Aaj ke log bade sawaliyaa

by jannatjahan on April 26, 2009, 09:29:24 AM
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Aaj ke log bhaiyaa bade sawaliyaa,
niti par behas karte hain
durniti ki raah apnaate hain
asatya keh kar, asatya sun kar
satya par bhasan dete hain
asatya ko mantra maan kar
satya par mar mitne ki
jhuthi aan nahi chhodte
durniti aur asatya apnaa kar
bhawnaon ka nikalte hain diwaliyaa
aaj ke log bhaiyaa bade sawaliyaa
sadachhar ke naare lagate
anachhar apnaate hain
be-imani chhori dakaiti se
apni jebein bharte hain
maar kaat loot khasot
chharon oar bas yahi vyapt hai
logon ki ichhayein yun hi bani rahi
to kuch dino me hi yeh duniyaa samapt hai
jhooth aur be-imani se inhone
kamar ko hai kas liya
aaj ke log bhaiya bade sawaliyaa...
aaj ke log bhaiyaa bade sawaliyaa...
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junaidqadir
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«Reply #1 on: April 26, 2009, 09:38:04 AM »
Janab-a-mann Adaab !!

Bahoth hi umda paimane pe tanz diya hai hukum ranoo ko ,, samajh jayen to nazar milana dushwar ho jaye !! dad qubool ho !!


Zindai khuch is tarha kash-ma-kash rahi !!
leke apne sang mujhe dar-dar bhatakti rahi !!
Sahera me samandar bhala kyoon kar mile !!
Pyaas mere labon pe rahe rahe ke tadapti rahi !!

Mazloom -o-masoomo ki bastiyon ko jalaya gaya !!
Adaath se majboor thi duniya hasti rahi !!

Qadir
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khamosh_aawaaz
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«Reply #2 on: April 26, 2009, 09:38:33 AM »

 jj gud going ....
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Talat
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«Reply #3 on: April 26, 2009, 09:39:55 AM »
Quote from: jannatjahan on April 26, 2009, 09:29:24 AM
Aaj ke log bhaiyaa bade sawaliyaa,
niti par behas karte hain
durniti ki raah apnaate hain
asatya keh kar, asatya sun kar
satya par bhasan dete hain
asatya ko mantra maan kar
satya par mar mitne ki
jhuthi aan nahi chhodte
durniti aur asatya apnaa kar
bhawnaon ka nikalte hain diwaliyaa
aaj ke log bhaiyaa bade sawaliyaa
sadachhar ke naare lagate
anachhar apnaate hain
be-imani chhori dakaiti se
apni jebein bharte hain
maar kaat loot khasot
chharon oar bas yahi vyapt hai
logon ki ichhayein yun hi bani rahi
to kuch dino me hi yeh duniyaa samapt hai
jhooth aur be-imani se inhone
kamar ko hai kas liya
aaj ke log bhaiya bade sawaliyaa...
aaj ke log bhaiyaa bade sawaliyaa...

Bohot Khoob Jannat..Very nice indeed !
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jannatjahan
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«Reply #4 on: April 26, 2009, 09:47:12 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on April 26, 2009, 09:39:55 AM
Bohot Khoob Jannat..Very nice indeed !
Hey Thanks Dear celmira Usual Smile
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2009, 09:48:06 AM »
Bohat bohat khoob JJ...and equally beautiful reply Qadeer  Aadat se majboor duniya hasti rahi.....Subhan_allah
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2009, 09:49:14 AM »
sach kaha Shweta.. Bhoot hi khoob likha hai dear.

bahoot khoob Qadir ji
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pandit
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«Reply #7 on: April 27, 2009, 09:20:23 PM »
WAAH JANNAT JEE....
BAHUT ACCHE..............
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MHussain
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2009, 07:59:55 AM »
I feel a sense of truth.
Most of the words pass through, meaning of Hindi words, please
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«Reply #9 on: April 28, 2009, 08:15:53 AM »
Bohat Achche Shwetha Ji,.

Aur Qadeer Bhaiya Kya Bhaari Tanz Diya Hai Aapne, bohat Achche./
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«Reply #10 on: May 03, 2009, 06:40:54 AM »
 hello

duni kee chhodo yah dekho

kaisee khudkee chaal hai?

ho behaal bhale sare par

kaisa apna hal hai?

aapnee-apnee karnee kar len

theek to sara jg sudhare.

'salil' saaf rakhlen nij soorat

to saree moorat nikhare..

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«Reply #11 on: May 03, 2009, 07:20:34 AM »
Nice One Sanjiv,.
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«Reply #12 on: May 03, 2009, 11:45:54 AM »
Jannat Jahan Aadaab,

Bahot khoob, mere hisaab se her alfaaz mein sachchai hai...
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«Reply #13 on: May 03, 2009, 11:49:42 AM »
Kab  se  hon  kya  bataon  jahane kharaab  mein
Shab haaye hijr ko bhi rakhkhon gar hisaab mein
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«Reply #14 on: May 03, 2009, 11:56:37 AM »
bohot acha likha hai jannat ji.. nice replies everyone..
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