KAVITA KA KOI ROOP.........(GHAYEL)

by sajid_ghayel on October 21, 2008, 07:26:30 AM
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KAVITA KA KOI ROOP SAMAJ ME NAHI AATA HAIN
BILKUL KISI BEHTI NADI KI TARAH CHANCHAL HAIN KABHI
TO KABHI KISI TEHRE PANI KI TARAH SHANT HAIN
KABHI ITNA UCHA HOTA HAIN KAD ISKA
KE HAR CHEEZE CHOTI NAZAR AATI HAIN
TO KABHI NANHA SA BACHCHA BHI ISE CHU LETA HAIN
REHTI HAIN HUM SAB KE ANDAR
LEKIN HAR KOI ISE PEHCHAN NAHI PATA HAIN
KABHI GAUR SE SUNO TUM APNE ANDAR CHUPI KAVITA KO
MA JAB BACHCHE KO DULARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
SAJNI JAB SAJAN KO PUKARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
MASOOM BACHPAN JAB TOTLI ZUBAN ME KUCH BOLTA HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
KABHI KRODH ME KABHI VIRODH ME
KRANTI KAVITA HI TO LATI HAIN
TO KABHI BINA KUCH KAHE BOHAT KUCH KEH JATI HAIN
KAVITA JEEVAN KA AADHAR HAIN BUNIYAD HAIN
JO LIKHA HAI MAINE MANO TO KAVITA NA MANO TO BAS LIKHA HUA
BAAT KAVITA KI NAHI BAAT TERI AUR MERI SAMAJ KI HAIN
ACHCHI HAIN YA BURI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN....

                                -SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: October 21, 2008, 07:44:23 AM »
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May aap se shamat hoon Ghayel Ji  Applause Applause

Jis kisi cheez ke baare mein arz kiya jaye woh kavita hai
Joh kuch hum sochte hai par kah nahi pate woh bhi kavita hai
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«Reply #2 on: October 21, 2008, 07:49:20 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 21, 2008, 07:44:23 AM
May aap se shamat hoon Ghayel Ji  Applause Applause

Jis kisi cheez ke baare mein arz kiya jaye woh kavita hai
Joh kuch hum sochte hai par kah nahi pate woh bhi kavita hai


main bhi kavita hu lekin mujse behtar aap kavita hain
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«Reply #3 on: October 21, 2008, 08:10:09 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: October 21, 2008, 10:19:40 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 21, 2008, 07:26:30 AM
KAVITA KA KOI ROOP SAMAJ ME NAHI AATA HAIN
BILKUL KISI BEHTI NADI KI TARAH CHANCHAL HAIN KABHI
TO KABHI KISI TEHRE PANI KI TARAH SHANT HAIN
KABHI ITNA UCHA HOTA HAIN KAD ISKA
KE HAR CHEEZE CHOTI NAZAR AATI HAIN
TO KABHI NANHA SA BACHCHA BHI ISE CHU LETA HAIN
REHTI HAIN HUM SAB KE ANDAR
LEKIN HAR KOI ISE PEHCHAN NAHI PATA HAIN
KABHI GAUR SE SUNO TUM APNE ANDAR CHUPI KAVITA KO
MA JAB BACHCHE KO DULARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
SAJNI JAB SAJAN KO PUKARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
MASOOM BACHPAN JAB TOTLI ZUBAN ME KUCH BOLTA HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
KABHI KRODH ME KABHI VIRODH ME
KRANTI KAVITA HI TO LATI HAIN
TO KABHI BINA KUCH KAHE BOHAT KUCH KEH JATI HAIN
KAVITA JEEVAN KA AADHAR HAIN BUNIYAD HAIN
JO LIKHA HAI MAINE MANO TO KAVITA NA MANO TO BAS LIKHA HUA
BAAT KAVITA KI NAHI BAAT TERI AUR MERI SAMAJ KI HAIN
ACHCHI HAIN YA BURI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN....

                                -SAJID GHAYEL-



 Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Sajid ji..kamaal ka likha hai aapne..


Yeh joh ehsaas hai joh dil ki pyaas hain
Kabhi na bhuj paye joh dil ki khwaish hain
Kabhi hasate hai kabhi rulate hain
Zindagi ke chakravu mein dost mil jaate hain
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2008, 03:06:23 PM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 21, 2008, 07:26:30 AM

KABHI GAUR SE SUNO TUM APNE ANDAR CHUPI KAVITA KO
MA JAB BACHCHE KO DULARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
SAJNI JAB SAJAN KO PUKARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
MASOOM BACHPAN JAB TOTLI ZUBAN ME KUCH BOLTA HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
TO KABHI BINA KUCH KAHE BOHAT KUCH KEH JATI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN....

