Saffur Zindagi ka mujhe har simt Nibhana hai

by harashmahajan on July 20, 2011, 04:59:17 PM
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Saffur zindagi ka mujhe har simt nibhana hai
Dushman mire bahoot par tu ik dost purana hai

Mera har shabd bana hai tere hi shabdoN se
Unhe bas apne sheroN meiN bithhana hai.

Dard se bhara hai mere sheroN ka har misra,
Tujhe ab ik-ik karke sunana hai.

Kab tak thhame gi tujhe tere saansoN ki dore
Mujhe aaker tujhe sapnoN meiN batlana hai.

Ji bhar ke ji lo iss zindagi ko jo asaaN toh nahiN
Dard ko bhoolne ka yahi ik sabab suhana hai.

Khuda ko bhi ab sun.na hoga, meri faryaad ko
Ke 'Harash'ko abhi ik rootha dost manana hai.

Harash Mahajan
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«Reply #2 on: July 21, 2011, 12:44:38 AM »
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Saffur zindagi ka mujhe har simt nibhana hai
Dushman mire bahoot par tu ik dost purana hai

Mera har shabd bana hai tere hi shabdoN se
Unhe bas apne sheroN meiN bithhana hai.

Dard se bhara hai mere sheroN ka har misra,
Tujhe ab ik-ik karke sunana hai.

Kab tak thhame gi tujhe tere saansoN ki dore
Mujhe aaker tujhe sapnoN meiN batlana hai.

Ji bhar ke ji lo iss zindagi ko jo asaaN toh nahiN
Dard ko bhoolne ka yahi ik sabab suhana hai.

Khuda ko bhi ab sun.na hoga, meri faryaad ko
Ke 'Harash'ko abhi ik rootha dost manana hai.

Harash Mahajan
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«Reply #3 on: July 21, 2011, 09:04:02 AM »
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Saffur zindagi ka mujhe har simt nibhana hai
Dushman mire bahoot par tu ik dost purana hai

Mera har shabd bana hai tere hi shabdoN se
Unhe bas apne sheroN meiN bithhana hai.

Dard se bhara hai mere sheroN ka har misra,
Tujhe ab ik-ik karke sunana hai.

Kab tak thhame gi tujhe tere saansoN ki dore
Mujhe aaker tujhe sapnoN meiN batlana hai.

Ji bhar ke ji lo iss zindagi ko jo asaaN toh nahiN
Dard ko bhoolne ka yahi ik sabab suhana hai.

Khuda ko bhi ab sun.na hoga, meri faryaad ko
Ke 'Harash'ko abhi ik rootha dost manana hai.

Harash Mahajan
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«Reply #4 on: July 21, 2011, 10:28:40 AM »
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Amir Faridi ji , Manoj ji our khujli ji.....aapki pasandagii ke liye bahoot bahoot shukriyaa^h....isi ke saath agar aapke vicharoN ka bhi isme samavesh ho jata toh our bhi achha lagta .......Harash Mahajan
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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2011, 12:06:51 PM »
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Harsh Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab achchi kavish par likha hai aapne..
Hume yeH kavish behad khoob lagti hai.. Usual Smile

Aapki kalaam ke sabhi ashaar behad umdaa rahe ..
Par aapki kalaam ke kuch ashaar hume bher meiN nazar nahi
aaye...... ? Hum aapko kafi lambe samay se jante hai..

Aap behad khoob likhate ... Par shayad yeH humari kam ilmi
hai ke hume aisa laga ke kuch ashar bher se kharij hai... Usual Smile

Khair gustaqui huyi ho to muafi chahte haiN..
Is umdaa kalaam par dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kjiye..
Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..... Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: July 23, 2011, 12:13:00 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: July 28, 2011, 04:56:56 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: July 28, 2011, 06:03:00 PM »
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Saffur zindagi ka mujhe har simt nibhana hai
Dushman mire bahoot par tu ik dost purana hai

Mera har shabd bana hai tere hi shabdoN se
Unhe bas apne sheroN meiN bithhana hai.

Dard se bhara hai mere sheroN ka har misra,
Tujhe ab ik-ik karke sunana hai.

Kab tak thhame gi tujhe tere saansoN ki dore
Mujhe aaker tujhe sapnoN meiN batlana hai.

Ji bhar ke ji lo iss zindagi ko jo asaaN toh nahiN
Dard ko bhoolne ka yahi ik sabab suhana hai.

Khuda ko bhi ab sun.na hoga, meri faryaad ko
Ke 'Harash'ko abhi ik rootha dost manana hai.

Harash Mahajan
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Waah bahut umda harsh ji.
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«Reply #9 on: July 31, 2011, 02:51:08 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2011, 12:38:53 PM »
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«Reply #11 on: August 21, 2011, 02:09:59 PM »
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Harsh Jee Aadaab!

Waah janab achchi kavish par likha hai aapne..
Hume yeH kavish behad khoob lagti hai.. Usual Smile

Aapki kalaam ke sabhi ashaar behad umdaa rahe ..
Par aapki kalaam ke kuch ashaar hume bher meiN nazar nahi
aaye...... ? Hum aapko kafi lambe samay se jante hai..

Aap behad khoob likhate ... Par shayad yeH humari kam ilmi
hai ke hume aisa laga ke kuch ashar bher se kharij hai... Usual Smile

Khair gustaqui huyi ho to muafi chahte haiN..
Is umdaa kalaam par dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kjiye..
Likhate rahiye.. Aate rahiye.....
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..... Usual Smile

Khuda Hafez Usual Smile


Parwaaz saheb adaab......aapke ahsaas aapki kalam ki raah se pade ..bahoot hi achha laga.....jahaaN tak Beh'r ka swaal hai...shayad kisi bhi sher ko ek doosre se milaan kerne per..aapko beh'r se khaariz hi milegi ye Nazm.....ye nazm kisi ki Ghazal ke jwaab meiN instant  ahsaasoN ko bator kar usi shakl meiN pesh ker di gayi.....our isey badalne ka hamaeiN sahas hi nahi ho paya...ye original ahsaas....badalne ki manahi bhi hamein baandhe hue haiN....shukriyaa aapne apna qeemti waqt merii iss nazm ko diya.....
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