थोड़ी दूर साथ चला था

by veeransh on November 14, 2010, 05:19:57 PM
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थोड़ी दूर साथ चला था

कोई पहचाना सा चेहरा,
हमें भीड़ में दिखा था|
कोई मरासिम नहीं था,
बस थोड़ी दूर साथ चला था|

दूर वफ़ा के साहिल थे,
उसके हम कहाँ काबिल थे|
ना उम्मीद थी ना गिला था,
बस थोड़ी दूर साथ चला था|

हमने कुछ कहा भी नहीं,
उसने कुछ पुछा भी नहीं|
शायद वो सब जानता था,
इसलिए खामोश खड़ा था|
बस थोड़ी दूर साथ चला था…

कोई गम तो नहीं रुखसत का,
कोई सबब भी नहीं कुर्बत का|
बस मिल गयी थी लकीरें,
लकीरों में मिलना लिखा था|
बस थोड़ी दूर साथ चला था…

मुन्तजिर नहीं किसी आहट का,
कच्चा सा धागा है चाहत का|
मैं डूब गया हूँ वो भी ढला था|
बस थोड़ी दूर साथ चला था|

-वीर
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«Reply #1 on: November 15, 2010, 08:37:43 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob veeransh jii..bada achha laga apdhkar..

dhero sari daad~
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«Reply #2 on: November 15, 2010, 09:13:35 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoot hi khoob aur bilkul jaane-pahchane se jajbaat.....dheron daad aapko janab
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«Reply #3 on: November 15, 2010, 09:18:03 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: November 15, 2010, 10:33:49 AM »
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beshak bahut hi badhiya likha hai aapne... !

Intezar !
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«Reply #5 on: November 15, 2010, 05:42:32 PM »
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बहुत बहुत शुक्रिया!

- वीर
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