                                -SAJID GHAYEL-


Clapping SmileyYoon to pooree ki pooree kavitaa sundar udgaaroun sey ot-prot hai; par, ye laainey to bahut hi sundar hain! It's lovely!
Kavitaa man ki cheez hai,
Swar-sur sey bharpoor!
Jeewan kaa har spand ho,
Jyoun mrudu madhu sey choor!
         - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2008, 03:22:45 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Sajid Saheb!! Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2008, 03:40:06 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 21, 2008, 03:22:45 PM
Bahut Khoob Sajid Saheb!! Applause Applause
Quote from: abdbundeli on October 21, 2008, 03:06:23 PM
Clapping SmileyYoon to pooree ki pooree kavitaa sundar udgaaroun sey ot-prot hai; par, ye laainey to bahut hi sundar hain! It's lovely!
Kavitaa man ki cheez hai,
Swar-sur sey bharpoor!
Jeewan kaa har spand ho,
Jyoun mrudu madhu sey choor!
         - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli


Quote from: honeyrose on October 21, 2008, 10:19:40 AM
Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Sajid ji..kamaal ka likha hai aapne..


Yeh joh ehsaas hai joh dil ki pyaas hain
Kabhi na bhuj paye joh dil ki khwaish hain
Kabhi hasate hai kabhi rulate hain
Zindagi ke chakravu mein dost mil jaate hain
Quote from: kaushikbhawna008 on October 21, 2008, 08:10:09 AM
gud creation sajid
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 21, 2008, 07:44:23 AM
May aap se shamat hoon Ghayel Ji  Applause Applause

Jis kisi cheez ke baare mein arz kiya jaye woh kavita hai
Joh kuch hum sochte hai par kah nahi pate woh bhi kavita hai


khwaish, abd saheb, honey, bhavna, rajesh thank you so much jo aapne mere is likhe hue ko kavita samaj kar muje izzat bakshi. notworthy and equally very beautifuls reply by abd saheb, honey and rajesh
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«Reply #8 on: October 22, 2008, 04:47:44 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 21, 2008, 07:26:30 AM
KAVITA KA KOI ROOP SAMAJ ME NAHI AATA HAIN
BILKUL KISI BEHTI NADI KI TARAH CHANCHAL HAIN KABHI
TO KABHI KISI TEHRE PANI KI TARAH SHANT HAIN
KABHI ITNA UCHA HOTA HAIN KAD ISKA
KE HAR CHEEZE CHOTI NAZAR AATI HAIN
TO KABHI NANHA SA BACHCHA BHI ISE CHU LETA HAIN
REHTI HAIN HUM SAB KE ANDAR
LEKIN HAR KOI ISE PEHCHAN NAHI PATA HAIN
KABHI GAUR SE SUNO TUM APNE ANDAR CHUPI KAVITA KO
MA JAB BACHCHE KO DULARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
SAJNI JAB SAJAN KO PUKARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
MASOOM BACHPAN JAB TOTLI ZUBAN ME KUCH BOLTA HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
KABHI KRODH ME KABHI VIRODH ME
KRANTI KAVITA HI TO LATI HAIN
TO KABHI BINA KUCH KAHE BOHAT KUCH KEH JATI HAIN
KAVITA JEEVAN KA AADHAR HAIN BUNIYAD HAIN
JO LIKHA HAI MAINE MANO TO KAVITA NA MANO TO BAS LIKHA HUA
BAAT KAVITA KI NAHI BAAT TERI AUR MERI SAMAJ KI HAIN
ACHCHI HAIN YA BURI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN....

                                -SAJID GHAYEL-



Bahut pyaari "KAVITA" likhi hai Sajid ji..  Applause  Applause

Aur phir aap jahan ho, wahan Kavita naa ho.. Yeh toh ho hi nahin sakta.. Usual Smile
By the way, Aap ne kavita ke itne roop dikha diye, lekin meri is baat mein Kavita ka matlab sirf "Poem" hai.. Kuch aur naa samajh lijiyega.. tongue3
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«Reply #9 on: October 22, 2008, 04:49:15 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 21, 2008, 07:44:23 AM
May aap se shamat hoon Ghayel Ji  Applause Applause

Jis kisi cheez ke baare mein arz kiya jaye woh kavita hai
Joh kuch hum sochte hai par kah nahi pate woh bhi kavita hai


Quote from: honeyrose on October 21, 2008, 10:19:40 AM
Applause Applause

Bohat khoob Sajid ji..kamaal ka likha hai aapne..


