Kaash tum na roothtey....mkv -Panna 2:Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry)

dolly

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«Reply #15 on: March 02, 2012, 07:24:36 PM »

Quote from: mkv on February 27, 2012, 12:43:51 PM

Mai ek nanha sa panchee
Abhi abhi udna seekha hai
Meri bhi chahat hai
Door aasmaan me udne kee
Mera pyara dost
Jisne mujhe udna sikhaaya
Na jaane kyo mujhse naaraj hai?
Kab tak karoon mai uska intijaar
Har samay khayaal tha usko mera
Mujhe to rishto ki samajh bhi nahi hai
Kya koi yu’n roothta hai?
Mujhe hi kuch karna hoga
Dhoond kar maafi mangni hogi
Lekin aasman me kitna khatra hai?
Kahi mujhe kuch ho gaya to?
Maa se poochun kya jaane se pahle?
Nahi . vo mujhe jaane nahi degi.
Chupchaap jaana hoga.
Chee..mai nahi darta..kal subah niklunga mai..
Neend bhi nahi aa rahi hai..
Suraj nikal aaya hai..accha maa..mujhe maaf karna?
Neeche ..vo kahi nahi dikh raha hai
Kitni der ho gayee...uska kuch pata nahi
Thak gaya hu mai..pukar pukar kar
Mai vapas nahi lautunga..
Koi aa raha hai meri taraf..teji se neeche..
Kya karun? Usne mujhe pakad liya hai…
Ashaay hu mai dost..dekho mere antim Aansu
mai saccha tha dost..kaash tum na roothtey…..

Very touching mkvji..awsome


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mkv

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Re: Kaash tum na roothtey....mkv

«Reply #16 on: March 03, 2012, 02:00:07 PM »

Quote from: Nysha on March 01, 2012, 02:09:27 PM

Kya baat hai MkV ji bahoot Bahoot Khoob Likha hai .. !!!

Thanks Nysha ji


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mkv

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Re: Kaash tum na roothtey....mkv

«Reply #17 on: March 03, 2012, 04:42:45 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on March 01, 2012, 02:24:41 PM

Freestyle likhna ek aisi ada hai, jo bahaut kam logon kay paas hoti hai dost..
Main kitni koshish karta hoon aisa kuch likhne ki mager nahin hota..
Bahaut bahaut accha likha hai apne..
Akhri line, badi achi lagi mujhe..'Main sacha tha..'
Clapping Smiley

Apke saath, meri dua rahegi..
Khush rahiye..!

Rahim ji
aapne jo bhi compliments diye hai ve bahut bahut jyada hai aur aapki dariyadili ka suboot bhi. khushiyoN ko baatna aur duayen dene vaale insaan ke chand lamhoN ka ssath bade khushnaseeboN ko milta hai.
likhte likhte haath rik gaye hai, hatheliya oopar ki taraf..aapke liye..
Khush rahiye..aabaad rahiye..


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mkv

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Re: Kaash tum na roothtey....mkv

«Reply #18 on: March 04, 2012, 07:39:35 AM »

Quote from: dolly on March 02, 2012, 07:24:36 PM

Very touching mkvji..awsome

Thanks Dolly ji


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