****26/11...KA DARD*****(Riyaz)

by riyaz106 on November 27, 2009, 05:20:15 AM
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Tumhara kya bigada tha, jo unko maar dala tha
Kisi ko wo bhi pyare the, unhen bhi maa ne pala tha

Kisi ki maa bilakhti hai, kahin bachha sisakta hai
Kisi ne chheen li khushiyan, musalsal dil tadapta hai
Jinhone khoya apno ko, na unka haal bas puchho
Na unki raat hoti hai, na unka din nikalta hai

Kisi ki aankh ka tara, kisi ghar ka ujala tha
Tumhara kya bigada tha, jo unko maar dala tha

_Riyaz 'Ashna'_
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«Reply #1 on: November 27, 2009, 09:48:29 AM »
Mashallah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Dost, Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #2 on: November 27, 2009, 10:37:38 AM »
Shukriya Dost, Aap bhi bahut achha likhte hain. Masha Allah
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«Reply #3 on: November 27, 2009, 11:00:26 AM »
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Aur Sahi Likha Hai Riyaz Ji

Kyu Majhab Ke Nam Pe Karte Ho Begunah Pe Sitam
Band Karo Ye Ladai Ab Karo Ye Kissa Khatam
Bahut Ho chuka Ye Ek Dusre Ka Khun Bahana
Bhai Bhai Hokar Ladte Ho Kuch to Karo Ab Sharam
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«Reply #4 on: November 27, 2009, 11:24:09 AM »
Reply ka shukria Rishi bhai. Aapne sahi farmaya mazhab ke naam par khoon bahana sharm ki baat hai. Hum sab ka farz hai nafrat ki hawa ko chalne  na den aur muhabbat ko phailaen. Aapki poetry bhi bahut achhi lagi jo aapke achhe khayalat ko reflect karti hai. Thanks
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«Reply #5 on: November 27, 2009, 11:55:15 AM »
Quote from: riyaz106 on November 27, 2009, 05:20:15 AM
Tumhara kya bigada tha, jo unko maar dala tha
Kisi ko wo bhi pyare the, unhen bhi maa ne pala tha

Kisi ki maa bilakhti hai, kahin bachha sisakta hai
Kisi ne chheen li khushiyan, musalsal dil tadapta hai
Jinhone khoya apno ko, na unka haal bas puchho
Na unki raat hoti hai, na unka din nikalta hai

Kisi ki aankh ka tara, kisi ghar ka ujala tha
Tumhara kya bigada tha, jo unko maar dala tha

_Riyaz 'Ashna'

Wah! Kamaal ka likha hai aap ne Ashna Ji
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«Reply #6 on: November 27, 2009, 11:56:37 AM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 27, 2009, 11:00:26 AM
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Aur Sahi Likha Hai Riyaz Ji

Kyu Majhab Ke Nam Pe Karte Ho Begunah Pe Sitam
Band Karo Ye Ladai Ab Karo Ye Kissa Khatam
Bahut Ho chuka Ye Ek Dusre Ka Khun Bahana
Bhai Bhai Hokar Ladte Ho Kuch to Karo Ab Sharam
Bahut khoob Rishi Ji
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«Reply #7 on: November 27, 2009, 01:29:42 PM »
Very Nice Riyaz Bhai
Bahoot Khoob Likha  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: November 27, 2009, 01:53:04 PM »
Quote from: riyaz106 on November 27, 2009, 11:24:09 AM
Reply ka shukria Rishi bhai. Aapne sahi farmaya mazhab ke naam par khoon bahana sharm ki baat hai. Hum sab ka farz hai nafrat ki hawa ko chalne  na den aur muhabbat ko phailaen. Aapki poetry bhi bahut achhi lagi jo aapke achhe khayalat ko reflect karti hai. Thanks

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Riyaz Bhai Aur Hum Sab Chahte Hai Ki Ye Dange Fasad Band Ho Jaye Aur Sab Chain Ki Zindagi Basar Kare
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«Reply #9 on: November 27, 2009, 01:53:32 PM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on November 27, 2009, 11:56:37 AM
Bahut khoob Rishi Ji

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Rajesh JI
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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2009, 09:09:19 PM »
Quote from: riyaz106 on November 27, 2009, 05:20:15 AM
Tumhara kya bigada tha, jo unko maar dala tha
Kisi ko wo bhi pyare the, unhen bhi maa ne pala tha

Kisi ki maa bilakhti hai, kahin bachha sisakta hai
Kisi ne chheen li khushiyan, musalsal dil tadapta hai
Jinhone khoya apno ko, na unka haal bas puchho
Na unki raat hoti hai, na unka din nikalta hai

Kisi ki aankh ka tara, kisi ghar ka ujala tha
Tumhara kya bigada tha, jo unko maar dala tha

_Riyaz 'Ashna'


Bohat acha likha hai aap ne its very true bohat ache Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #11 on: November 27, 2009, 09:10:51 PM »
Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on November 27, 2009, 11:00:26 AM
Bahut Khub Likha Hai Aur Sahi Likha Hai Riyaz Ji

Kyu Majhab Ke Nam Pe Karte Ho Begunah Pe Sitam
Band Karo Ye Ladai Ab Karo Ye Kissa Khatam
Bahut Ho chuka Ye Ek Dusre Ka Khun Bahana
Bhai Bhai Hokar Ladte Ho Kuch to Karo Ab Sharam

Bohat khoob very nice good Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #12 on: November 28, 2009, 07:32:28 AM »
Quote from: khushi4pari on November 27, 2009, 09:10:51 PM
Bohat khoob very nice good Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Khushi JI
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«Reply #13 on: November 28, 2009, 04:49:08 PM »
Dear Pank ji and Pari ji poetry pasand farmane kb bahut shukria.
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Badha ke hausla mera, Bada tohfa diya tumne.
Mila hai dhup mein saya, safar aasa.n kiya tumne.

_R.Ashna_
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Thanks
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«Reply #14 on: November 29, 2009, 08:57:40 PM »
Bohat ache very nice...
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