Yeh joh ehsaas hai joh dil ki pyaas hain
Kabhi na bhuj paye joh dil ki khwaish hain
Kabhi hasate hai kabhi rulate hain
Zindagi ke chakravu mein dost mil jaate hain
Quote from: abdbundeli on October 21, 2008, 03:06:23 PM
Clapping SmileyYoon to pooree ki pooree kavitaa sundar udgaaroun sey ot-prot hai; par, ye laainey to bahut hi sundar hain! It's lovely!
Kavitaa man ki cheez hai,
Swar-sur sey bharpoor!
Jeewan kaa har spand ho,
Jyoun mrudu madhu sey choor!
         - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli



Beautiful Replies, Rajesh ji, HoneyRose and Abd ji..  Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 22, 2008, 06:19:29 AM »
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Thanks a lot, Mahiya ji!
            - abd bundeli
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«Reply #11 on: October 22, 2008, 07:59:52 AM »
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Quote from: Mahiya on October 22, 2008, 04:47:44 AM
Bahut pyaari "KAVITA" likhi hai Sajid ji..  Applause  Applause

Aur phir aap jahan ho, wahan Kavita naa ho.. Yeh toh ho hi nahin sakta.. Usual Smile
By the way, Aap ne kavita ke itne roop dikha diye, lekin meri is baat mein Kavita ka matlab sirf "Poem" hai.. Kuch aur naa samajh lijiyega.. tongue3

tum bhi mauka dekh ke chauka mar hi deti ho  Laughing hard
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«Reply #12 on: October 22, 2008, 08:21:24 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on October 21, 2008, 07:26:30 AM
KAVITA KA KOI ROOP SAMAJ ME NAHI AATA HAIN
BILKUL KISI BEHTI NADI KI TARAH CHANCHAL HAIN KABHI
TO KABHI KISI TEHRE PANI KI TARAH SHANT HAIN
KABHI ITNA UCHA HOTA HAIN KAD ISKA
KE HAR CHEEZE CHOTI NAZAR AATI HAIN
TO KABHI NANHA SA BACHCHA BHI ISE CHU LETA HAIN
REHTI HAIN HUM SAB KE ANDAR
LEKIN HAR KOI ISE PEHCHAN NAHI PATA HAIN
KABHI GAUR SE SUNO TUM APNE ANDAR CHUPI KAVITA KO
MA JAB BACHCHE KO DULARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
SAJNI JAB SAJAN KO PUKARTI HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
MASOOM BACHPAN JAB TOTLI ZUBAN ME KUCH BOLTA HAIN WOH KAVITA HAIN
KABHI KRODH ME KABHI VIRODH ME
KRANTI KAVITA HI TO LATI HAIN
TO KABHI BINA KUCH KAHE BOHAT KUCH KEH JATI HAIN
KAVITA JEEVAN KA AADHAR HAIN BUNIYAD HAIN
JO LIKHA HAI MAINE MANO TO KAVITA NA MANO TO BAS LIKHA HUA
BAAT KAVITA KI NAHI BAAT TERI AUR MERI SAMAJ KI HAIN
ACHCHI HAIN YA BURI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN
HAR CHEEZE KAVITA SE JUDI HAIN....

                                -SAJID GHAYEL-



Sajid Ji,

Bohot khoobsurat aur maasoom se andaaz main Kavita ke baare main bataya hai aapne...You definitely need an applause  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: October 22, 2008, 08:24:18 AM »
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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on October 21, 2008, 07:44:23 AM
Jis kisi cheez ke baare mein arz kiya jaye woh kavita hai
Joh kuch hum sochte hai par kah nahi pate woh bhi kavita hai

Quote from: honeyrose on October 21, 2008, 10:19:40 AM

Yeh joh ehsaas hai joh dil ki pyaas hain
Kabhi na bhuj paye joh dil ki khwaish hain
Kabhi hasate hai kabhi rulate hain
Zindagi ke chakravu mein dost mil jaate hain

Quote from: abdbundeli on October 21, 2008, 03:06:23 PM
Kavitaa man ki cheez hai,
Swar-sur sey bharpoor!
Jeewan kaa har spand ho,
Jyoun mrudu madhu sey choor!
         - Ramwatiya/abd bundeli




Rajesh, Honey sis, Abd Ji....Very good replies from you Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: October 22, 2008, 09:42:37 AM »
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Thanks, Celmira ji!
       - abd bundeli
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