My friends:- A Desire of my life

by deepika_divya on November 29, 2007, 09:24:58 AM
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Ak din Zingai se pareshan mein
Aatm dehan karne chali thi….
Rokha apne man ko maine
Par ankho se ansoon ki bohaar na rukhi thi

Kabhu kiya apne jazbaat ko maine
Sansein ki raftaar phir bhi na ruki thi
Tutt chuki thi mein puri tarah
Kismet ki talwaar armaano pe chali thi

Rubaroo hui ak asie riste se phir
Jinke saath mein kheli padi thi
Hasaya unhone mujhe de shara ‘Dosti ka’
Mein Ak nai Zindagi se mili thi

Zindagi k har rango se vakif karatya
Har khushi di, jo kabhi pehle na mili thi
Saath diya har kadam pe unhone
Khushiyon se phir meri jholi bari thi

Zindagi ka arth samjaya
Meri himmat phir ak baar bandi thi
Har hunar ko saraya Mere DOsto ne
Unni ki Vjah se mujhe ak nai Zindagi mili thi

~Divya~
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Sahiba Zehra
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«Reply #1 on: December 02, 2007, 11:50:32 AM »
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hi divya ji
poem achi likhi lekin yes samajh nahi aay ki kyun poetess dukhi hai?
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Ak din Zingai se pareshan mein
Aatm dehan karne chali thi….
Rokha apne man ko maine
Par ankho se ansoon ki bohaar na rukhi thi

Kabhu kiya apne jazbaat ko maine
Sansein ki raftaar phir bhi na ruki thi
Tutt chuki thi mein puri tarah
Kismet ki talwaar armaano pe chali thi
yaha tak dukh bataya gaya hai aur iske baad dosti ki acchai per wajah nahi batai ki dosti aur dukh ka relation kya hai aur poetess dukhi kyun hai?

agar bura lage toh maaf kijiyega
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #2 on: December 03, 2007, 04:09:57 AM »
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thanks... nahi bura nahi laga..

actually poetress ki life roz marra ki halat.. aur   har pal duk ka samana karte karte tak chuki thi.. kismat bhi ab tak usse kai baar doka de chuki thi. tab woh kudh ko mitane nikal  padi.. par raste mea uske woh dost mile jinke saath woh kheli badi hu,....unhone poetress ko sambhala samjaya,, ki aatam dehan karne se sab kuch teek nahi hoga.. unhone poetress ko Zindagi jeene ka naya tareeka samjaya.. usse nai zindagi di usse sahara.. un dosto ki vaiah se usne ak nai duniya mea pravesh kiya hai.. isliye poetress ne apne Dosto ko Desire of life kaha...
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2007, 09:50:11 AM »
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good one divya ji.
kismat se hi aache dost milte hai.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2007, 12:23:03 PM »
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Thank u baadal
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: December 17, 2007, 09:54:14 AM »
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Very nice Divs....very well expressed.
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prmchawla
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«Reply #6 on: December 17, 2007, 10:40:52 AM »
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divya nice one keep it up.
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: December 17, 2007, 11:47:56 AM »
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thank u Mr. Prem
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