Saanjh huyee, Ghayel ghar aajaa!

by abdbundeli on February 23, 2009, 06:54:43 AM
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  Saanjh huyee, Ghayel ghar aajaa!

Khojeyn tujh ko saathee teyrey,
Subah sabeyrey, raat andheyrey!
Khoj-khoj kar haar na jaauun;
Kahaan chhupaa jaa bhaayee meyrey!!

       Ham us sey nipteyngey mil kar;
       Jhanjhat kyaa hai? Aa, batlaa jaa!!
                  Saanjh huyee, Ghayel ghar aajaa!

Sambandhoun ko meyrey-teyrey,
Kuchh haseen sapney hain gheyrey!
Aisaa karo ki janm-janm tak,
Baney raheyn apnoun key pheyrey!!

       Meyree sandhyaa huyee akeylee;        
       Huaa andheyraa, jyoti jalaa jaa!
                  Saanjh huyee, Ghayel ghar aajaa!

Deykho bhai Sajid Ghayel Ji! Mein thhahraa 70 kaa! ummeed karta thaa ki koyee takleef hogee to chhotey bhai ko bulaa loongaa; par tum to meyrey zayeef honey se pahiley hi kinaaraa kaatney lagey ho? Ab kehtey ho "Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa!” Ab koun rakheygaa meyraa khayaal? Tumhain shaayed maloom naheen hogaa, ki, tumhaarey hatney key baad do-teen din mein kuch bhi naheen likh sakaa thaa; uske ba’ad aaj hi ek gazal likhee hai; itnaa bhi naheen samjhey, ki, tum meyrey bohat hi pyaarey ‘apney’ ho!
Baqee tumharee apni zindagee hai, khoob khushi sey, jaisi marzi ho jiyo; aur khoob jiyo, lambe jiyo, aur khush raho. Bas ‘yoindia’ ko bhoolna mat, kyoun ki, ‘yoindia’ hi ham-sab ko itney ‘nikat’ laayaa hai!
With the best of my wishes to you and your family and also to all your other loved ones! This is your elder brother ABD BUNDELI. May HE BLESS you!

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«Reply #1 on: February 23, 2009, 07:32:23 AM »
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Yeh kya keh diya bhai muje maaf karde jo maine aapke dil ko thes pohchaiee. Mera bhai muje jab chahe bula sakta hain main apne bhai se door nahi hu. Bohat rulaya aapne muje aap samne hote to seene se laga leta aapko.

Main wada karta hu apne is bhai ko kabhi chod ke nahi jaooga. Muje har cheeze manzoor hain par apne is bhai ke muh se nikle yeh alfaz manzoor nahi. Muje maaf kardo bhai jo maine aapse aur apne dosto se door hone ki nadani ki.

Main shukrguzaar hu un dosto ka jinhone ne meri is mushkil ghadi me muje yaad kiya muje hausla diya Sajid ke liye unki dosti unka pyaar duniya ki sabse badi daulat hain. Aur bhai aapka chota aapko phirse usi tarah satayga jaise pehle satata tha wada.


Itni shiddat se woh roya meri mayyat pe
Hua afsos khudaiee ko apne faisle pe

-Sajid Ghayel-
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«Reply #2 on: February 23, 2009, 08:01:46 AM »
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Bohat achche Abd Bhai, And Sajid Bhai,.

May Allah Bless You, Khush raho, Aabaad raho, Yunhi Pyaar Rahe Aap Dono Mein,.
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«Reply #3 on: February 23, 2009, 12:09:06 PM »
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Yeh kya keh diya bhai muje maaf karde jo maine aapke dil ko thes pohchaiee. Mera bhai muje jab chahe bula sakta hain main apne bhai se door nahi hu. Bohat rulaya aapne muje aap samne hote to seene se laga leta aapko.

Main wada karta hu apne is bhai ko kabhi chod ke nahi jaooga. Muje har cheeze manzoor hain par apne is bhai ke muh se nikle yeh alfaz manzoor nahi. Muje maaf kardo bhai jo maine aapse aur apne dosto se door hone ki nadani ki.

Main shukrguzaar hu un dosto ka jinhone ne meri is mushkil ghadi me muje yaad kiya muje hausla diya Sajid ke liye unki dosti unka pyaar duniya ki sabse badi daulat hain. Aur bhai aapka chota aapko phirse usi tarah satayga jaise pehle satata tha wada.


