MAIN JAB UHDAAS HOTA HOOHN [Asghr]

by Asghr on February 18, 2009, 07:32:00 PM
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MAIN JAB B UHDAAS HOTA HOOHN WO MUJH KO HANSAA DAITA HAI
MERI JAAN HAI WO JO ISS MEHFIL MAIN MUJH KO DUA DAITA HAI
HAR JATA HOOHN GHUM-E-ZEEST KI TALKHIYON SE JAB
CUPKE SE AAH KAR WO MERA HOSLA BADAA DAITA HAI
AUR SABI DOSTOOHN SE MUNFARID HAI ANDAZ UHS KA
WO MERI GAZAL K JWAAB MAIN BAUT KUCH SUNA DAITA HAI
MAIN LAKH CHUPAHON UHS KI DOSTI ZAMANE SE
APNE ISHAAR KI ZUBANI WO YEH RAAZ BATAA DAITA HAI
ASGHR KHUSH NASEEB HAI JISE AISA PYARA DOST MILA
VARNA AAJ KA INSAAN DUKH K SIWA KYA DAITA HAI
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«Reply #1 on: February 18, 2009, 09:20:59 PM »
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Waah Asghr Ji....aapne bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai.....har lafz sheerin, zehan main ghulta hua sa....Bohot Khoob........ !! Applause Applause Applause

Kuch lines maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai....aakhiri sher aapki khoobsurat ghazal ko dedicate kiya hai !!



Ye dua hai yunhi muskurata rahe,
Wo hansta rahe, khilkhilata rahe

Kabhi ghum se us ka na ho waasta,
Wo khushion ke deepak jalata rahe

Uske pehlu main roshan rahe zindagi,
Ghar uska sada jagmagata rahe

Uska har khwaab pahunche taabeer ko
Khushnuma khwaab har pal sajata rahe

Bada dilkash andaaze-e-tahreer hai,
Wo lafzon ka jaadu chalata rahe !!
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«Reply #2 on: February 18, 2009, 09:45:01 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on February 18, 2009, 09:20:59 PM
Waah Asghr Ji....aapne bohot hi khoobsurat ghazal likhi hai.....har lafz sheerin, zehan main ghulta hua sa....Bohot Khoob........ !! Applause Applause Applause

Kuch lines maine bhi likhne ki koshish ki hai....aakhiri sher aapki khoobsurat ghazal ko dedicate kiya hai !!



Ye dua hai yunhi muskurata rahe,
Wo hansta rahe, khilkhilata rahe

Kabhi ghum se us ka na ho waasta,
Wo khushion ke deepak jalata rahe

Uske pehlu main roshan rahe zindagi,
Ghar uska sada jagmagata rahe

Uska har khwaab pahunche taabeer ko
Khushnuma khwaab har pal sajata rahe

Bada dilkash andaaze-e-tahreer hai,
Wo lafzon ka jaadu chalata rahe !!
JADOO TAU AAP K ALFAZ MAIN HAI DUA HAI AAP ISSI TARAH LIKHTI REHAIN, MUJE APNI DUAAON MAIN YAAD RAKHNA.ASGHR
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«Reply #3 on: February 18, 2009, 09:51:09 PM »
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AAP KA SHUKRIYA ADA KARNE K LIYE ALFAZ NAHIN HAIN MAIN APNI GAZAL AAP KI NAZR KAR DAITA HOOHN.ASGHR
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«Reply #4 on: February 18, 2009, 10:39:43 PM »
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Quote from: Asghr on February 18, 2009, 09:45:01 PM
JADOO TAU AAP K ALFAZ MAIN HAI DUA HAI AAP ISSI TARAH LIKHTI REHAIN, MUJE APNI DUAAON MAIN YAAD RAKHNA.ASGHR

Shukriya Asghr Ji .....aap ki zarra-nawazi hai.....!!

