Ye Dua Hai Yunhi Muskurata Rahe...!!

by Talat on June 20, 2009, 01:45:57 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 22, 2009, 02:36:47 AM »
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It is very nice shayari dear Talat...  Thumbs UP Usual Smile
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«Reply #16 on: June 22, 2009, 12:32:10 PM »
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Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 20, 2009, 08:29:47 PM
Celmira ji aap ke ash'ar ki tareef to sab ne ki or wo is qabil bhi he, magar yahan aap ki soch or us ki gehrai ne bohot mutassir kiya, jazbaat ka hona alag baat hai, magar use thik usi tarah alfaaz me dhalna bohot mushkil or maharat ka kaam hai...bohot shaandaar or jaandaar kalaam hai...Waah.

Tah-e-dil se aapka shukriya Sayyid aapne itni izzat di hume aur is ghazal ko....Ye aapke dil ki achchai hai jo aapne doosre main mehsoos kiya....Bohot bohot shukriya aapka  icon_flower
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«Reply #17 on: June 22, 2009, 01:08:40 PM »
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hmmm..ab mai kahu Talat sis....kitna pyara likhti h aap....itni pyari dua...
 mujhe alfaaz hi nahi mil rahe khuch kehne k liye..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
                   
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«Reply #18 on: June 22, 2009, 04:37:30 PM »
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Quote from: Deepati on June 21, 2009, 04:20:02 AM
Sach mein bahut hee masoomiyat hai aapki is Ghazal mein, Celmira Ji!  Bahut pyaare alfaaz hain! Applause

Thanks so much Deepati for the lovely words Usual Smile
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«Reply #19 on: June 23, 2009, 01:09:07 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on June 21, 2009, 09:32:59 AM
Bahut Bahut Bahut Khoooob Talat!!!

Itni Achi Dua Dene Wala shaks Aaj Ke daur mein Bahut Mushkil Se Milta Hai!!!!

Aapne Yeh Jo Nazm Likhi hai,Yeh Sirf Aapke Shayari ki Tareef nahi,Aapke Astitva Ki bhi Tareef hai..

Bahut Khushkismat Hoga Woh insaan Jiske Liye Aapne Yeh Nazm Likhi..Jo Aapka Itna Acha Dost Hoga.. icon_flower

Bahut Bahut Ache Dost!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Kaise shukriya ada karen...aapne bohot izzat di hai ye keh kar ...Thanks so much dear friend...aap ne itna kuch keh diya yahan...mere paas lafz hi nahin bache kuch kehne ko  notworthy notworthy Thanks a lot Khwaish
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«Reply #20 on: June 23, 2009, 06:55:39 PM »
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Quote from: Azeem on June 21, 2009, 09:34:07 AM
Bohat Achche Talat Sis,.

Thank You Azeem
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«Reply #21 on: June 25, 2009, 12:25:48 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on June 21, 2009, 03:37:46 PM
Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Talat Di..Bahoot hi pyari Gazal likhi hai!

Thanks so much Divs Usual Smile
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«Reply #22 on: July 01, 2009, 03:06:47 PM »
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Quote from: Roja on June 22, 2009, 02:36:47 AM
It is very nice shayari dear Talat...  Thumbs UP Usual Smile

Thanks a lot dear Usual Smile
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«Reply #23 on: July 02, 2009, 07:04:04 AM »
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ACHCHAA LIKHA HAI AAPNEY DR. SAHIBAA
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«Reply #24 on: July 09, 2009, 08:15:16 AM »
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Quote from: poppoetry on June 22, 2009, 01:08:40 PM
hmmm..ab mai kahu Talat sis....kitna pyara likhti h aap....itni pyari dua...
 mujhe alfaaz hi nahi mil rahe khuch kehne k liye..... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
                   
                    icon_salut icon_salut icon_salut

Thanks so much Pops dear for your lovely appreciations Usual Smile
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«Reply #25 on: July 09, 2009, 11:57:15 AM »
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Quote from: Celmira on June 20, 2009, 01:45:57 PM
Ye ghazal maine pehle kisi ke thread main likhi thi......Is main kuch changes kar ke, ek naye ehsaas ke saath post kar rahi hoon..Ummeed hai aap dost pasand karenge..!!


kis tarhan tareef ki jaaye aapki talat har alfaaz jaise motiyo.n se saja hua, aur ehsaas maano ke samndar ki un gehraaiyo.n tak jahan phuchna mushkil hi nahi namumkin bhi ho aap wahan tak sochti ho, bhut hi piyaari ghazal, aap youn hi likhit rahiye aur is mehfil ko nawaazti rahiye, god bless u
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«Reply #26 on: July 09, 2009, 01:43:31 PM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on July 02, 2009, 07:04:04 AM
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ACHCHAA LIKHA HAI AAPNEY DR. SAHIBAA

Thanks so much Khamosh Ji  icon_flower
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«Reply #27 on: July 10, 2009, 02:15:17 PM »
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Quote from: aaina on July 09, 2009, 11:57:15 AM
kis tarhan tareef ki jaaye aapki talat har alfaaz jaise motiyo.n se saja hua, aur ehsaas maano ke samndar ki un gehraaiyo.n tak jahan phuchna mushkil hi nahi namumkin bhi ho aap wahan tak sochti ho, bhut hi piyaari ghazal, aap youn hi likhit rahiye aur is mehfil ko nawaazti rahiye, god bless u

Aslam Ji, aapne itna kuch keh diya ki mere paas lafz hi nahin bache hain...aap khud ek bohot umdah shayar hain aur aap se bohot kuch seekhne ko milta hai. Yunhi hume mauqa dete rahiyega seekhne ka.....aur bohot bohot shukriya aapne itni khoobsurat tareef se nawaza  notworthy notworthy

Thanks so much Aslam Ji.
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«Reply #28 on: July 10, 2009, 06:47:47 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aap ne Celmira Ji
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«Reply #29 on: July 14, 2009, 10:03:47 AM »
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Bohot bohot shukriya aap ka Rajesh Ji
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