Tumne Diya....

by mera_waqt on July 15, 2008, 02:26:43 PM
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Kya batau,kya mila aur kya diya hai tumne

Kuch nahi diya,par apna sab kuch diya hai tumne

Suraj ki pehli kiran ki tarah

Aashao k kisi darpan ki tarah

Kamyabi ki kisi dastak ki tarah

Zindagi me khushio ki raunak ki tarah

Sochti hu tumhe kaun sa ek meetha naam du

Kaun sa ek sabse pyara paigam du

Dene k kabil ,kab thi tumhe kuch

Phir bhi de saku, to de du apna sab kuch

Tumhare liye kehte, huye kehne ko ab alfaaz nahi hai

Kuch gaa saku huzur me,par itna saccha koi saaz nahi hai
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2008, 03:05:21 PM »
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Kya batau,kya mila aur kya diya hai tumne

Kuch nahi diya,par apna sab kuch diya hai tumne

Suraj ki pehli kiran ki tarah

Aashao k kisi darpan ki tarah

Kamyabi ki kisi dastak ki tarah

Zindagi me khushio ki raunak ki tarah

Sochti hu tumhe kaun sa ek meetha naam du

Kaun sa ek sabse pyara paigam du

Dene k kabil ,kab thi tumhe kuch

Phir bhi de saku, to de du apna sab kuch

Tumhare liye kehte, huye kehne ko ab alfaaz nahi hai

Kuch gaa saku huzur me,par itna saccha koi saaz nahi hai


gr8
very very good
padh kar bahut accha laga
aise hi likhte raho  Applause
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Sonia01
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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2008, 03:10:38 PM »
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Bahut acche  Applause  Applause Mera_waqt Jee
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2008, 05:10:34 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2008, 08:32:58 PM »
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Kya batau,kya mila aur kya diya hai tumne

Kuch nahi diya,par apna sab kuch diya hai tumne

Suraj ki pehli kiran ki tarah

Aashao k kisi darpan ki tarah

Kamyabi ki kisi dastak ki tarah

Zindagi me khushio ki raunak ki tarah

Sochti hu tumhe kaun sa ek meetha naam du

Kaun sa ek sabse pyara paigam du

Dene k kabil ,kab thi tumhe kuch

Phir bhi de saku, to de du apna sab kuch

Tumhare liye kehte, huye kehne ko ab alfaaz nahi hai

Kuch gaa saku huzur me,par itna saccha koi saaz nahi hai

Bohot Khoob Applause Keep writing.....Welcome to Yoindia Usual Smile
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