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SAMPRADAYA KE THEKEDARO AANKHON SE PATTI KHOLO
BHAI HOKAR BHAI KI GARDAN PER KHANDA MAT TOLO
JANG-E-AAZADI ME SABNE MIL KAR KADAM BADHAYA THA
KYA PUNJABI KYA BANGALI SABNE KHOON BAHAYA THA
HINDU MUSLIM SIKKH ISAYEE SABNE VACHAN NIBHAYA THA
AAZADI KE MAHAYAGYA ME KAUN AKELA THA BOLO
AAZADI PAAKAR PHIR SABNE MIL KAR NAV-NIRMAN KIYA
ANBAN ME BHI SANG RAHE SABKO SAMUCHIT SAMMAN DIYA
PADI ZAROORAT SARHAD PER TO SABNE SEENA TAAN DIYA
EK SOOTRA ME BANDHI HUYEE PHOOLON KI MALA MAT KHOLO
BAAR BAAR ALGAOWAD KE MUDDE KYON UCHHALTE HO
DHARM JAATI BHASHA KE DAM PE KYON NUKSAN CHAHTE HO
KYON PAAWAN MITTI ME SAMPRADAYIK ZAHAR DALTE HO
GANGA JAMNA KI DHARA ME ZAHAR NA KOI TUM GHOLO
AAZADI AKSHUNDYA RAHE NISCHIT HUMKO KARNA HOGA
BHARAT BHOOMI SWATANTRA RAHE ISLIYE SWARTH TAJNA HOGA
DHARM JAATI SAB SANG RAHEN BALIDAN AHAM KARNA HOGA
CHANDI KE KUCHH SIKKON SE APNI AKHANDATA MAT TOLO
JIS MITTI ME JANME HAIN HUM US MITTI SE PYAR KAREN
SHANN NA GHATNE PAYE TIRANGE KI AISA VYAVHAR KAREN
AAO SAB MIL KAR BAPU KE SAPNO KO SAKAAR KAREN
EK BAR PHIR SAB MIL KAR BHARAT MATA KI JAI BOLO
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #1 on: May 24, 2009, 06:35:33 AM » |
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«Reply #2 on: May 24, 2009, 08:32:10 PM » |
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Bahut bahut bahut khoobsurat likha hia Sarvesh Ji aapne.
Aaj sabko pata hia ke ye Aazaadi kitni mushkil se mili hai. Par kisi ko ehsaas nahi hai ke dharm ke naam pe ladne se un shaheedon ka dil kitna rota hoga.
Ye Baat logonke samajh mein aa jaaye to zindagi ka rukh kuch aur ho, zindagi ki khoobsurti kuch aur ho.
Very well written Sarvesh Ji..
A salutable poem by you.
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«Reply #3 on: May 24, 2009, 09:00:06 PM » |
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beautiful creation sarvesh ji,very ice,keep it up.  |
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«Reply #4 on: May 25, 2009, 03:13:37 PM » |
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Bahut bahut shukriya Sophi Ji Aapki talian mera inam hain SARVESH RASTOGI |
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«Reply #5 on: May 25, 2009, 03:23:53 PM » |
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Shukriya Angel Ji
Aapne meri baat ko apne dhang se aur aage badhaya, Dhanyawad. Sach me desh aur samaj ki halat kuchh aisi hi ho gai hai. Isi ke liye maine likha tha ki -
JIS DHARTI PER PRABHU TUMNE JEE BHAR KAR PREM LUTAYA THA
KHEL KHEL ME HI JEE BHAR KAR MAKHAN DOODH BAHAYA THA
US DHARTI PER HI PRABHU JI AB NADI RUDHIR KI BAHTI HAI
JAATI DHARM BHASHA PER AKSAR HINSA HOTI RAHTI HAI
MANTRA-MUGDH KAR DE JO JAG KO MURLI KI WHO TAAN SUNAO
TARAS RAHA HAI MAN MAYUR KARUNA KE GHAN GHIR KAR AAO
Kindly keep on encouraging.
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«Reply #6 on: May 26, 2009, 08:28:04 AM » |
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ati uttam rastogi jee
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«Reply #7 on: May 26, 2009, 12:25:41 PM » |
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Shukriya Madhuwesh Ji
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«Reply #8 on: May 28, 2009, 02:33:56 AM » |
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Bahut Shukriya Naamgum Ji
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«Reply #9 on: May 28, 2009, 01:54:17 PM » |
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JANG-E-AAZADI ME SABNE MIL KAR KADAM BADHAYA THA
KYA PUNJABI KYA BANGALI SABNE KHOON BAHAYA THA
HINDU MUSLIM SIKKH ISAYEE SABNE VACHAN NIBHAYA THA
AAZADI KE MAHAYAGYA ME KAUN AKELA THA BOLO
BAAR BAAR ALGAOWAD KE MUDDE KYON UCHHALTE HO
DHARM JAATI BHASHA KE DAM PE KYON NUKSAN CHAHTE HO
KYON PAAWAN MITTI ME SAMPRADAYIK ZAHAR DALTE HO
GANGA JAMNA KI DHARA ME ZAHAR NA KOI TUM GHOLO
Bahut accha likha hai..Sach kahu toh Azadi jab milal hame
tab ka leaders k soch aur ab ka soch mein bahut badlav hai.
Aaj religion pe maara peeti ho raha hai, Bhashawon mein khoon karaba ho raha hai... I really feel sad.
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«Reply #10 on: May 28, 2009, 05:22:46 PM » |
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Bahut bahut Shukriya Kaash Ji Aapki taliyan meri kamai hain SARVESH RASTOGI |
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«Reply #11 on: May 28, 2009, 06:54:16 PM » |
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Very well written, very well presented....a very impressive creation.....Very nice thoughts.....Bohot Khoob Sarvesh Ji
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«Reply #12 on: May 28, 2009, 09:00:04 PM » |
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SARVESH RASTOGI BOHOT HI UMDA KALAAM HE, WAAH....
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«Reply #13 on: May 29, 2009, 04:52:02 PM » |
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SHUKRIYA ROJA JI
I AM VERY MUCH IMPRESSED WITH YOUR THOUGHTS
THANKS A LOT FOR THE COMPLIMENTS
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«Reply #14 on: May 31, 2009, 02:53:21 AM » |
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SHUKRIYA ROJA JI
I AM VERY MUCH IMPRESSED WITH YOUR THOUGHTS
THANKS A LOT FOR THE COMPLIMENTS
SARVESH RASTOGI
Most Welcome Sarvesh Rastogi ji.. 
(Me too impressed, with yr creations)
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on eTI community..
