Yad ati hai...

by brokenbyluv on July 15, 2009, 07:36:21 PM
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Koi rutha hua shakhs aaj bahut yad aaya,
ek guzra hua vaqt aaj bahut yad aaya,
chhupa leta tha jo merre dard ko apne sine mein...
aaj phir dard hua tou vo bahut yad aaya...... sad10


Not mine..
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«Reply #1 on: July 15, 2009, 07:41:46 PM »
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kia kahne

afsoos hua bechara sidhaar gaya
shayed ho sakta hai uske haq mein behter hua ho







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«Reply #2 on: July 15, 2009, 07:44:33 PM »
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Javed ji feelings  ki kadar karna sikho
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«Reply #3 on: July 15, 2009, 07:51:18 PM »
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Baja fermaya aapne

pahle likhna seekho

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«Reply #4 on: July 15, 2009, 07:53:20 PM »
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kya likhna sikhe??
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«Reply #5 on: July 16, 2009, 02:56:13 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 15, 2009, 07:36:21 PM
Koi rutha hua shakhs aaj bahut yad aaya,
ek guzra hua vaqt aaj bahut yad aaya,
chhupa leta tha jo merre dard ko apne sine mein...
aaj phir dard hua tou vo bahut yad aaya...... sad10

yad - Yaad.., sine - seene, Vaqt - Waqt, merre - Mere, tou - Toh or To,

Anyway Nice sharing broken ji.
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«Reply #6 on: July 16, 2009, 06:42:36 PM »
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shukriya roja ji hamari galtiya sudharne k liye..aur hamari shayari ki tarif k liye...
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«Reply #7 on: July 30, 2009, 10:28:10 AM »
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bahut achcha likha hai broken aap abhi yahan nayi hain likhne mein paredhaani toh hogi hi phir bhi apne bahut achchi panktiyan share kii hai ..aur javed bhai broken ka kehna sahi hai kii feelings kii kadra karna seekhiye
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2009, 10:34:50 AM »
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shukriya saahil ji....
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2009, 10:35:46 AM »
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Quote from: brokenbyluv on July 15, 2009, 07:36:21 PM
Koi rutha hua shakhs aaj bahut yad aaya,
ek guzra hua vaqt aaj bahut yad aaya,
chhupa leta tha jo merre dard ko apne sine mein...
aaj phir dard hua tou vo bahut yad aaya...... sad10


Not mine..

Very Nice Sharing Luv Ji


Yaad Uski Dil Main Basi Hai Aise,
Rooh Ka Jism Se Ho Rishta Jaise,

Har Qadam Pe Saath Tha Ban Ke Saaya,
Bin Uske Kate Ye Zindagi Kaise
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2009, 10:37:15 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 30, 2009, 10:35:46 AM
Very Nice Sharing Luv Ji


Yaad Uski Dil Main Basi Hai Aise,
Rooh Ka Jism Se Ho Rishta Jaise,

Har Qadam Pe Saath Tha Ban Ke Saaya,
Bin Uske Kate Ye Zindagi Kaise
bahut achche di kya khoob lines likhi hain aapne
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«Reply #11 on: July 30, 2009, 10:41:31 AM »
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shukriya celmira ji..aur waah kya khoob likha hai aapne...bahut badhiya ji...
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«Reply #12 on: January 15, 2010, 06:59:09 AM »
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Bahut achhi creation share ki hai BBL ji. Thanks for sharing.
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