Sab ko dukh de jaati hu

by Pooja on April 30, 2009, 06:12:26 PM
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Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu

Raha hai yah anterman saalo saal bahoot tanha
chah kar bhi bahoot baar, na juban se main kuch kah paati hu

Darti hai yah Rooh-e-jaan, jayada pyaar dekh kar apne liye
shayad issi wajah se khud ko is kadar alag kar jaati hu

Na tolna kabhi mujhe mere shbado se e-dost, khaffa ho kar
Achi bhali mehfil main na jaane kyun khataas ghol jaati hu

Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu
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«Reply #1 on: April 30, 2009, 07:09:14 PM »
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Quote from: @kaash on April 30, 2009, 06:55:12 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bohot acha likha aapne Pooja..par khatas nahi mithaas ghol jati hain                                     
 itni zinda nahi sabki zindagi rahti hai,Ye to aapki kalam hai jo jhat har ehsaas qaid kar leti hai                               
 mehfil me mithaas aap jaison se ghulti aayi hai aur rahegi,varna to mahfilen sajti hain sajti rahti hai   

Thansk kash ji....

Kai baar dost apne haq dikhlaate hai
haq se hume zindagi ki bnaatein samjhaate hai

Hum bhi apne haq se, Kuch aor kah jaate hai
aor apne kahe main, dil dukha jaate hai

jante hai such, per sweekarna shayad pasand nahi
issi uljhano main, dil dukha jaate hai...
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«Reply #2 on: April 30, 2009, 07:10:16 PM »
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Waah Didi Jaan, Kya Khoob Likha Hai Dosti Ke Bare Mien, Mashallah, Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #3 on: April 30, 2009, 07:50:32 PM »
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Nice work Pooja....
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«Reply #4 on: May 01, 2009, 04:17:11 AM »
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Thanks Lil bro and Sajid!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 01, 2009, 04:35:30 AM »
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Pooja,Yeh Kavita Bahut khoobsurat hai Par Yeh Kabhi Nahi Ho sakta Ke Aap Kisi Ko dukh De Jaao..Chaahe To main Yeh Baat P.m Mein Bhi Keh Sakta Tha Par Nahi,Sach Kaho to Dil Se Kaho Aur Sab Ke Beech Kaho..Aur Sach to yeh hai Ke..

You Are The Best!!!
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«Reply #6 on: May 01, 2009, 04:42:23 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on May 01, 2009, 04:35:30 AM
Pooja,Yeh Kavita Bahut khoobsurat hai Par Yeh Kabhi Nahi Ho sakta Ke Aap Kisi Ko dukh De Jaao..Chaahe To main Yeh Baat P.m Mein Bhi Keh Sakta Tha Par Nahi,Sach Kaho to Dil Se Kaho Aur Sab Ke Beech Kaho..Aur Sach to yeh hai Ke..

You Are The Best!!!

so sweet Khwaish ji... such kahu to apki yah baat parr kar ankhon main ansoo aa gaye hai.. Itna vishwaas.. bhagwaan hamesha mujhe sabar aor himmat de apki yah baat hamesha nibha paau
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«Reply #7 on: May 01, 2009, 01:55:32 PM »
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Dono sher bahut accha likha hai aapne pooja di...and as khwaish ji said.... You are really THE BEST  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #8 on: May 01, 2009, 06:29:36 PM »
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nice very nice pooja ji.................keep writing
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«Reply #9 on: May 03, 2009, 06:43:45 AM »
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Bilkul baja farmaya, khoobsurat andaaz men likhi hai yeh shayiri...
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«Reply #10 on: May 04, 2009, 09:25:13 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 06:12:26 PM
Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu

Raha hai yah anterman saalo saal bahoot tanha
chah kar bhi bahoot baar, na juban se main kuch kah paati hu

Darti hai yah Rooh-e-jaan, jayada pyaar dekh kar apne liye
shayad issi wajah se khud ko is kadar alag kar jaati hu

Na tolna kabhi mujhe mere shbado se e-dost, khaffa ho kar
Achi bhali mehfil main na jaane kyun khataas ghol jaati hu

Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu


Aapse koi kaise khafa ho sakta hai....As Khwaish said YOU ARE THE BEST !!

Thanks for your friendship and love Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: May 04, 2009, 10:05:37 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on May 01, 2009, 01:55:32 PM
Dono sher bahut accha likha hai aapne pooja di...and as khwaish ji said.... You are really THE BEST  Thumbs UP

Thanks Roja... Jo khud sweet hote hai unko sab sweet najar atte hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: May 04, 2009, 10:06:20 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on May 01, 2009, 06:29:36 PM
nice very nice pooja ji.................keep writing

Thanks Aaina ji!!

Quote from: syednaami on May 03, 2009, 06:43:45 AM
Bilkul baja farmaya, khoobsurat andaaz men likhi hai yeh shayiri...

Apke comments yaha dekh kar acha laga!!!
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2009, 10:06:49 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on May 04, 2009, 09:25:13 PM
Aapse koi kaise khafa ho sakta hai....As Khwaish said YOU ARE THE BEST !!

Thanks for your friendship and love Usual Smile

Thanks for all Love and Care!!!
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«Reply #14 on: May 05, 2009, 01:02:13 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on April 30, 2009, 06:12:26 PM
Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu

Raha hai yah anterman saalo saal bahoot tanha
chah kar bhi bahoot baar, na juban se main kuch kah paati hu

Darti hai yah Rooh-e-jaan, jayada pyaar dekh kar apne liye
shayad issi wajah se khud ko is kadar alag kar jaati hu

Na tolna kabhi mujhe mere shbado se e-dost, khaffa ho kar
Achi bhali mehfil main na jaane kyun khataas ghol jaati hu

Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu


Pooja ji,
U wrote this poem nicely, also ur composition of words is simply Great.
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