छोड दिया:Shairy-e-Dost (Friendship Poetry)

sapana

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तुजेह चाहके चाहना छोड दिया
किसीको अपना मानना छोड दिया

अब क्यां लेना देना हैं सांसोसे
जीते जी मैने भी जीना छोड दिया

तेरी चहेक जो गई जिंदगीसे
परिंदोने भी गुनगुना छोड दिया

तुं जहां है बस खुश ही होगा,
तेरे बारेमे पूछना छोड दिया

जबसे मिला है जामे कवसर
हमने मयखाना छोड दिया

मरज़ीके मुताबिक क्यां होगा
सपनाने दिलको डाटना छोड दिया..

सपना विजापुरा
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Satish Shukla

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #1 on: May 16, 2011, 09:05:39 PM »

Sapana Ji,
very deep thoughts you have expressed in
your poetry...keep on writiing..if possible
in Hindi script only.
Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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Satish Shukla

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #2 on: May 16, 2011, 09:07:12 PM »

Sapana Ji,
very deep thoughts you have expressed in
your poetry...keep on writiing..if possible
in Hindi script only.
Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
Mumbai INDIA


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sapana

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2011, 09:37:16 PM »

शुक्रिया सतीश साहेब!
सपना


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manjum

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2011, 04:59:23 AM »

bahut khub..


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sapana

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2011, 01:52:07 PM »

shukriya manjum..sapana


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R.M. Dixit

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #6 on: May 18, 2011, 05:27:49 PM »

Hi Sapna,
Bahut lajawaab kavita pesh ki aapne
bahut achi lagi aur dil khush hohaya.
Bahut dhnyawad apni aur prastutiyan
pesh kerte rahen. so nice All the best.


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sapana

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #7 on: May 18, 2011, 09:24:17 PM »

Thanks mr Dixit!


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SURESH SANGWAN

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #8 on: June 04, 2011, 09:20:42 AM »

BAHUT KHOOB SAPANA JI
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harashmahajan

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Re: छोड दिया

«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2011, 03:32:29 PM »

bahoot khoob Sapna ji...isi tarah bazm ki rounaq badaate rahiyega...

Harash Mahajan


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