Itni shiddat se woh roya meri mayyat pe
Hua afsos khudaiee ko apne faisle pe

-Sajid Ghayel-
Shukriyah bhai Sajid Ghayel ji! Ummed hai, ki, aap pahley ki tarah hi yoindia par ham sabkaa 'sammaan' badhhaatey raheyngey!
May HE BLESS you!
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«Reply #4 on: February 23, 2009, 12:14:12 PM »
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Bohat achche Abd Bhai, And Sajid Bhai,.

May Allah Bless You, Khush raho, Aabaad raho, Yunhi Pyaar Rahe Aap Dono Mein,.
Shukriyah bhai Jaanasheen Ji! The INDIAN & YOINDIAN fraternity must grow to unprecedented heights, with our eyes set to the skies.
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«Reply #5 on: February 24, 2009, 07:59:59 AM »
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internet ki duniya yani ki is mayavi duniya me ek aur mayavi duniya....fir bhi jin logon ko kabhi dekha tak nahi unse itna pyaar ho jaata hai unse gussa ho jaate hain rooth jaate hain mana lete hain ya fir maan jaate hain...chahe 7 saal ka buzurg ho ya fir 70 saal ka javan koi isase achuta nahi......ksis ko sunaun to ajeeb sa lagta hai sunane walon ko par ye sach hai aur is sach ko hum log jee rahe hain......apni niji jindagi ki jang ko ladte hue bhi kisi yoindian ki pareshaani aapko pareshaan kar deti hai....uski narajgi aapko jak-jhor deti hai.....
aur aise hi kisi thread ko padh-kar na chahte hue bhi aankhon me nami utar aati hai......roothne -manane ke is khoobsurat thread ke liye meri hazaron daad
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«Reply #6 on: February 24, 2009, 08:11:29 AM »
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A very good wordings for Mr Ghayal... dilse likha hai aapne adb ji .
He is Lucky Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: February 24, 2009, 08:18:48 AM »
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internet ki duniya yani ki is mayavi duniya me ek aur mayavi duniya....fir bhi jin logon ko kabhi dekha tak nahi unse itna pyaar ho jaata hai unse gussa ho jaate hain rooth jaate hain mana lete hain ya fir maan jaate hain...chahe 7 saal ka buzurg ho ya fir 70 saal ka javan koi isase achuta nahi......ksis ko sunaun to ajeeb sa lagta hai sunane walon ko par ye sach hai aur is sach ko hum log jee rahe hain......apni niji jindagi ki jang ko ladte hue bhi kisi yoindian ki pareshaani aapko pareshaan kar deti hai....uski narajgi aapko jak-jhor deti hai.....
aur aise hi kisi thread ko padh-kar na chahte hue bhi aankhon me nami utar aati hai......roothne -manane ke is khoobsurat thread ke liye meri hazaron daad
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sanjeev ji! Aapki baateyn padhh kar achchhaa lagaa! This is what we generally call 'human fraternity'! Ultimately we all belong to the same parental root-man, we may name him Manu or Aadam or whatever we like! Why then, after all, anybody should be made to face avoidable pains? Thanks!                            
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«Reply #8 on: February 24, 2009, 08:21:20 AM »
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A very good wordings for Mr Ghayal... dilse likha hai aapne adb ji .
He is Lucky Usual Smile

Thanks! You're also as adorable as any body else could ever be, Roja ji! Aap to bahut hi badhhiyaa likhteen hain aur bahut hi pyaaraa bhi! Aisaa likhney key liye pyaaraa dil-o-dimaag bhi chaahiye, jo aap key paas hai! Aap bas thorhee 'pessimistic' hain: read your own creation below! Cheer-up to live the life to its full, to drive it towards an ecstatic culmination. I'm very much with you....
शब्द झूठे है सभी सत्य कथाओं की तरह
वक़्त बेशर्म है वेश्या की अदाओं की तरह

जाने वो किसका था साया की जिसे छूने को,
हम भटकते रहे आवारा हवाओं की तरह

प्यार के वास्ते प्यासा है ये दिल सदियों से
अब तो बरसे कोई  सावन की घटाओ की तरह

हर अंधेरे से सुबह बन के गुज़र ज़ाऊगी
जो तेरा हाथ रहे सर पर दुआओं की तरह

आज पलकों में सनम ख्वाब बनाकर रख लो
कल मै खो ज़ाऊगी, गुमनाम गुफ़ाओं की तरह

मुझको सुलझाने में तुम ख़ुद ही उलझ जाओगे
ज़िंदगी है मेरी साधु की जटाओ की तरह

जी हां .. "रोज़ा" में बहुत दोष है लेकिन फिर भी
माफ़ कर दो उसे बच्चों की खताओं की तरह
               
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