Barbar daanawtaa sey, sadaa mukt rahey dharaa!

by abdbundeli on June 20, 2009, 01:57:59 PM
Pages: [1]
Print
Author  (Read 1191 times)
abdbundeli
Guest
Barbar daanawtaa sey, sadaa mukt rahey dharaa!
Sahrudaya maanawataa kaa dhwaj sadaa rahey phahraa!
Anyaayee sey larh-larh, nyaayee ko abhaya kareyn;
Yug-yug tak weeroun ki rahey yahee paramparaa!!

                            - 'Ramwatiya'
Logged
Similar Poetry and Posts (Note: Find replies to above post after the related posts and poetry)
~:: Door Door tum rahey pukartey hum rahey ::~ by nirbhay in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Yeh sadaa-e-dil hai! by abdbundeli in Ghazals « 1 2  All »
Roz khwaaboun mein sadaa dey, hamain bulaatey ho! by abdbundeli in Shayri for Khumar -e- Ishq
Tumhaaree sadaa sun rahaa hoon azal sey! by abdbundeli in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
<>*Wo mukt kar gaya*<> by *KasaK*....Dil Ki in Miscellaneous Shayri « 1 2  All »
MHussain
Guest
«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2009, 11:53:25 PM »
Would you simplify above in English or Urdu?
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #2 on: June 25, 2009, 07:38:05 AM »
Quote from: MHussain on June 24, 2009, 11:53:25 PM
Would you simplify above in English or Urdu?

The base substance of the above poetic piece is as follows:

May the world remain free from barbaric demonic evils!
May the fraternized humanity's flag flutter high, eternally!
May it fight against injustice, and liberate the oppressed:
May the warriors continue to follow this convention for ages!!

                                        - abd bundeli
 
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #3 on: June 25, 2009, 10:55:24 AM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on June 20, 2009, 01:57:59 PM
Barbar daanawtaa sey, sadaa mukt rahey dharaa!
Sahrudaya maanawataa kaa dhwaj sadaa rahey phahraa!
Anyaayee sey larh-larh, nyaayee ko abhaya kareyn;
Yug-yug tak weeroun ki rahey yahee paramparaa!!

                            - 'Ramwatiya'

Quote from: abdbundeli on June 25, 2009, 07:38:05 AM

The base substance of the above poetic piece is as follows:

May the world remain free from barbaric demonic evils!
May the fraternized humanity's flag flutter high, eternally!
May it fight against injustice, and liberate the oppressed:
May the warriors continue to follow this convention for ages!!

                                        - abd bundeli

Wah... great thinking... Bahut khoob Uncle ji  Clapping Smiley
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2009, 11:18:10 AM »
Quote from: Roja on June 25, 2009, 10:55:24 AM
Wah... great thinking... Bahut khoob Uncle ji  Clapping Smiley

Thanks a lot, Roja!
       - abd bundeli
Logged
Roja
Guest
«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2009, 11:24:21 AM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on June 25, 2009, 11:18:10 AM
Thanks a lot, Roja!
       - abd bundeli

ooh Welcome dear Uncle ji  Usual Smile
Logged
Talat
Guest
«Reply #6 on: June 25, 2009, 12:29:08 PM »
Quote from: abdbundeli on June 20, 2009, 01:57:59 PM
Barbar daanawtaa sey, sadaa mukt rahey dharaa!
Sahrudaya maanawataa kaa dhwaj sadaa rahey phahraa!
Anyaayee sey larh-larh, nyaayee ko abhaya kareyn;
Yug-yug tak weeroun ki rahey yahee paramparaa!!

                            - 'Ramwatiya'


Excellent verses, Babu Ji
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2009, 01:45:56 PM »
Quote from: Roja on June 25, 2009, 11:24:21 AM
ooh Welcome dear Uncle ji  Usual Smile
I'm obliged, Roja!
          - abd bundeli
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2009, 01:46:37 PM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 25, 2009, 12:29:08 PM
Excellent verses, Babu Ji

Bahut-bahut shukriyah, bitia Celmira!
                    - abd bundeli
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2009, 02:17:37 PM »
Excellent ABD Ji! And a very good thought!
Logged
Azeem Azaad
WeCare
Mashhur Shayar
***

Rau: 14
Offline Offline

Gender: Male
Waqt Bitaya:
65 days, 6 hours and 29 minutes.
Humko Abtak Aashiqi Ka Wo Zamaana Yaad Hai,.

Posts: 19903
Member Since: Feb 2006


View Profile
«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2009, 02:19:25 PM »
Bohat Achche Abd Bhai
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2009, 02:28:33 PM »
Quote from: Sophi on June 25, 2009, 02:17:37 PM
Excellent ABD Ji! And a very good thought!
Shukriyah Sophi ji!
            - abd bundeli
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2009, 02:29:37 PM »
Quote from: Azeem on June 25, 2009, 02:19:25 PM
Bohat Achche Abd Bhai

Shukriyah Azeem bhai!
            - abd bundeli
Logged
MHussain
Guest
«Reply #13 on: June 29, 2009, 02:22:05 PM »
Thank you so much Mr. Abdbudeli
There are few poets who write optimistically, you are the one with the quality and warmth feeling. Bravo!
Logged
abdbundeli
Guest
«Reply #14 on: June 30, 2009, 04:23:09 AM »
Quote from: MHussain on June 29, 2009, 02:22:05 PM
Thank you so much Mr. Abdbudeli
There are few poets who write optimistically, you are the one with the quality and warmth feeling. Bravo!
Thanks a lot, MHussain ji! I'm happy, you're finding at least something positive into my poet!
                        - abd bundeli
       
Logged
Pages: [1]
Print
Yoindia ShayariAdab > Shayri ( Poetry ) or Shayari > Shairy-E-Watan > Topic: Barbar daanawtaa sey, sadaa mukt rahey dharaa!
Jump to:  


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
User
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
December 25, 2024, 07:34:21 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
Shayri
by mkv
[December 22, 2024, 05:36:15 PM]
मोहब्बत लिखने की ,,,saah...
by saahill
[December 19, 2024, 08:27:42 AM]
तुम्हारे ख़्वाब ,,,,, sa...
by saahill
[December 17, 2024, 08:39:55 AM]
सुना था मोहब्बत ,,,, saa...
by saahill
[December 15, 2024, 06:04:49 AM]
साजिश नहीं ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 13, 2024, 06:54:09 AM]
zikar tumhara ,,,, saahil...
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:23:12 AM]
khamosh ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[December 10, 2024, 08:22:15 AM]
Hyderabadi language
by Arif Uddin
[December 03, 2024, 07:06:48 PM]
parhezz ,,,, saahill
by saahill
[November 26, 2024, 08:47:05 AM]
mulaqaat nhi ho rahi,,,, ...
by saahill
[November 21, 2024, 09:01:29 AM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.144 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8509 Real Poets and poetry admirer