Quote from: Asghr on February 18, 2009, 09:51:09 PM
AAP KA SHUKRIYA ADA KARNE K LIYE ALFAZ NAHIN HAIN MAIN APNI GAZAL AAP KI NAZR KAR DAITA HOOHN.ASGHR

Sach kahun to aapki ghazlon main kuch khaas hota hai jo likhne pe majboor kar deta hai.....Iss izzat afzaai ka bohot bohot shukriya Asghr Ji, bas aap yunhi likhte rahiyega...
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«Reply #5 on: February 18, 2009, 10:46:08 PM »
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Waah Ashgr jee..
kyaa baat hai...
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«Reply #6 on: February 18, 2009, 11:56:30 PM »
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Wah Wah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Asghr Bhai..asaan Se Alfaazo mein Itni Khoobsurat Ghazal..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat..Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Applause Applause Applause

Ek Koshish Mere Taraf Se Bhi,

Main Jab Udaas Hota Hoon,Woh Mujhko Hasaa Deta Hai,
Phir Chupke Se Mere Gham Par
Apne AanKhon Ko Woh Rula Deta Hai...

Rishta Dosti Ka Koi Khoon Ka Rishta To Nahi,
Par Kya Kahoon,Meri Khushi Ke Liye,
Woh Apne Aap Ko Luta Deta Hai..

Apne Dard Ko Chupane Ke Liye,
Ek Jhooti Muskaan Chehre Par Saja Leta Hoon Main,
Aene Ki Tarah Hai Woh Dost,
Mera Chehra Dekh Kar Sab Pehchaan Leta Hai...

Khushiyon Mein to Duniya Ka har shaks Saath Deta hai,
Mushkilo Mein Bhi Woh Apne Aap ko Mujhse Juuda Leta Hai....

Umar Dosti Ki Kaayam Rahe Qayamat Tak,
Woh Har Pal,Har Lamha Khush Rahe,
"Khwaish" Dil se ussse Dua Deta Hai....
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«Reply #7 on: February 19, 2009, 03:00:13 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 18, 2009, 11:56:30 PM
Wah Wah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Asghr Bhai..asaan Se Alfaazo mein Itni Khoobsurat Ghazal..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat..Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Applause Applause Applause

Ek Koshish Mere Taraf Se Bhi,

Main Jab Udaas Hota Hoon,Woh Mujhko Hasaa Deta Hai,
Phir Chupke Se Mere Gham Par
Apne AanKhon Ko Woh Rula Deta Hai...

Rishta Dosti Ka Koi Khoon Ka Rishta To Nahi,
Par Kya Kahoon,Meri Khushi Ke Liye,
Woh Apne Aap Ko Luta Deta Hai..

Apne Dard Ko Chupane Ke Liye,
Ek Jhooti Muskaan Chehre Par Saja Leta Hoon Main,
Aene Ki Tarah Hai Woh Dost,
Mera Chehra Dekh Kar Sab Pehchaan Leta Hai...

Khushiyon Mein to Duniya Ka har shaks Saath Deta hai,
Mushkilo Mein Bhi Woh Apne Aap ko Mujhse Juuda Leta Hai....

Umar Dosti Ki Kaayam Rahe Qayamat Tak,
Woh Har Pal,Har Lamha Khush Rahe,
"Khwaish" Dil se ussse Dua Deta Hai....



Bahut khoob Khwaish ji... padkar dil khush ho gaya..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: February 19, 2009, 08:51:00 AM »
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HEY THANKS FOR REMINDIN ME YAAR
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«Reply #9 on: February 19, 2009, 12:42:14 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on February 18, 2009, 11:56:30 PM
Wah Wah!! Bahut Bahut Khoob Asghr Bhai..asaan Se Alfaazo mein Itni Khoobsurat Ghazal..Bahut Ache.. Applause Applause Applause
Bahut Bahut Khoob Talat..Hamesha Ki Tarah!! Applause Applause Applause

Ek Koshish Mere Taraf Se Bhi,

Main Jab Udaas Hota Hoon,Woh Mujhko Hasaa Deta Hai,
Phir Chupke Se Mere Gham Par
Apne AanKhon Ko Woh Rula Deta Hai...

