Sirf Ek Kahani Hoon Main...

by Raja Jain on May 23, 2015, 09:50:31 AM
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Agar Rakh Sako To Ek Nishaani Hoon Main,
Aur Kho Do To, Sirf Ek Kahani Hoon Main,

Rok Paaye Na Jisko Ye Sari Duniya,
Wo Ek Boond, Aankh Ka Pani Hoon Main,

Sabko Pyaar Dene Ki Aadat Hai Hume,
Apni Alag Pahchaan Banane Ki Aadat Hai Hume,

Kitna Bhi Gahra Zakham De Koi,
Utna Hi Jayada Muskuraane Ki Aadat Hai Hume,

Is Ajnabi Duniya Me Akela Khawab Hoon Main,
Sawalon Se Khafa, Ek Chhota Sa Jawab Hoon Main,

Jo Samajh Na Sake Mujhe, Unke Liye "Kon",
Aur Jo Samjh Gaye, Unke Liye Khuli Kitaab Hoon Main,

Aankh Se Dekhoge To Khush Paaoge Mujhe,
Dil Se Poochhoge Mere, To Dard Ka Sailaab Hoon Main....
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2015, 10:16:59 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2015, 10:30:10 AM »
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bahut bahut dhanyabaad Sabaa ji aapka
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2015, 05:43:48 PM »
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bohat bohat umda peshkash waaahhhhh dherooooo daaaadddd
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2015, 06:27:34 PM »
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Awesome!
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2015, 07:17:33 PM »
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Jain Sahib bahut hee khoobsurat Peshkash hai Janaab, dheroooN dheroooooooooooN daad with Rau (due) Yaani baad mein mile gaa.
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2015, 07:27:52 PM »
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waah waah waah waah waah Raja ji, kitni khoobsoorti se aapne apne ehsaason ko lafzon ki maalaa mein piroyaa hai, bahut ki khoobsurat andaaz mein rachi gayi aapki yeh kavitaa humein bahut pasand aayi, aapke likhne kaa andaaz alag hai aur ismein apnaa hi jaadu hai, dil khush ho gayaa padhke, aate rahiye, likhte rahiye....!!!

 Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!
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«Reply #7 on: May 24, 2015, 06:30:32 AM »
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Jain Sahib bahut hee khoobsurat Peshkash hai Janaab, dheroooN dheroooooooooooN daad with Rau (due) Yaani baad mein mile gaa.
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Janaab main ne Rau aapke score mein add kar diyaa hai.
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«Reply #8 on: May 24, 2015, 07:19:08 PM »
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Nice.
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«Reply #9 on: May 25, 2015, 06:15:04 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya aap sabhi ka, bas aap sab hamesha yu hi hamara saath dijiye aur hamara maarg darshan karte rahiye, aur me poori koshish karooga yaha lagatar bane rahne ki aur aap sab ke liye aise hi achhi kavitayen likhne ka pryaas jari rakhooga,,


Surindarn ji aapka bahut bahut dhanybaad rau ke liye, lekin mujhe ek baat bataiye ye rau kya hota hai aur kaise dete hain?
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