Tum hamaarey ho: tumhain kyoun na pukaareyngey ham?

by abdbundeli on June 12, 2009, 12:06:12 PM
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Bataaou, har umeed,  tum sey na ho, to kis sey?
Bataaou, shikwey giley, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?
Tum hamaarey ho:  tumhain kyoun na pukaareyngey ham?
Bataaou, zikr-e-dard, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?

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«Reply #1 on: June 12, 2009, 12:23:56 PM »
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                     WOH DOSTO SE UMMID HI KYA
                 JINKE UMMID HAM NAHI
               UNSE KHUSHI HI KYA
            JAB UNKE KHUSHI ME HAM NAHI
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«Reply #2 on: June 12, 2009, 12:56:24 PM »
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Bataaou, har umeed,  tum sey na ho, to kis sey?
Bataaou, shikwey giley, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?
Tum hamaarey ho:  tumhain kyoun na pukaareyngey ham?
Bataaou, zikr-e-dard, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?

                                              - abd bundeli



Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
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«Reply #3 on: June 12, 2009, 12:56:44 PM »
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                     WOH DOSTO SE UMMID HI KYA
                 JINKE UMMID HAM NAHI
               UNSE KHUSHI HI KYA
            JAB UNKE KHUSHI ME HAM NAHI

Very nice, Shabana Ji
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chitralsony
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«Reply #4 on: June 12, 2009, 02:01:54 PM »
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wow vvery nice abd ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 12, 2009, 02:10:34 PM »
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Bataaou, har umeed,  tum sey na ho, to kis sey?
Bataaou, shikwey giley, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?
Tum hamaarey ho:  tumhain kyoun na pukaareyngey ham?
Bataaou, zikr-e-dard, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?

                                              - abd bundeli



Nice line Uncle ji
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«Reply #6 on: June 12, 2009, 10:32:48 PM »
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Wah wah Abd ji kya baat hai.beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 13, 2009, 06:44:50 AM »
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                     WOH DOSTO SE UMMID HI KYA
                 JINKE UMMID HAM NAHI
               UNSE KHUSHI HI KYA
            JAB UNKE KHUSHI ME HAM NAHI

Jin sey rishtah hi naheen koyi, woh bhi hain apney!
Jin sey rishtey hain woh to khaas-o-khaas hain apney!
Aaj, har eik, doosrey key kaam aataa hai;
Duniya chhotee hai bahut, a'am-o-khaas hain apney!!

Koyi hai dost, padousee koyi, koyi dushman;
Paas hon, door hon, jo bhi hain sabhi hain apney!

                              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #8 on: June 13, 2009, 06:47:43 AM »
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Bohot Khoob Babu Ji
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah Talat bitia!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: June 13, 2009, 06:50:09 AM »
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wow vvery nice abd ji
Nice line Uncle ji
Wah wah Abd ji kya baat hai.beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Bahut-bahut Shukriyah chitralsony/Roja/madhuwesh ji!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: June 13, 2009, 07:01:32 AM »
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kya baat hai abd bhai mazaa aa gaya...........

teri fitrat rahi shayad mera dil jalane kii
jo maine kii pasand wahi ladki patane kii
  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #11 on: June 13, 2009, 07:58:16 AM »
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kya baat hai abd bhai mazaa aa gaya...........

teri fitrat rahi shayad mera dil jalane kii
jo maine kii pasand wahi ladki patane kii
  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

Wah, kyaa hi naayaab andaaz hai ,Saahil ji!!

Teyree pasand mubaarak ho tujhey ae Majnoo:
Kaash mein bhi jawaan hota tumhaarey jaisaa?
Raqeeb tum ho, to poochheygaa mujhey koun bhalaa;
Ab to, 'potaa' hai jawaan meyraa, tumhaarey jaisaa?

                        - abd bundeli


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«Reply #12 on: June 13, 2009, 08:27:30 AM »
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Bohat Hi Khoob Likha Hai Abd Babu Humesha Ki Tarha.

Waqt e Hijr Main Aakhir Bulaata Kisko
Tum Hi Na The Haal e Dil Sunata Kisko.

Woh Tera Hi Intazar Tha Aankho Me Basa
Aise Mein Aashna o Umeed Banaata Kisko.!!!


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, Shihab ji!

Yaad aataa hai hijra mein koyee:
Kaash, us kaa patah miley ham ko!
Jis ko sun, gungunaa uthhey woh bhi;
Kaash aisaa qata'ah miley ham ko!!

              - abd bundeli

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«Reply #13 on: June 15, 2009, 05:19:27 AM »
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Bataaou, har umeed,  tum sey na ho, to kis sey?
Bataaou, shikwey giley, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?
Tum hamaarey ho:  tumhain kyoun na pukaareyngey ham?
Bataaou, zikr-e-dard, tum sey na hon, to kis sey?

                                              - abd bundeli



Very nice lines, Abd Ji! Applause


Jin sey rishtah hi naheen koyi, woh bhi hain apney!
Jin sey rishtey hain woh to khaas-o-khaas hain apney!
Aaj, har eik, doosrey key kaam aataa hai;
Duniya chhotee hai bahut, a'am-o-khaas hain apney!!

Koyi hai dost, padousee koyi, koyi dushman;
Paas hon, door hon, jo bhi hain sabhi hain apney!

                              - abd bundeli


Wah Wah, Abd Ji! Kamaal ka likha hai!  Bahut bahut bahut khoob! Applause
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«Reply #14 on: June 15, 2009, 07:08:30 AM »
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Very nice lines, Abd Ji! Applause

Wah Wah, Abd Ji! Kamaal ka likha hai!  Bahut bahut bahut khoob! Applause
Thanks a lot Deepati! I'm happy, you got some thing worth reading in the above compositions! Thanks!
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