Rishta Dosti Ka Koi Khoon Ka Rishta To Nahi,
Par Kya Kahoon,Meri Khushi Ke Liye,
Woh Apne Aap Ko Luta Deta Hai..

Apne Dard Ko Chupane Ke Liye,
Ek Jhooti Muskaan Chehre Par Saja Leta Hoon Main,
Aene Ki Tarah Hai Woh Dost,
Mera Chehra Dekh Kar Sab Pehchaan Leta Hai...

Khushiyon Mein to Duniya Ka har shaks Saath Deta hai,
Mushkilo Mein Bhi Woh Apne Aap ko Mujhse Juuda Leta Hai....

Umar Dosti Ki Kaayam Rahe Qayamat Tak,
Woh Har Pal,Har Lamha Khush Rahe,
"Khwaish" Dil se ussse Dua Deta Hai....








Bohot bohot Shukriya Khwaish...aur aapne bhi kitna khoobsurat contribution diya hai is thread ko, dosti ke jazbe ko Bohot Khoob  Applause Applause Applause


Dosti ka ye jazba, yunhi rahe salamat,
Dost na ho juda, aa bhi jaaye jo qayamat

Uski hansi chehre se utarne na paaye kabhi,
Jisne dosti ko sada samjha hai bas ibaadat
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«Reply #10 on: February 19, 2009, 12:54:09 PM »
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Waah waah Kya Dhoom Machaaya Hai Aap Sabne,.
Great Job,.

Ashgr Bhaiya,.
Talat Didi,.

Khawaish Bhaiya./
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«Reply #11 on: February 19, 2009, 12:54:42 PM »
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Well done..all of you...sab ne khoob likha hai... Applause Applause Applause
Quote from: Asghr on February 18, 2009, 07:32:00 PM
MAIN JAB B UHDAAS HOTA HOOHN WO MUJH KO HANSAA DAITA HAI
MERI JAAN HAI WO JO ISS MEHFIL MAIN MUJH KO DUA DAITA HAI
HAR JATA HOOHN GHUM-E-ZEEST KI TALKHIYON SE JAB
CUPKE SE AAH KAR WO MERA HOSLA BADAA DAITA HAI
AUR SABI DOSTOOHN SE MUNFARID HAI ANDAZ UHS KA
WO MERI GAZAL K JWAAB MAIN BAUT KUCH SUNA DAITA HAI
MAIN LAKH CHUPAHON UHS KI DOSTI ZAMANE SE
APNE ISHAAR KI ZUBANI WO YEH RAAZ BATAA DAITA HAI
ASGHR KHUSH NASEEB HAI JISE AISA PYARA DOST MILA
VARNA AAJ KA INSAAN DUKH K SIWA KYA DAITA HAI
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«Reply #12 on: February 19, 2009, 01:14:37 PM »
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Quote from: Jaanasheen on February 19, 2009, 12:54:09 PM
Waah waah Kya Dhoom Machaaya Hai Aap Sabne,.
Great Job,.

Ashgr Bhaiya,.
Talat Didi,.

Khawaish Bhaiya./
Shukriya Jaanasheen bhai aap k liye sdaa dua lab peh rehti hai.Asghr
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«Reply #13 on: February 19, 2009, 01:16:39 PM »
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Quote from: smardia on February 19, 2009, 12:54:42 PM
Well done..all of you...sab ne khoob likha hai... Applause Applause Applause
Shukriya Smardia.Asghr
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«Reply #14 on: February 19, 2009, 01:20:55 PM »
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Roja ji you people are lovely i run out of words i dont know how to say thank you.asghr
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