke liye rujoo karenge...
Dua keejiye...
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«Reply #53 on: July 23, 2008, 12:07:09 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 18, 2008, 08:22:34 PM
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bahoot khoob khwaish ji... bahoot intzaar karwaya apne.. bahoot acha laga apki is kavita ko pard kar!!

Teh dil se shukriya aapka pooja..aapko humare poetry ka intezar tha, yeh jaankar behad khushi hui.. shukriya..
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«Reply #54 on: July 23, 2008, 12:10:53 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 18, 2008, 08:26:21 PM
Kab Tak Insaan Chalte Rahega Yunhi...Dil main Gile aur Shikwe Liye...Waaah Bohot Khoob..behtareen peshkash Khwaish  Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Celmira Aapka...
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«Reply #55 on: July 25, 2008, 05:32:26 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 18, 2008, 08:32:47 PM
Ek dost hai hamara,,
Par woh kahta nahin kuchh,,
Baat nahin koi bhi,,
Par rahta kyun hai chup..

Poochhne ko to poochh len,,
Kyun mere liye nahin alfaaz,,
Ya buri lagi unko koi baat,,
Jaante nahin hain hum asbaab..

Milte bhi roz hain,,
Par karke nazar andaaz,,
Kahte nahin hain dono,,
Kyun hum khafa hain yaar..

Hum to thhahre naasamajh,,
Par woh to hain ustaad,,
Shaagird ko daantenge to,,
Sudhar jaayengi hamari harkaat..

|Syed Naami|


BAHOOT KHOOB SAMI!!
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«Reply #56 on: July 26, 2008, 03:20:02 PM »
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Pooja jee aap ne pasand kya buhat achha laga...
Shukriya...
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«Reply #57 on: July 26, 2008, 05:41:28 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 11, 2008, 08:45:51 PM
Shayad "Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry)" main yah mera pahla thread hoga, na kabhi koi mera dost bana, na he shayd maine kabhi kisi ko apna dost banaya!! Yahi wajah lagti hai ki maine is section main shayd he kabhi kuch likha ho!!

Magar ajj aise he kisi baat per man mai kuch lines aa gai, pahle socha Misc. mai likh du.. magar dosti per hai to yahi likh rahi hu.

Na jaane kaise chali yah purwaai
Hume dosti nibhani na aai

Bigade hue the kal tak sabhi dosto ke pyar se
Barso phir ek lambi tanha zindagi beetai

Loute hai to bhool gaye her ek rishte ko
Ajnabipan ki bhawna, her taraf maine paai

Chah kar bhi na jhooth hum kabhi kah sake
Na puch suchai per rah kar, kaise hai zindagi beetai

Such aor jhooth ke dorahein main itna he kaha ki na puch kuch
Bas itani si baat per, dost ne apne dil ko hai thokar lagaai

Badi himmat se kholi thi ek choti se khirki khushio ki taraf
Lo humne phir se band kar, ander se chitkani lagai

Na jaane kaise chali yah purwaai
Hume dosti nibhani na aai…….

Wah wah bahut khoob Pooja didi Applause  Applause
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«Reply #58 on: July 26, 2008, 05:44:10 PM »
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Quote from: syednaami on July 11, 2008, 09:49:56 PM
Chalti hai hava par rukti nahin kabhi,,
Yeh dosti hava hai jo toot-ti nahin kabhi,,

Doston ne jab hamen itni muhabbat di,,
Bhool gaye hum ki hain hum bhi ajnabi..

Hum bar bar aaye bin manaaye yahan par,,
Yahi baat man men thi shayad ghalti hai apni..

Kuchh raaz hain agar, par ki thi dosti,,
Phir dosti men kya sachi aur kya jhooti..

Dekho zara haqeeqat aur daana bano tum,,
Thhukrao nahin dosti ko yun Dahleez se apni..

Jab khol diye saare dosti ke darvaaze,,
Ab unko band karne ki karna nahin ghalti..

Milte hain dost aap jaise khush naseebon ko,,
Aap se hai dosti hamari badi khatti meethhi si..


|Syed Naami|

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Aap ke is andaaz-e-bayaan ko dekh buhat dil bhar aaya aur kuchh kahne ki himmat jutaai,,, bas aap qabool farmaaiye...


Very good Syid ji.. Daad hazir hai kabul farmayiyega
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«Reply #59 on: July 26, 2008, 05:46:37 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on July 18, 2008, 08:17:55 PM
Apne Andar Ki Khusboo se hi kaam le,
Man Mein Khilte hue Phool Ka hi naam le...

hamesha sirf Apno ko liye hi apna haath na badha,
Kabhi Gairo ka Bhi haath thaam le...

Dushman Bhi dost ban jaayenge "khwaish"
Sab KI Suun, har ek se mohabbat ka paigaam le...

Tujhe Rote Dekh kar, Dusra Bhi Ro Padhe,
Har ek se itna pyaar aur samaan le...

Kabh Tak Insaan Chalte rahega yuhi
Dil mein Gile aur shikwe liye...
Mita de har uss sawaal ko jo
tere apno se tujhe door karta hai,

Kat chuki hai bahut si zindagi apni,
Inn Betuki Baaton mein "Khwaish"
Ab to Vishraam le....

Apne Andar ke Khusboo se hi kaam le,
Man mein khilte hue phool ka hi naam le....



Khwaish ji bahut dino ke baad bahut accha laga aapko padkar.
bahut accha likha hai aapne .. esp.. the following lines really very good to read.

Tujhe Rote Dekh kar, Dusra Bhi Ro Padhe,
Har ek se itna pyaar aur samaan le...

Kabh Tak Insaan Chalte rahega yuhi
Dil mein Gile aur shikwe liye...
Mita de har uss sawaal ko jo
tere apno se tujhe door karta hai,


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