Wahi yaad!

by salma786 on July 17, 2009, 11:16:10 AM
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Kon hu mai ek dhundli yaad,
Jo shaam ke sath dhal jayega,

Astitva mera hawa ka jhoka,
Jo rituyo ki tarah badal jayega,

Sannate ki cheekh hu mai,
Shor-o-gul me kho jati hu,

Barf ka ek tukda hu mai,
Waqt ke sath pighal jati hu,

Kon hu mai jo puche koi,
Bhula bisra kissa yaad ayega,

Umid to yahi kiya hai zamane se,
Naam mera koi bhula nahi payega!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2009, 11:28:36 AM »
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Waah Bohat Achche Likha Hai Salma Ji,.
And Welcome Back To Yoindia,.

And NIce One Kaash Ji,.
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«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2009, 05:04:31 PM »
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Wah Salma Ji wah
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«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2009, 07:40:21 PM »
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Bahut Khoob Salma Ji
Bade dino baad aayee ho
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«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2009, 07:42:12 PM »
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Good reponse Kaash Ji
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«Reply #5 on: July 25, 2009, 07:21:39 AM »
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Quote from: @kaash on July 17, 2009, 11:26:29 AM
Applause Applause Applause
waah bahot khoob Salma ji

bahot hi acha aur dard bhara likha hai aapne

dhundhli yaad mere dost dosti me koi banta nahi
doston ke bina to yaadon ka hi aastitava hota nahi


bhula pana namumkin hai dosti me kisi ko
koi mausam nahi hota ashk jo hata nahi

Shukriya Kaash ji!!
Nice addition too Thumbs UP
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«Reply #6 on: July 25, 2009, 07:31:48 AM »
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salma kya khoob likha hai dost dil khush ho gaya pad kar

yaad ban k raha jo ummra bhar dil mein mere
aaj woh hai keh raha meri yaad bhi mita dena
jara batlao usko chal rahi hain dhadkan kaise dil ki
kehta hai dil usko mitaya toh mujhko bhi tum mita dena
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«Reply #7 on: July 26, 2009, 09:11:43 AM »
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Wah Salma Ji Bahut Khoob. Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 26, 2009, 09:36:14 AM »
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bohat bohat khoob salma ji. bohat pyara!.... Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 28, 2009, 02:20:11 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on July 17, 2009, 11:16:10 AM
Kon hu mai ek dhundli yaad,
Jo shaam ke sath dhal jayega,

Astitva mera hawa ka jhoka,
Jo rituyo ki tarah badal jayega,

Sannate ki cheekh hu mai,
Shor-o-gul me kho jati hu,

Barf ka ek tukda hu mai,
Waqt ke sath pighal jati hu,

Kon hu mai jo puche koi,
Bhula bisra kissa yaad ayega,

Umid to yahi kiya hai zamane se,
Naam mera koi bhula nahi payega!!

It is really very good.... Applause Applause Daad kabul karein Salma dear
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«Reply #10 on: July 31, 2009, 02:20:05 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on July 17, 2009, 11:28:36 AM
Waah Bohat Achche Likha Hai Salma Ji,.
And Welcome Back To Yoindia,.

And NIce One Kaash Ji,.

Shukriya Azeem ji...
m still trying to come back Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: August 01, 2009, 09:03:26 AM »
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Shukriya sarvesh ji, Rajesh ji, Salil nice one too ,thanks Sam, Saurabh, and Roja sis Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: August 05, 2009, 10:24:28 AM »
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Quote from: salma786 on July 17, 2009, 11:16:10 AM
Kon hu mai ek dhundli yaad,
Jo shaam ke sath dhal jayega,

Astitva mera hawa ka jhoka,
Jo rituyo ki tarah badal jayega,

Sannate ki cheekh hu mai,
Shor-o-gul me kho jati hu,

Barf ka ek tukda hu mai,
Waqt ke sath pighal jati hu,

Kon hu mai jo puche koi,
Bhula bisra kissa yaad ayega,

Umid to yahi kiya hai zamane se,
Naam mera koi bhula nahi payega!!



Waah.. Zabardast kalaam hai.. bohot achha likha hai salma sahiba!.
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«Reply #13 on: August 27, 2009, 05:49:12 AM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on August 05, 2009, 10:24:28 AM
Waah.. Zabardast kalaam hai.. bohot achha likha hai salma sahiba!.

Shukriya Sayyid Randeri ji!
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«Reply #14 on: August 27, 2009, 06:10:03 AM »
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wah g wah kia baat hai ap ki....
bohat hi khoob likha hai aise  hi likhti rahie...
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