~~~~Aawaaaz Bana Lo Yaaron~~~~~ "Raahi The King Of Way"

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After A long time ... I will here to Be With you all my friends....

from last 4 years i am not wrote any poetry... so plz i i had some mistakes on this poem than plz inform me for update this issues.


Apne Shabdon Ko Aawaj Bana Lo Yaaron
Mai Hu Sath Mujhe Sath Bula Lo Yaaron

hai Lamba Agar Safar To Hosala Bhi Hai
Raah Mushkil Nahi Kadmon Ko Badha Lo Yaaron

Hai Andheron Me Gardishon Me Duba Ye Jahaan
Aag Shabdon Me Laga Ke Mashal Jala Lo Yaaron

Koun Apna Hai Koun Paraya Ye Kehna Mushkil Hai
Do Shabd Mohabbat Ke Bol Kar Apna Bana Lo Yaaron

Hai Rang Aur Jaat Ka Bhed Is Duniya Me
Shabd "Insaan" Ka Dekar Ke Mila Lo Yaaron

'Ramzan' Me Hai 'Ram' , 'Diwali' Me 'Ali'
Mita Kar Bhed Sare Sabko Gale Laga Lo Yaaron.

Mai Bhi "Raahi" Hu Hai Rasty hamdam mere
Chalo Sath Mere Aur Manjil Ko Paa Loo Yaaron
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«Reply #1 on: July 08, 2016, 03:36:17 AM »
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Mai Hu Sath Mujhe Sath Bula Lo Yaaron  downtown sath ho aur sath bula lo  toothy9
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«Reply #2 on: July 08, 2016, 05:22:46 PM »
Quote from: Mast Khalander on July 08, 2016, 03:36:17 AM
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Mai Hu Sath Mujhe Sath Bula Lo Yaaron  downtown sath ho aur sath bula lo  toothy9

hmmm ji han

mai hu sath mujhe sath bula lo yaaron

isme bhavnaon ka farak hai

aap ne jisa padha waisa samjha maine jaisa samjha waisa likha

mai hu ..... yaroon ka matlab hai ke is kaam me mai bhi aap logo ke sath hu , bas shuruaat kar ke mujhe bhi shamil karo
thik waise hi jaise ek raah me chalty bhaut log hai manjil bhi sab ki ek hi ho par sab alag alag chalty jaty hai

mere kahne ka yahi matlab hai ke rasta aur manjil dono meri bhi wahi hai aap log aao aur mere sath ya mujhe sath lelo


thanks for reading my post mast khalandar ji
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«Reply #3 on: July 08, 2016, 05:28:03 PM »
Quote from: Rahi2001 on July 07, 2016, 08:37:26 PM
After A long time ... I will here to Be With you all my friends....

from last 4 years i am not wrote any poetry... so plz i i had some mistakes on this poem than plz inform me for update this issues.


Apne Shabdon Ko Aawaj Bana Lo Yaaron
Mai Hu Sath Mujhe Sath Bula Lo Yaaron

hai Lamba Agar Safar To Hosala Bhi Hai
Raah Mushkil Nahi Kadmon Ko Badha Lo Yaaron

Hai Andheron Me Gardishon Me Duba Ye Jahaan
Aag Shabdon Me Laga Ke Mashal Jala Lo Yaaron

Koun Apna Hai Koun Paraya Ye Kehna Mushkil Hai
Do Shabd Mohabbat Ke Bol Kar Apna Bana Lo Yaaron

Hai Rang Aur Jaat Ka Bhed Is Duniya Me
Shabd "Insaan" Ka Dekar Ke Mila Lo Yaaron

'Ramzan' Me Hai 'Ram' , 'Diwali' Me 'Ali'
Mita Kar Bhed Sare Sabko Gale Laga Lo Yaaron.

Mai Bhi "Raahi" Hu Hai Rasty hamdam mere
Chalo Sath Mere Aur Manjil Ko Paa Loo Yaaron




good composition,sir
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«Reply #4 on: July 08, 2016, 07:13:26 PM »
bahut bahut khoob waah.
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2016, 09:10:32 AM »
Quote from: surindarn on July 08, 2016, 07:13:26 PM
bahut bahut khoob waah.
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shukriya surindarn ji.

padhne ke lie Thankx
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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2016, 09:14:53 AM »
Quote from: marhoom bahayaat on July 08, 2016, 05:28:03 PM

good composition,sir

Shukriya Sir marhoom bahayaat Ji

aabhar...
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«Reply #7 on: July 11, 2016, 06:04:57 AM »
nice, very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 11, 2016, 08:04:42 AM »
Quote from: Sps on July 11, 2016, 06:04:57 AM
nice, very nice Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thankx SPS Ji
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«Reply #9 on: July 11, 2016, 09:44:59 AM »
Bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: July 15, 2016, 07:38:50 PM »
Quote from: Rustum Rangila on July 11, 2016, 09:44:59 AM
Bahot achey  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause


Bahut bahut dhanyawad rustam ji....
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