Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala !!!!!

by Talat on April 15, 2005, 06:30:38 AM
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Dost ban kar bhi nahin saath nibhane waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

(By Ahmad Faraz)

I have created my shayari on the basis of second sher by Faraz sahab :

Humne paaya tha jalte hue sahra main jise
Ek humnava, ek maharbaan samjha tha jise
Khanjar aaya tha usi dost ki jaanib se magar
Zakhm mila hai hume kabhi na bharne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Har khushi hum ko mili hai adhoori hi sada
Dost hote hain lekin nahin karte hain wafa
Humne imaan ki tarah rakha tha waada uska
Waada dosti ka kar ke phir mukarne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Unko haq hai wo tod den har talluq humse
Bhool jayen unhe ye na hoga kabhi humse
Guzre pal saheje hain anmol moti ki tarah
Koi nahin is ki qeemat ko parakhne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Jo bhi hai, dost wo hume payara hai bohot
Uski zindagi ke badle main le len hum maut
Qurban kar den hum khushian apni uske liye
In jazbaat ko koi nahin hai samajhne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala :-( :-( :-(

First two lines are not mine...rest are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 15, 2005, 03:55:16 PM »
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Wah Talat ji....lajwab hai apka ye andaz e baya

Kissi ki majburi ko tum na bewafai samjho,
Kai aur bhi ho sakte hai farz zamane ke...
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«Reply #2 on: April 15, 2005, 04:02:44 PM »
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tooooooo good Talat sis.............................................. .......
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«Reply #3 on: April 15, 2005, 04:05:00 PM »
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Dost ban kar bhi nahin saath nibhane waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Humne paaya tha jalte hue sahra main jise
Ek humnava, ek maharbaan samjha tha jise
Khanjar aaya tha usi dost ki jaanib se magar
Zakhm mila hai hume kabhi na bharne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Har khushi hum ko mili hai adhoori hi sada
Dost hote hain lekin nahin karte hain wafa
Humne imaan ki tarah rakha tha waada uska
Waada dosti ka kar ke phir mukarne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Unko haq hai wo tod den har talluq humse
Bhool jayen unhe ye na hoga kabhi humse
Guzre pal saheje hain anmol moti ki tarah
Koi nahin is ki qeemat ko parakhne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Jo bhi hai, dost wo hume payara hai bohot
Uski zindagi ke badle main le len hum maut
Qurban kar den hum khushian apni uske liye
In jazbaat ko koi nahin hai samajhne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala :-( :-( :-(

First two lines are not mine...rest are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 :D
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«Reply #4 on: April 15, 2005, 04:16:54 PM »
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Thanks Amit.....Nikki.... Meena happy9

Ye maana aur bhi hain farz nibhane ko zamane main
Magar aisa bhi kya qata-e-taaluq kar le koi doston se!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: April 15, 2005, 04:20:50 PM »
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wah nice one talat ji......................................wah wah .....................................
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«Reply #6 on: April 15, 2005, 04:23:57 PM »
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wah nice one talat ji......................................wah wah .....................................


Thanks a lot Amit happy9
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«Reply #7 on: April 15, 2005, 04:25:28 PM »
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my pleasure talat ji ................................................. .............................
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«Reply #8 on: April 16, 2005, 08:58:14 AM »
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wow talat........too good.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #9 on: April 16, 2005, 11:15:09 AM »
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wahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!  talat...........thy.....bahot  khoob........
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«Reply #10 on: April 16, 2005, 01:36:17 PM »
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wow talat........too good.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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wahhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!  talat...........thy.....bahot  khoob........


Thanks Nidhi n Waheed!!!!! happy9
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«Reply #11 on: April 17, 2005, 10:47:19 AM »
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ur  welcome  talat...................:lol:...............
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«Reply #12 on: May 21, 2005, 06:11:46 PM »
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Maine dushman ko bhi ehsaas-e-mohabbat bakhsha
Mere  apne    mujhe    nafrat   ki saza  daite hain !!!

(NM)
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«Reply #13 on: May 22, 2005, 12:08:03 PM »
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Dost ban kar bhi nahin saath nibhane waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Humne paaya tha jalte hue sahra main jise
Ek humnava, ek maharbaan samjha tha jise
Khanjar aaya tha usi dost ki jaanib se magar
Zakhm mila hai hume kabhi na bharne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Har khushi hum ko mili hai adhoori hi sada
Dost hote hain lekin nahin karte hain wafa
Humne imaan ki tarah rakha tha waada uska
Waada dosti ka kar ke phir mukarne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Unko haq hai wo tod den har talluq humse
Bhool jayen unhe ye na hoga kabhi humse
Guzre pal saheje hain anmol moti ki tarah
Koi nahin is ki qeemat ko parakhne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala

Jo bhi hai, dost wo hume payara hai bohot
Uski zindagi ke badle main le len hum maut
Qurban kar den hum khushian apni uske liye
In jazbaat ko koi nahin hai samajhne waala
Wohi andaaz hai zaalim ka zamane waala :-( :-( :-(

First two lines are not mine...rest are!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




bahut aacha hai ji,..... i like it,....
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2005, 06:19:24 AM »
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Thanks a lot Tushar........................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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