Aab-o-Hawaa

by pankajwfs on February 07, 2012, 10:57:38 AM
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Karna jaroori har kam hame
   jo naam roshan kare is desh ka|
Ab Ek yug ka ant hona chaihye
   Nai yug ke sutra-paat ke liye||

Hai mitana jaroori har kalank hame,
   jo dho raha har saks is desh ka|
Ab Ek Kranti is desh ko chahiye
   Badlne ko iski Aab-o-Hawaa ke liye||

                (PWFS)
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«Reply #1 on: February 07, 2012, 10:58:47 AM »
]Karna jaroori har kam hame
   jo naam roshan kare is desh ka|
Ab Ek yug ka ant hona chaihye
   Nai yug ke sutra-paat ke liye||

Hai mitana jaroori har kalank hame,
   jo dho raha har saks is desh ka|
Ab Ek Kranti is desh ko chahiye
   Badlne ko iski Aab-o-Hawaa ke liye||

                (PWFS 07/02/2012)
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2012, 11:10:10 AM »
Pankaj ji khyaal achhaa hai par buraa mat maaniye aabo-hawaa to sunaa hai lekin aabo-hawaat ye meree samajh se baahar hai pl clear karen
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«Reply #3 on: February 07, 2012, 11:16:29 AM »
thanks Saini Sir ... Thanks for sugestion. I have corrected it..
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«Reply #4 on: February 07, 2012, 11:17:41 AM »
Good God bless you
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«Reply #5 on: March 11, 2012, 01:04:54 AM »
wah bahut khoob pankaj ji:)
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