Jaan Pehchaan

by sanchit on November 16, 2010, 08:28:51 AM
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Mana ki aap humen jaante nahi,
Kya hua gar aap humen pehchante nahi,
Ho jayegi jaan pehchan pehle dosti to kijiye,
Lijiye humari taraf se dosti ka najrana kubul kijiye,
Ho jaay dosti gar hum dono me to kya bura hai,
Ye to wo sundar rishta hai,
Jise bhagwan ne bahut pyar se buna hai,
Dosti me na to koi shart na koi samjhauta hai,
Aap humen bhaye hain dil se,
Isliye humne aapko dosti ke liye chuna hai,
Humen dost banana na banana,
Aapko pura ikhtiyaar hai,
Gar nahi banao dost to bhi koi gila nahi,
Kyunki humen aap par pura aitbaar hai.......
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«Reply #1 on: November 16, 2010, 09:19:32 AM »
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Nice one  Sanchit ji..... Applause Applause Applause
I disagree Sanchit....your paribhasha of jaan-pehchaan

Shakl dekh kay pal bhar me pehchaan hoti hai
Kisi ko jaan-ne ko tou saari umra kam hoti hai


Mana ki aap humen jaante nahi,
Kya hua gar aap humen pehchante nahi,
Ho jayegi jaan pehchan pehle dosti to kijiye,
Lijiye humari taraf se dosti ka najrana kubul kijiye,
Ho jaay dosti gar hum dono me to kya bura hai,
Ye to wo sundar rishta hai,
Jise bhagwan ne bahut pyar se buna hai,
Dosti me na to koi shart na koi samjhauta hai,
Aap humen bhaye hain dil se,
Isliye humne aapko dosti ke liye chuna hai,
Humen dost banana na banana,
Aapko pura ikhtiyaar hai,
Gar nahi banao dost to bhi koi gila nahi,
Kyunki humen aap par pura aitbaar hai.......
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«Reply #2 on: November 16, 2010, 09:58:33 AM »
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bahut badhiya sanchita jee..
nice lines of Jaan-pehchaan:)
i disagree to u Koyal--
shakl dekh kar hum pal bhar me parakh sakte hai kisi ko bhi,
gar ho aap me wo baat...
kisi ko jaanne me yun to saari umar kam hoti hai,
or kisi ko janne ke liye sirf ek pal hi kaafi hai,
gar ho aapka dil dimaag or parkhi nazar aapke saath...
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«Reply #3 on: May 27, 2014, 11:31:13 PM »
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Nice one  Sanchit ji..... Applause Applause Applause
I disagree Sanchit....your paribhasha of jaan-pehchaan

Shakl dekh kay pal bhar me pehchaan hoti hai
Kisi ko jaan-ne ko tou saari umra kam hoti hai


koyal ji first of all mai aapse deri se reply karne k liye maafi chahunga...
and shukriya for liking my post... jan ne pehchan ne mai bahut chota sa antar hota hai agar dekha jaay to...
Kabhi kabhi ham kisi ko barson se jante hain par us insaan ko pehchan ne me galti kar dete hain... shayad ab aap agree karen is ummeed se... shukriya...
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«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2014, 11:32:30 PM »
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bahut badhiya sanchita jee..
nice lines of Jaan-pehchaan:)
i disagree to u Koyal--
shakl dekh kar hum pal bhar me parakh sakte hai kisi ko bhi,
gar ho aap me wo baat...
kisi ko jaanne me yun to saari umar kam hoti hai,
or kisi ko janne ke liye sirf ek pal hi kaafi hai,
gar ho aapka dil dimaag or parkhi nazar aapke saath...

killbill ji deri k liye aap se bhi maafi chahunga... and thanks ki aapne meri post pasand ki and also for supporting me...
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