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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum
Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum
Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum
__________honeyrose__________
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2008, 08:27:18 AM » |
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum
Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum
Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum
__________honeyrose__________
Bahut hi khoob, Honey Ji  |
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2008, 11:32:39 AM » |
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum
Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum
Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum
__________honeyrose__________
Bahut Khoob likha hai Honey Ji aap ne Koshish kar ke jawaab doonga |
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2008, 11:42:41 AM » |
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Chand ho tum ya dil mein noor ho tum
Jab bhi zameen mein uttar the ho khayamt ho tum
Tumse ek pyaar ka rishta joda hai dil ke kareeb ho tum
Humare dosti ki kitab mein pehla alfaaz ho tum
Kehne ko toh bohat kuch hai par Arsaa-e-aalam ho tum
Dosti ke duniya mein dil ke dhadkan ho tum
__________honeyrose__________
very nice and sweet poem by you HONEY. great work Jasbir Singh |
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #7 on: December 30, 2008, 11:45:16 AM » |
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Kuch likh raha hoon Honey Ji
Chaand sitaron mein basne wali zannat ki hoor ho tum
Zameen pe rahne wali meri aankhon ki noor ho tum
Dil ki dharkan ki tarah mere dil mein basi ho tum
Mere is beraan zindagi har pal ki saathi ho tum
Koi agar hum se yeh pooche ki meri kaun ho tum
Garvh ke saath kahta hoon ki meri zindagi ho tum
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: December 30, 2008, 11:47:25 AM » |
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Kuch likh raha hoon Honey Ji
Chaand sitaron mein basne wali zannat ki hoor ho tum
Zameen pe rahne wali meri aankhon ki noor ho tum
Dil ki dharkan ki tarah mere dil mein basi ho tum
Mere is beraan zindagi har pal ki saathi ho tum
Koi agar hum se yeh pooche ki meri kaun ho tum
Garvh ke saath kahta hoon ki meri zindagi ho tum
arey wah RAJESH kya baat kahi hai, bahut hi badiya kaha hai aap neh. very very nice Jasbir Singh |
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #9 on: December 30, 2008, 11:50:28 AM » |
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Thanks Jasbir Ji
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cara
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«Reply #10 on: December 30, 2008, 12:33:49 PM » |
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honeyji......
aap aesa vesa dost nahin ho tum,
madh-gulab ho "honeyrose" ho tum.
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honeyrose
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«Reply #14 on: December 30, 2008, 02:42:14 PM » |
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very nice and sweet poem by you HONEY. great work
Jasbir Singh
Thanks Jasbir ji... |
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