तस्वीर की लड़की bekarar

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अरसे बाद योइंडिया पे आया तो अपनी ही एक पोस्ट पे मेरी मित्र “पूजा” के अवतार पे नजर गई, और उनके साथ योइंडिया पे बिठाये सभी खुशगवार पल याद हो आये,
उनके अवतार पे कुछ पंक्तियाँ बन गई, आप सभी कदरदानो की नजर

बदलते रंग के जैसी, वो इक तस्वीर की लड़की
खड़ी इठला के, बलखा के वो इक तस्वीर सी लड़की,

हर शेर में थी वो, हर महफ़िल में शामिल थी 
किसी वाइज के होठो की तहरीर सी लड़की,

मसरूफियत हो या, पाबन्दी पलों की हो,
बड़ी शोखी से हंसती थी, वो गंभीर सी लड़की,

अभी भी दिख ही जाती है, किसी पन्ने पुराने पे,
अचानक खुल गयी हो ज्यूँ, मेरी तकदीर सी लड़की,
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«Reply #1 on: January 27, 2014, 03:01:31 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: January 27, 2014, 03:57:34 AM »
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Welcome Back Sanjeev Bhai Usual Smile


मसरूफियत हो या, पाबन्दी पलों की हो,
बड़ी शोखी से हंसती थी, वो गंभीर सी लड़की,

Wahhhh Kya Likha Hai Bhai
Waqai Mein Aisi Hi Thin Woh

Missss Youuu Pooja Jee

Pls Come Back.. sad10

Aaj To Sabhi Puraane Doston Ki
Yaad Dila Di Bhaai Aapne sad5
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«Reply #3 on: January 27, 2014, 04:44:40 AM »
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बहुत खूबसूरत है,भाई वाह.!!
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«Reply #4 on: January 27, 2014, 08:23:41 AM »
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«Reply #5 on: January 27, 2014, 09:35:08 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: January 27, 2014, 05:25:04 PM »
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Wah  bahut  khoob  Sanjeev  ji.aapne  imandaari  se  dosti  nibhayi Pooja  ji  ke  saath.outstanding. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: January 27, 2014, 07:08:56 PM »
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Bahut khooooooooob... dheron daaaaaaaad...
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«Reply #8 on: January 27, 2014, 11:38:25 PM »
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अरसे बाद योइंडिया पे आया तो अपनी ही एक पोस्ट पे मेरी मित्र “पूजा” के अवतार पे नजर गई, और उनके साथ योइंडिया पे बिठाये सभी खुशगवार पल याद हो आये,
उनके अवतार पे कुछ पंक्तियाँ बन गई, आप सभी कदरदानो की नजर

बदलते रंग के जैसी, वो इक तस्वीर की लड़की
खड़ी इठला के, बलखा के वो इक तस्वीर सी लड़की,

हर शेर में थी वो, हर महफ़िल में शामिल थी 
किसी वाइज के होठो की तहरीर सी लड़की,

मसरूफियत हो या, पाबन्दी पलों की हो,
बड़ी शोखी से हंसती थी, वो गंभीर सी लड़की,

अभी भी दिख ही जाती है, किसी पन्ने पुराने पे,
अचानक खुल गयी हो ज्यूँ, मेरी तकदीर सी लड़की,


gr888888888,sir
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«Reply #9 on: January 29, 2014, 02:05:23 PM »
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wha wha

thanks Rajan ji
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«Reply #10 on: January 29, 2014, 02:08:15 PM »
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Welcome Back Sanjeev Bhai Usual Smile


मसरूफियत हो या, पाबन्दी पलों की हो,
बड़ी शोखी से हंसती थी, वो गंभीर सी लड़की,

Wahhhh Kya Likha Hai Bhai
Waqai Mein Aisi Hi Thin Woh

Missss Youuu Pooja Jee

Pls Come Back.. sad10

Aaj To Sabhi Puraane Doston Ki
Yaad Dila Di Bhaai Aapne sad5

shukriya bhai shihab,

waqai puraane dost aur puraane panne......yaad aate hain, ek ek poetry 10-15 panno tak pe fail jaati thi, kyunki javaab bhi aksar log sher kahkar hi dete the, silsilaa chal niklta tha,
usme pooja ji number 1 thin.
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बहुत खूबसूरत है,भाई वाह.!!
bahoot abhar mitr
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waah waah
aapki daad sir aankhon pe saini sir
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bahut khoob
shukriya ji Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: January 29, 2014, 02:12:27 PM »
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Wah  bahut  khoob  Sanjeev  ji.aapne  imandaari  se  dosti  nibhayi Pooja  ji  ke  saath.outstanding. icon_salut icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause

shukriya madhu ji, aapke comment padh kar achcha laga Usual Smile
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