Aaou deykho, kyaa machaa Hai Jamunaa key teer?

by abdbundeli on August 14, 2009, 02:04:03 PM
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Gaye chhorh: aaye naheen
Muddat sey Nandlaal?
Chaturmukhee aatank sey,
Huyee srushhti beyhaal!!

Raadhaa key sammaan mein,
Chheyrhee tum ney taan!
Aganit raadhaayen yahaan,
Jheyl raheen apmaan!!

Aaou deykho, kyaa machaa
Hai Jamunaa key teer?
Wyaapt pradooshhan sey, Prabho,
Haalat hai gambheer!

Jal peetey hee, wyathit ho,
Marney lagtey mor!
Apnee karunaa-drushhti kab
Daalogey is or?

Eik Kans thaa tab yahaan,
Ab hain shatak hazaar!
Nawjaatoun ko apratihat
Rahey roj hi maar!!

Intizaar hai! Kalki ban,
Kab logey awataar?
Dahashatgardee sey satat,
Maanaw jaye na haar?

- 'Ramwatiya'/'Abd Bundeli'
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Pooja
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«Reply #1 on: August 14, 2009, 04:44:01 PM »
bahoot bahoot khoob Abd ji!!!
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #2 on: August 14, 2009, 05:40:02 PM »
Quote from: Pooja on August 14, 2009, 04:44:01 PM
bahoot bahoot khoob Abd ji!!!
Thanks Pooja ji!
          - abd bundeli
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2009, 05:22:18 AM »
waah Waah Bahoot Khoob ABD ji.. bahoot Khoob!
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2009, 05:31:44 AM »
Quote from: Sophi on August 15, 2009, 05:22:18 AM
waah Waah Bahoot Khoob ABD ji.. bahoot Khoob!
Thanks Sophi ji!
          - abd bundeli
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2009, 01:14:43 AM »
Bahut khoob Abd ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2009, 03:30:33 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on August 16, 2009, 01:14:43 AM
Bahut khoob Abd ji,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Madhu!
           - abd bundeli   
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Roja
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«Reply #7 on: August 26, 2009, 12:44:27 PM »
Wonderful creation Uncle ji  Usual Smile
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abdbundeli
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«Reply #8 on: August 26, 2009, 02:42:46 PM »
Quote from: Roja on August 26, 2009, 12:44:27 PM
Wonderful creation Uncle ji  Usual Smile
Thanks Roja!
        - abd bundeli
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cara
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«Reply #9 on: August 26, 2009, 03:45:06 PM »
KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI.....

EK ROZ BANKAR MASIYA,FIRSEY DARTI PAR AANA HOGA TUJHE NANDLAL,
DEKH LEY KYA HOGAYA HAI IS DARTI KA HAAL.

NA JAANE KITNI MAASUMON KA KIYA JAATA HAI BALATKAR,
HAWAS KE SHIKARI SAMAJHTE HAI KARTE HAI KAMAAL.

AAJAAO GHANSHYAM DARTI PAR,FIRSEY CHALAAO AISA TEER,
HAMESHA KE LIYE YEH HAWASI JAANWAR MAR JAAYE, AAYE NA FIR.

AATANKION KI DAHSAT SEY DARTI HUGAYI HAI BEHAAL,
KI AAJAAO NANDLAL DARTI PAR,AATANKION KA KHATAMA KARDO HAR HAAL.

EK KANS TAB MAARA THA DARTI PAR,AB HOGAYE HAI NAFRAT KE KANS HAZAAR,
AAO CHEDO BAANSURI KI DHUN AISI,SAB NAFRAT BULKAR KARNE LAGE PYAAR.
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Roja
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«Reply #10 on: August 27, 2009, 02:20:48 AM »
Quote from: cara on August 26, 2009, 03:45:06 PM
KYA BAAT HAI ABD JI.....

EK ROZ BANKAR MASIYA,FIRSEY DARTI PAR AANA HOGA TUJHE NANDLAL,
DEKH LEY KYA HOGAYA HAI IS DARTI KA HAAL.

NA JAANE KITNI MAASUMON KA KIYA JAATA HAI BALATKAR,
HAWAS KE SHIKARI SAMAJHTE HAI KARTE HAI KAMAAL.

AAJAAO GHANSHYAM DARTI PAR,FIRSEY CHALAAO AISA TEER,
HAMESHA KE LIYE YEH HAWASI JAANWAR MAR JAAYE, AAYE NA FIR.

AATANKION KI DAHSAT SEY DARTI HUGAYI HAI BEHAAL,
KI AAJAAO NANDLAL DARTI PAR,AATANKION KA KHATAMA KARDO HAR HAAL.

EK KANS TAB MAARA THA DARTI PAR,AB HOGAYE HAI NAFRAT KE KANS HAZAAR,
AAO CHEDO BAANSURI KI DHUN AISI,SAB NAFRAT BULKAR KARNE LAGE PYAAR.

 Applause Applause Applause
It is toooooo good .... Cara ji aap bahut bahut accha likh lete hai. Mujhe bahut accha laga padkar. Keep up ji   Thumbs UP
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Roja
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2009, 02:28:24 AM »
Aatank ke daave jaan ko aadaab de gaye
Aalam ko hayi re khatre ka ethab de gaye
Bharat ke dil ko aajkal goli se marne
Aafat ke ghav Dilli ko kuch log de gaye

Rehnuman hazaron Bapu ke usoolon ki jaat ko,
Siyasat ki apni aadate kharab de gaye
Voton ko sabjbhaagon ka dekar tamacha khoob,
Janta ke muh ko bhukh ka intkaab de gaye

Anjaam dene wale khud bagawat ki aage mein
Katl-e-aam ki ek davat nayaab de gaye
Zalim nizaam dangon  ka aaina likhkar
Majhab ko khooni ka sailaab de gaye



conti....
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