Jala Dena ..... (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on June 02, 2010, 10:31:36 AM
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HUM YAAD RAHEY TOH THEEK WARNA BHULA DENA
HO KOI KHATA HUMSEY TOH SAZA DENA
WAISEY HUM HAI KHALI KAGAZ KI TARAH
LIKHA JAYE TOH THEEK WARNA JALA DENA



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«Reply #1 on: June 02, 2010, 12:02:28 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI      JASBIR SINGH JI.....

APNE LAYAK SAMJHO TOH YAAD KAR LENA
NIKAMA SAMJHO TOH HAKAL DENA
WAISE HAM BHI DOST KAAM KE HAI
AAZMANA CHAHO TOH AAZMA LENA..
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«Reply #2 on: June 02, 2010, 01:04:58 PM »
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bahut khoob jasbir ji Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: June 03, 2010, 07:43:54 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on June 02, 2010, 01:04:58 PM
bahut khoob jasbir ji Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thanks Sheba Ji ....

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«Reply #4 on: June 03, 2010, 07:47:02 AM »
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Quote from: cara on June 02, 2010, 12:02:28 PM
WAH KYA BAAT HAI      JASBIR SINGH JI.....

APNE LAYAK SAMJHO TOH YAAD KAR LENA
NIKAMA SAMJHO TOH HAKAL DENA
WAISE HAM BHI DOST KAAM KE HAI
AAZMANA CHAHO TOH AAZMA LENA..

Thanks Cara Ji
and wah kya khoob kahi aap neh....


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«Reply #5 on: June 03, 2010, 08:56:13 AM »
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Nice lines Jasbirsingh-ji....keep writing....... Applause Applause Applause


Kore kagaz pe paigaam likh diya hai
Tumse agar padha jaye tou padh lena

Khata agar ho he gayee hai tumse tou
Khud apni sazaa tum tazveej kar lena




Quote from: jasbirsingh on June 02, 2010, 10:31:36 AM


HUM YAAD RAHEY TOH THEEK WARNA BHULA DENA
HO KOI KHATA HUMSEY TOH SAZA DENA
WAISEY HUM HAI KHALI KAGAZ KI TARAH
LIKHA JAYE TOH THEEK WARNA JALA DENA



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«Reply #6 on: June 03, 2010, 09:11:11 AM »
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Wah bahut baddiya Jas ji,great and marvelous creation,lovel lines by Cara ji and Koyal sis.excellent  Hats off to you!  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: June 03, 2010, 09:58:49 AM »
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Shukriya Madhu-di......

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«Reply #8 on: June 03, 2010, 12:50:58 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob Jasbir ji...!!!
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«Reply #9 on: June 04, 2010, 05:44:28 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 03, 2010, 08:56:13 AM
Nice lines Jasbirsingh-ji....keep writing....... Applause Applause Applause


Kore kagaz pe paigaam likh diya hai
Tumse agar padha jaye tou padh lena

Khata agar ho he gayee hai tumse tou
Khud apni sazaa tum tazveej kar lena






thanks Koyal Ji .... and wah kya baat hai .. bahut hi khoob kaha aap ney ...



PAIGAAM TOH SAB NEY LIKH HI DIYA HAI
KOREY KAGAZ PEH ILAAM TOH LIKH HI DIYA HAI
KHATA KI SAZA ABB SUNNEY KOH HAI BAKI
FANAA HONA HAI ABB TUM PAR, YEH LIKH HI DIYA HAI



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«Reply #10 on: June 04, 2010, 05:46:12 PM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 03, 2010, 09:11:11 AM
Wah bahut baddiya Jas ji,great and marvelous creation,lovel lines by Cara ji and Koyal sis.excellent  Hats off to you!  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause


thanks madhu ji

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«Reply #11 on: June 04, 2010, 05:46:48 PM »
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Quote from: klaskar on June 03, 2010, 12:50:58 PM
bahut bahut khoob Jasbir ji...!!!


thanks kalaskar ji

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«Reply #12 on: June 05, 2010, 11:59:20 AM »
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Thanks Jasbir-ji.....mera kaha pasand aayaa aapko....Shukriya

Paigaam tumne padh he liya hai
Tou mann hamaara jaan liya hai

Hum naa sunaa payenge sazza tumko
Fana hone ki sazza kyu mili hai tumko


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thanks Koyal Ji .... and wah kya baat hai .. bahut hi khoob kaha aap ney ...



PAIGAAM TOH SAB NEY LIKH HI DIYA HAI
KOREY KAGAZ PEH ILAAM TOH LIKH HI DIYA HAI
KHATA KI SAZA ABB SUNNEY KOH HAI BAKI
FANAA HONA HAI ABB TUM PAR, YEH LIKH HI DIYA HAI



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«Reply #13 on: June 05, 2010, 02:45:11 PM »
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Quote from: KOYAL46 on June 05, 2010, 11:59:20 AM
Thanks Jasbir-ji.....mera kaha pasand aayaa aapko....Shukriya

Paigaam tumne padh he liya hai
Tou mann hamaara jaan liya hai

Hum naa sunaa payenge sazza tumko
Fana hone ki sazza kyu mili hai tumko






wah wah wah , bahut hi khoob Koyal Ji ...



MANN TUMHARA HUM JAANTEY HAI
DIL MEH KYA HAI HUM JAANTEY HAI
PAR KAISEY REH PAYNGA MAIN YAHA
TUTEY DIL KA DARD HUM HI JAANTEY HAI



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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2010, 10:53:33 AM »
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Thanks a lot Jasbir-ji.... icon_flower

Aapne bhi khoob aap-beeti likhee hai.... Winking Winking Winking

Dil toot-ne ka dard yaar tum sahi-sahi jaante ho
Phir bhi dil fainkne ki aadat se nahi baaz aate ho

Koi saathee majburi mai kabhi Tumse judaa ho bhee jaaye
Mayoos mat hona tum bas uski yaad mai ek diya Jala Dena

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wah wah wah , bahut hi khoob Koyal Ji ...



MANN TUMHARA HUM JAANTEY HAI
DIL MEH KYA HAI HUM JAANTEY HAI
PAR KAISEY REH PAYNGA MAIN YAHA
TUTEY DIL KA DARD HUM HI JAANTEY HAI



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