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21s ve sadee ka ye bharat
kaisa dikh raha hai ye bharat
kahee ped pe baithe log
bahatee hooye lasho me
dikh raha hai bharat
kahee dharam ke naam par
bichtee hai lashe mandiro me
bhagdad me piste masoom
jawaano kee lasho me
dikh raha hai bharat
bete kee lash pe rotee maa
kahee bilkhte hai masoom
maao kee lasho par
baap kee udaas ankho me
dikh raha hai bharat
ise badkismatee kahe
ya beparvahee kahe
kahi ujadte hooe
naujwaan bhavishy
kahi lasho kee kimat
chukate rahnumao
kee kartavya parayan
bhare ashvaasano
me dikh raha hai bharat.....
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«Reply #1 on: October 03, 2008, 02:44:44 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 03:35:36 AM » |
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very very thanks mahiya ji....... netra...... |
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2008, 03:30:17 AM » |
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 Kamaal ka likha hai Netra ji..
yuhi likhte rahiye.. 
thanks honerose for reply netra... |
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2008, 03:39:47 AM » |
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watan n jane kyoo jaltaa hai
chitaao se roj hotee hai roshnee
lgate hai attaah padh kar akhbaar
unhee kaa bhavishy kyoo jaltaa hai
chunavo kee rajneetee me chipte hai julm
gunahgaar bhee aate hai saamne
fir bhee n jane kyo ye majhab jaltaa hai
lagaa kar khoon lathee me bhegunaho ka
ghoomte hai sar uthaa kar dahshat gard
kon rokegaa kyaa maloom kisee ko
hairaan hotee hai, apne hee hatho
jab ghar apno kaa jalaa hai
ye watan n jaane kyoo jaltaa hai.
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2008, 07:07:54 AM » |
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21s ve sadee ka ye bharat
kaisa dikh raha hai ye bharat
kahee ped pe baithe log
bahatee hooye lasho me
dikh raha hai bharat
kahee dharam ke naam par
bichtee hai lashe mandiro me
bhagdad me piste masoom
jawaano kee lasho me
dikh raha hai bharat
bete kee lash pe rotee maa
kahee bilkhte hai masoom
maao kee lasho par
baap kee udaas ankho me
dikh raha hai bharat
ise badkismatee kahe
ya beparvahee kahe
kahi ujadte hooe
naujwaan bhavishy
kahi lasho kee kimat
chukate rahnumao
kee kartavya parayan
bhare ashvaasano
me dikh raha hai bharat.....
NETRAPAL SINGH CHOUDHARY
watan n jane kyoo jaltaa hai
chitaao se roj hotee hai roshnee
lgate hai attaah padh kar akhbaar
unhee kaa bhavishy kyoo jaltaa hai
chunavo kee rajneetee me chipte hai julm
gunahgaar bhee aate hai saamne
fir bhee n jane kyo ye majhab jaltaa hai
lagaa kar khoon lathee me bhegunaho ka
ghoomte hai sar uthaa kar dahshat gard
kon rokegaa kyaa maloom kisee ko
hairaan hotee hai, apne hee hatho
jab ghar apno kaa jalaa hai
ye watan n jaane kyoo jaltaa hai.
Netra Ji,
Aapki har peshkash ek sawal hai sab ke liye....Bohot hi sateek kavitayen hoti hain aapki maujooda haalat pe........Jo likha hai wo itna dukh bhara hai ki "Waah" keh kar bhi sharmindgi hoti hai..magar taareef ke qaabil hain aapki kalam se nikle ye khyaal |
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2008, 09:09:57 AM » |
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Netra Ji,
Aapki har peshkash ek sawal hai sab ke liye....Bohot hi sateek kavitayen hoti hain aapki maujooda haalat pe........Jo likha hai wo itna dukh bhara hai ki "Waah" keh kar bhi sharmindgi hoti hai..magar taareef ke qaabil hain aapki kalam se nikle ye khyaal thanks aapne padha or mahsoos kiya, or isme chipe dard ko samjha warna kise fursat hai dekhne kee mudkar har aks muskarataa hai har sailaab me wo to pagal hai ham tum aye dost marte hai dusro ke ansuo ke ponch kar.. netra.... |
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2008, 09:52:28 AM » |
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Sach kaha Netra Ji.....doosron ke dukh ko apna dukh samajhne ka ehsaas to hum kahin khote hi jaa rahe hain...Aajkal to aise ho gaye hain hum: Ashk behte hain apni aankhon se,
Doosre ki aankh main to hai paani
Khoon rista bas apne hi zakhm se,
Doosre ka baha, wo to hai paani !!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 07, 2008, 03:27:54 AM » |
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subah ka swere paigaam lyaa hai
ghar mera mere apno ne jalyaa hai
gumrah ho gaye hai mere apne
aaj unhee ne hamse kyoo mooh chipiyaa hai
gam karte hai marne ka gairo ke
be kasoor khud ko bhee bataaya hai
aree ham to samadar hai
har dard smete baithe hai
man maila ho gaya hai hamaraa bhee
jab wo dariyaa hansaa ham par
jiskaa wajood ham me hee samayaa hai
Netra Pal Singh Choudhary
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«Reply #11 on: October 07, 2008, 09:09:00 AM » |
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Sach kaha Netra Ji.....doosron ke dukh ko apna dukh samajhne ka ehsaas to hum kahin khote hi jaa rahe hain...Aajkal to aise ho gaye hain hum: Ashk behte hain apni aankhon se,
Doosre ki aankh main to hai paani
Khoon rista bas apne hi zakhm se,
Doosre ka baha, wo to hai paani !!!
bhoot khoob aapne likha hai rote hai jakhmo se apne gairo ke jkhmo pe ham rote hai aalam dekho behaayee ka unke jo har jakhm de kar bhee hanste hai.. netra. |
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2008, 09:13:47 AM » |
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Netra ji aaj ke halat par aapne tasveer banake likha hai
Bohat Bohat khoob... 
Very nice lines Celmira sis.. Log aapne ghar ko mitthe hai
KyuN woh bhool jaate ke woh aapne hai
Ghar jala dete hai kyuN armano ka khool behate hai
Lakhon logon ke dil mein aaj bhi woh kauf kyuN hai.. bahoot khoob paagal ha ye duniyaa ham bhee paagal yahaa nahi miltaa jise dhundhte hai bhagwaa, miltaa hai khudhaa bhee apnaa nahi miltaa dhundhne se bhee koi waha ya yahaa netra.. |
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«Reply #13 on: October 08, 2008, 07:25:08 PM » |
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bahoot khoob
paagal ha ye duniyaa
ham bhee paagal yahaa
nahi miltaa jise dhundhte hai
bhagwaa, miltaa hai khudhaa bhee
apnaa nahi miltaa dhundhne
se bhee koi waha ya yahaa
netra..
Bohat khoob likha hai Netrapal ji.. |
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«Reply #14 on: October 08, 2008, 07:33:39 PM » |
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Shukriya Honey, Netra.....Aap dono ne bohot achcha likha hai Aajkal ka maahol..waardaatain, bas yahi khyaal aata hai: Har aankh main nafrat si hai Dil main mere wahshat si hai |
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