Ye main saare yoindians dosto ko dedicate karta hun!..

by redwhitegang on July 07, 2006, 08:27:39 PM
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Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se tera yaar bana
duniya ka kya hai,tu hi sab hai,
tu hii dil ke maron ka rab hai
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana
Par tune bhi to gum khub kamai
Khud me hii gumo ka pahad samai
Phirbhi dubti hui nao ka  majhdhar bana
Ter likhe par mera sir nam hota hai
Tere liye har shabd hi kam hota hai
Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se yoindian yaar bana
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana.

Ye main saare yoindians dosto ko dedicate karta hun!..u all r awesome friends :D
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2006, 09:26:36 AM »
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Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se tera yaar bana
duniya ka kya hai,tu hi sab hai,
tu hii dil ke maron ka rab hai
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana
Par tune bhi to gum khub kamai
Khud me hii gumo ka pahad samai
Phirbhi dubti hui nao ka  majhdhar bana
Ter likhe par mera sir nam hota hai
Tere liye har shabd hi kam hota hai
Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se yoindian yaar bana
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana.

Ye main saare yoindians dosto ko dedicate karta hun!..you all r awesome friends :D


Wah wah Shahid bahut acha laga... itna pyara likha hai.. thx... :D
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2006, 09:46:28 AM »
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Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se tera yaar bana
duniya ka kya hai,tu hi sab hai,
tu hii dil ke maron ka rab hai
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana
Par tune bhi to gum khub kamai
Khud me hii gumo ka pahad samai
Phirbhi dubti hui nao ka  majhdhar bana
Ter likhe par mera sir nam hota hai
Tere liye har shabd hi kam hota hai
Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se yoindian yaar bana
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana.

Ye main saare yoindians dosto ko dedicate karta hun!..you all r awesome friends :D

Wah wah Shahid bahut acha laga... itna pyara likha hai.. thx... :D

Thnank u dear! :D ......

Tum kya ho tum ko khud nahi malum
Hamne har chot me teri dosti ka marham lagaya
Zindagii ka har lamha aab tera karz dar hai,khusi me to hoii
Gam o me bhi behte aksh ko pochne wala tujh jaisa yaar paya
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ranjana
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2006, 10:01:23 AM »
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Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se tera yaar bana
duniya ka kya hai,tu hi sab hai,
tu hii dil ke maron ka rab hai
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana
Par tune bhi to gum khub kamai
Khud me hii gumo ka pahad samai
Phirbhi dubti hui nao ka  majhdhar bana
Ter likhe par mera sir nam hota hai
Tere liye har shabd hi kam hota hai
Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se yoindian yaar bana
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana.

Ye main saare yoindians dosto ko dedicate karta hun!..you all r awesome friends :D


wah!!! kya baat hai ........bahut khub........ab yahan mujhe nahi sujh raha kaya likhu......... Puzzled !  Usual Smile

tere is likhe ko reply dene ke liye aaj mere bhi lafaz chup ho gaye
aisa acha likha tune ki aaj hum teri  shayari ke Fan ho gaye.... :wink:  :D
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2006, 09:04:30 PM »
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Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se tera yaar bana
duniya ka kya hai,tu hi sab hai,
tu hii dil ke maron ka rab hai
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana
Par tune bhi to gum khub kamai
Khud me hii gumo ka pahad samai
Phirbhi dubti hui nao ka  majhdhar bana
Ter likhe par mera sir nam hota hai
Tere liye har shabd hi kam hota hai
Gum me rehna hamne chod di jab se yoindian yaar bana
Aab to mai bhi teri shayari ka bimar bana.

Ye main saare yoindians dosto ko dedicate karta hun!..you all r awesome friends :D


wah!!! kya baat hai ........bahut khub........ab yahan mujhe nahi sujh raha kaya likhu......... Puzzled !  Usual Smile

tere is likhe ko reply dene ke liye aaj mere bhi lafaz chup ho gaye
aisa acha likha tune ki aaj hum teri  shayari ke Fan ho gaye.... :wink:  :D


shukriya ranz-na...........

Bas teri duaon ka asar hai
Har gum bhi jisse be-asar hai
Aab to teri baton ka hii sahara hain dost
Jindagi ka har ek pal  aab tumhara hai....
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anjani_si
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2006, 11:37:01 PM »
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RWG, ranju, and anush.....really nice...:D:D
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redwhitegang
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«Reply #6 on: July 11, 2006, 06:55:23 PM »
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RWG, ranju, and anush.....really nice...:D:D

Shukriya anjani ji! :D
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badnaam_shayar
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2006, 04:10:01 AM »
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Gud JOb Shahid.....Anu and Ranju
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aaramish
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2006, 04:12:57 AM »
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Wah yaha to mehfil jemi hui hai hum aaj hi aye hai aur janay ko dil nei keraha, bahut sunder likha hai sab nay. Good wk
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