Tum Jeeti Main Haar Gaya...(Shihab)

by majid on June 06, 2011, 09:20:01 PM
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                                Aadab Sabhi Doton Ko Mera
                       Bahut Time Baad Yahan Kuch Likh Raha Hun
                        Kyon Ki Kaafi Dino Se Ek Dost Khafa Hai
                       Main Nahi Janta Ki Galti Uski Hai Ya Meri
                        Bas Janta Hun To Itna Ki Mera Gussa Meri
                    Dosti Se Bada Ho Nahi Sakta So Bas Likh Baitha
                    Beshaq Woh Bhale Mujhse Baat Na Kare Magar Bas
                   Main Nahi Chahta Ki Woh Apne Nazuk Se Dil Pe Koi
                    Narazgi Ka Bojh Rakhe...I Hope WOh Maaf Karde
                   Plz Ho Sake To Isse Shayari Ki Tarah Nahi Bas Ek
                          Dil Ki Aawaz Samajhkar Parhiyega...




                  Na Teer, Na Talwaar , Na Khanjar Dilke Par Gaya
                  Humey To Bas Tera Nazre Pherna Hi , Maar Gaya.
                  

                  Jabse Roothe Ho Tum  Humse  Kya Kahen Tabse
                  Bas Jaise Sara Chain-o-Sukoon , Aur Qarar Gaya.
                  

                  Aaj Tujhey  Kho  Kar  Hua Hai Yeh  Mahsoos , Ki
                  Mujhey Kya Mila , Aur Kya Mera , Aey Yaar Gaya.
                    

                  Achha Baba Ab Maaf B Kardo Chhoro Yeh Gussa
                  Lo Kaan Pakde ,Tum Jeeti ,  Aur Main Haar Gaya.


                  

                                        ~Shihab~
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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2011, 10:30:30 PM »
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Bahut khoob Shihab ji.Allah paak se duaa hai aapke dost aapko maaf karde aur firse aap dono ke dosti ho jaaye.great creation. Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: June 07, 2011, 12:50:27 AM »
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Good one Shihab
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«Reply #3 on: June 07, 2011, 03:07:24 AM »
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wah bahoot sunder bhai shihab........jiske liye likha hai wo jaroor man jayega ...aakhir tumse koi kitne din naraj rah sakta hai... Usual Smile
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«Reply #4 on: June 07, 2011, 03:53:49 AM »
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shihabji.....itne pyaar se maafi mangoge to kaun naraz reh sakega aapse.......
o shihab bhai se naraz rehne wali dost maan jao na....
bht hi pyaar bhara maafinama hai ye inka...kubuul karlo reee....
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«Reply #5 on: June 07, 2011, 04:02:34 AM »
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wah wah shihabji....... bahut khub.....


ab khafa na raho thoda mushkura bhi do.
tum bin suna suna mera har tyohar gaya.
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«Reply #6 on: June 07, 2011, 05:59:32 AM »
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wow !!!!! kitanaa pyaaraa andaaz hai Shihaab jee...kiskaa gussaa naa kaafoopr ho jaayegaa ....bahut khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: June 07, 2011, 06:45:32 AM »
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Shihab Ji,

Nice thoughts you have expressed
in your poetic message in public forum.

Wish you all the best.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
 
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«Reply #8 on: June 07, 2011, 08:13:38 AM »
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Wah Kya Mast Andaz Hai Kisi Ko Manane Ka
Shayad Hi Koi Na Maane Isse Padkar To Bhai
Abse Teri Bhabhi Roothegi To Yeh Sunga Dunga hahaha
Mast Likha Hai Humesha Ki Tarah


Allah Pak Khush Rakhe Tujhe
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«Reply #9 on: June 07, 2011, 08:50:30 AM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 06, 2011, 09:20:01 PM
                                Aadab Sabhi Doton Ko Mera
                       Bahut Time Baad Yahan Kuch Likh Raha Hun
                        Kyon Ki Kaafi Dino Se Ek Dost Khafa Hai
                       Main Nahi Janta Ki Galti Uski Hai Ya Meri
                        Bas Janta Hun To Itna Ki Mera Gussa Meri
                    Dosti Se Bada Ho Nahi Sakta So Bas Likh Baitha
                    Beshaq Woh Bhale Mujhse Baat Na Kare Magar Bas
                   Main Nahi Chahta Ki Woh Apne Nazuk Se Dil Pe Koi
                    Narazgi Ka Bojh Rakhe...I Hope WOh Maaf Karde
                   Plz Ho Sake To Isse Shayari Ki Tarah Nahi Bas Ek
                          Dil Ki Aawaz Samajhkar Parhiyega...




                  Na Teer, Na Talwaar , Na Khanjar Dilke Par Gaya
                  Humey To Bas Tera Nazre Pherna Hi , Maar Gaya.
                 

                  Jabse Roothe Ho Tum  Humse  Kya Kahen Tabse
                  Bas Jaise Sara Chain-o-Sukoon , Aur Qarar Gaya.
                 

                  Aaj Tujhey  Kho  Kar  Hua Hai Yeh  Mahsoos , Ki
                  Mujhey Kya Mila , Aur Kya Mera , Aey Yaar Gaya.
                     

                  Achha Baba Ab Maaf B Kardo Chhoro Yeh Gussa
                  Lo Kaan Pakde ,Tum Jeeti ,  Aur Main Haar Gaya.


                 

                                        ~Shihab~

SHYAD HASEENAEIN AAP KE ISI ANDAAZ PE FIDA HAIN.

YAAR YE TAREEQA MUJHE BHI AATA TO ISS BHUDHAPE MEIN MAIN UDAAS NAHIN RAHTA.


VERY SWEET MAAFI NAMA Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: June 07, 2011, 10:56:54 AM »
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bht maasumiyat hai aapke is kalam me shihab ji...
par dosti me haar ya jeet...
mere khayal se mayne nahi rakhti..
khair.. sbake apne apne khayal hai...
main bhi yahi dua karungi ki aap logo me jald hi sulah ho jaye....
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«Reply #11 on: June 09, 2011, 10:34:19 PM »
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Tariff se zada dua hai kay dost mann jaye..
Jab koi apna rooth jata hai, dil se afsos hota hai janta hoon..
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Khoob likha hai..
Masoomiyat kay sang, hamesha ki tarha..
Khush rahiye mere bhai..!
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«Reply #12 on: June 10, 2011, 02:01:57 PM »
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Jabse Roothe Ho Tum  Humse  Kya Kahen Tabse
Bas Jaise Sara Chain-o-Sukoon , Aur Qarar Gaya.

Good One ... Shihab JI !  Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: June 10, 2011, 08:20:32 PM »
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Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Shihab.. Bahoot hi khoobsoorat rachna...

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«Reply #14 on: June 10, 2011, 08:30:12 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on June 10, 2011, 08:00:38 PM
Bhai Aapki Dua Kaam Aa Gayi
Woh Rootha Hua Dost Maan Gaya
Bahut Bahut Shukariya Bhai
Pasand Farmane Waqt Dene Aur
Dua Dene Ke Liye.....

Shad o Aabad Rahiye...

~Shihab~
Usual Smile Dil khush hogaya yeh jankar kay woh dost mangaya..
sada khush rahiye.!
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