Sab ko dukh de jaati hu

by Pooja on April 30, 2009, 06:12:26 PM
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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2009, 02:11:56 AM »
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Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu

Raha hai yah anterman saalo saal bahoot tanha
chah kar bhi bahoot baar, na juban se main kuch kah paati hu

Darti hai yah Rooh-e-jaan, jayada pyaar dekh kar apne liye
shayad issi wajah se khud ko is kadar alag kar jaati hu

Na tolna kabhi mujhe mere shbado se e-dost, khaffa ho kar
Achi bhali mehfil main na jaane kyun khataas ghol jaati hu

Dil main hota hai kuch, kuch aor he kah jaati hu
pata bhi nahi chalta aor sab ko dukh de jaati hu


Pooja Ji,

Be-hadd khoobsurat likha hai aapne, hamesha ki tarah! Applause

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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2009, 03:41:13 PM »
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Apke comments yaha dekh kar acha laga!!!

Shukriya, hamen bhi aap ka javab...
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Pooja
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«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2009, 03:48:49 PM »
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Pooja ji,
U wrote this poem nicely, also ur composition of words is simply Great.
<<< SS >>>



bahoot bahoot shukaria Roy ji
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2009, 03:49:08 PM »
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Pooja Ji,

Be-hadd khoobsurat likha hai aapne, hamesha ki tarah! Applause



Thanks Deepti!!
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