Jin pe likha the ek din naam hamara ...* Usha Rajesh

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जिन पे लिखा था एक दिन नाम हमारा,खुद उन्होंने बडे रुआब से
बेरहमी से फाड दिए वही पन्ने दोस्तों ने,आज दोस्ती की किताब से
 
Jin pe likha the ek din naam hamara, khud unhon ne bade ruaab se
Berahmi se phad diye wahi panne doston ne, aaj dosti ki kitab se

तोड डाले तोहफे हमारे , जला के खाक कर दिए खत-ओ-किताबत
काश बता देते, क़र्ज़ हमारे प्यार का मगर, चुकायेंगे किस हिसाब से
  
Tod dale tohfe hamare,jala ke khak kar diye khat- o - kitaabat
kash bata dete, karz hamare pyar ka, magar chukayenge kis hisab se

              
                                         ----- Usha Rajesh Sharma
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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2011, 08:42:59 AM »
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Quote from: usha rajesh on October 12, 2011, 08:02:32 AM
जिन पे लिखा था एक दिन नाम हमारा,खुद उन्होंने बडे रुआब से
बेरहमी से फाड दिए वही पन्ने दोस्तों ने,आज दोस्ती की किताब से
 
Jin pe likha the ek din naam hamara, khud unhon ne bade ruaab se
Berahmi se phad diye wahi panne doston ne, aaj dosti ki kitab se

तोड डाले तोहफे हमारे , जला के खाक कर दिए खत-ओ-किताबत
काश बता देते, क़र्ज़ हमारे प्यार का मगर, चुकायेंगे किस हिसाब से
   
Tod dale tohfe hamare,jala ke khak kar diye khat- o - kitaabat
kash bata dete, karz hamare pyar ka, magar chukayenge kis hisab se

               
                                         ----- Usha Rajesh Sharma


Waah Waah waah Ushaji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil ko Chuu jaane Wale A'shaar Likhe Hai Aapne par Aap Kuch Aur A'shaaro ko Jodkar Isse Ek Mukammal Ghazal Ka Roop Dijiye..Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!

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Bashir Badr Saheb Ka Ek Sher Yaad Aaya Hai..


"Dushmani Jam Ke karo lekin Yeh Gunjaish Rahe!!!
 Jab kabhi  Dost Bane To Sharminda Naa Ho
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«Reply #2 on: October 12, 2011, 11:44:58 AM »
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bht bht khoooob usha ji...
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«Reply #3 on: October 12, 2011, 11:47:06 AM »
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usha rajesh ji,

Waah waah bahut khoob
keep it up..all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #4 on: October 12, 2011, 01:29:18 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 12, 2011, 08:42:59 AM

Waah Waah waah Ushaji..Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Aur Dil ko Chuu jaane Wale A'shaar Likhe Hai Aapne par Aap Kuch Aur A'shaaro ko Jodkar Isse Ek Mukammal Ghazal Ka Roop Dijiye..Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bashir Badr Saheb Ka Ek Sher Yaad Aaya Hai..


"Dushmani Jam Ke karo lekin Yeh Gunjaish Rahe!!!
 Jab kabhi  Dost Bane To Sharminda Naa Ho

Bahut bahut Shukriya, Khwaish ji.

Bahut khoobsurat sher hai Bashir Badra ji ka.Share karne ke liye thanx.

In lines ko mukammal gazal ka roop dene ki apki khwahish ko puri karne ki zaroor koshish karoongi.
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«Reply #5 on: October 12, 2011, 01:31:40 PM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on October 12, 2011, 11:44:58 AM
bht bht khoooob usha ji...

Manzil-e-ishq Ji,

Hosla afjai ka shukriya.
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«Reply #6 on: October 12, 2011, 01:33:14 PM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 12, 2011, 11:47:06 AM
usha rajesh ji,

Waah waah bahut khoob
keep it up..all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'


Shukla ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya.
Aage bhi Yun hi hosla afjai karte rahiyega.
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«Reply #7 on: October 13, 2011, 05:47:03 AM »
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Quote from: usha rajesh on October 12, 2011, 08:02:32 AM
जिन पे लिखा था एक दिन नाम हमारा,खुद उन्होंने बडे रुआब से
बेरहमी से फाड दिए वही पन्ने दोस्तों ने,आज दोस्ती की किताब से
 
Jin pe likha the ek din naam hamara, khud unhon ne bade ruaab se
Berahmi se phad diye wahi panne doston ne, aaj dosti ki kitab se

तोड डाले तोहफे हमारे , जला के खाक कर दिए खत-ओ-किताबत
काश बता देते, क़र्ज़ हमारे प्यार का मगर, चुकायेंगे किस हिसाब से
   
Tod dale tohfe hamare,jala ke khak kar diye khat- o - kitaabat
kash bata dete, karz hamare pyar ka, magar chukayenge kis hisab se

               
                                         ----- Usha Rajesh Sharma

ACHCHE ASHAAA'R HAIN . USHA JI ISE MOQAMMAL GHAZAL KA JAMAA PAHNAIEYE. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: October 13, 2011, 07:02:26 AM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on October 13, 2011, 05:47:03 AM
ACHCHE ASHAAA'R HAIN . USHA JI ISE MOQAMMAL GHAZAL KA JAMAA PAHNAIEYE. Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Adil ji,
Shukriya. Koshish jari hai.
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«Reply #9 on: October 13, 2011, 07:13:45 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley,,,,sabhi aasaar nayab hain ...usha rajesh.ji..daad kabul kaen
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Quote from: sunildehgawani on October 13, 2011, 07:13:45 AM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley,,,,sabhi aasaar nayab hain ...usha rajesh...daad kabul kaen

Sunil ji,
Hosla afjai ka bahut bahut shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: October 13, 2011, 07:23:35 AM »
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Bahut khoob Usha ji,
bas likhti rahe, u've tremendous potential.
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«Reply #12 on: October 29, 2011, 04:39:42 PM »
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nice creation usha ji...keep writing.
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Quote from: samir_bc on October 29, 2011, 04:39:42 PM
nice creation usha ji...keep writing.

Samir ji,
Bahut bahut shukriya.
Plz read full version if u get time posted with title in Hindi
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«Reply #14 on: October 29, 2011, 06:30:25 PM »
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Bahut khoob Usha Ji
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