DARAKHT...............A.B

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                           DARAKHT HOON..THAA KABHI HARA BHARA,
                           RAHTAA HAI MUJH PER GHUBAAR BHARA BHARA,
                        
                           TUMHAIN KYA NUKSAAN HAI MEREY WAJOOD SEY,
                           KAATEY CHALEY JAA RAHEY HO EK SIREY SEY,
          
                           JITNI ZARURAT HO MERI UTNAA HI ISTEMAAL KARO,
                           WARNA AANEY WAALI TABHAAI SEY ZARAA DARO,

                           QUDRAT NEY BEWAJAH TO NAHIN KIYA TAKHLIQ MERA,
                           MAT BANAA ZAMEEN KO TU ISS TARAH EK SEHRA,

                           APNI TARAQI MAIN NAA HO TU ANDHA ISS QADAR,
                           KI BEWAJAH BHATKNAA PADEY TUJHEY DAR-B- DAR,

                           SAB KO ZARURAT HAI YAHAN SABHI KEY SAHAAREY KI,
                           MAT KAR TABAAHI QAYNAAT KEY KHOOBSURAT NAZAAREY KI,

                           TU TO SAMAJHTA HAI HER BAAT SALIQEY SEY BECHAIN,
                           KYA FAYEDA AISI KAMYABI KA GAR NAA MILEY SUKH CHAIN...!

                          
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«Reply #1 on: February 05, 2010, 06:51:35 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT    ADIL BECHAIN JI.....

KOI BHI KUDRAT KI BANAYI HUI CHEEZ BEKAR KI NAHI HOTI
TARAKIYAN KARTE KARTE INSAAN KA DIMAG BEKAR HOGAYA HAI
AAJ WO KHUD KO KHUDA SE BHI BADA SAMAJHNE LAGA HAI
KI APNE SUKH CHAIN KE LIYE KUDRAT KO MITANE LAGA HAI
EH INSAAN MAT KAR KABHI BHI TU KUDRAT SE MASTI
KUDRAT KO EK SECOND LAGTA HAI MITANE ME TERI HASTI..

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«Reply #2 on: February 05, 2010, 07:10:08 AM »
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Adil ji..

Good One Cara ji !
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«Reply #3 on: February 05, 2010, 07:25:28 AM »
Bahut Khoob Adil ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Soch Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Achi Koshish Ki Hai Cara ji Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: February 05, 2010, 10:11:51 AM »
Nice Adil JI
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2010, 08:12:09 PM »
WAH KYA BAAT    ADIL BECHAIN JI.....

KOI BHI KUDRAT KI BANAYI HUI CHEEZ BEKAR KI NAHI HOTI
TARAKIYAN KARTE KARTE INSAAN KA DIMAG BEKAR HOGAYA HAI
AAJ WO KHUD KO KHUDA SE BHI BADA SAMAJHNE LAGA HAI
KI APNE SUKH CHAIN KE LIYE KUDRAT KO MITANE LAGA HAI
EH INSAAN MAT KAR KABHI BHI TU KUDRAT SE MASTI
KUDRAT KO EK SECOND LAGTA HAI MITANE ME TERI HASTI..



nice cara ji aur thanx
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2010, 08:15:31 PM »
Waah Bahoot Bahoot Khoob Adil ji..

Good One Cara ji !

thank you sophi ji
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2010, 08:16:29 PM »
Bahut Khoob Adil ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat Soch Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Achi Koshish Ki Hai Cara ji Aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thanx khawaish ji
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2010, 08:17:17 PM »
Nice Adil JI

thank you rishi ji
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«Reply #9 on: February 10, 2010, 03:10:08 AM »
                           DARAKHT HOON..THAA KABHI HARA BHARA,
                           RAHTAA HAI MUJH PER GHUBAAR BHARA BHARA,
                       
                           TUMHAIN KYA NUKSAAN HAI MEREY WAJOOD SEY,
                           KAATEY CHALEY JAA RAHEY HO EK SIREY SEY,
           
                           JITNI ZARURAT HO MERI UTNAA HI ISTEMAAL KARO,
                           WARNA AANEY WAALI TABHAAI SEY ZARAA DARO,

                           QUDRAT NEY BEWAJAH TO NAHIN KIYA TAKHLIQ MERA,
                           MAT BANAA ZAMEEN KO TU ISS TARAH EK SEHRA,

                           APNI TARAQI MAIN NAA HO TU ANDHA ISS QADAR,
                           KI BEWAJAH BHATKNAA PADEY TUJHEY DAR-B- DAR,

                           SAB KO ZARURAT HAI YAHAN SABHI KEY SAHAAREY KI,
                           MAT KAR TABAAHI QAYNAAT KEY KHOOBSURAT NAZAAREY KI,

                           TU TO SAMAJHTA HAI HER BAAT SALIQEY SEY BECHAIN,
                           KYA FAYEDA AISI KAMYABI KA GAR NAA MILEY SUKH CHAIN...!
                           

Bahut accha likha hai aapne Amar daad hazir hai  Usual Smile Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: February 10, 2010, 03:10:45 AM »
WAH KYA BAAT    ADIL BECHAIN JI.....

KOI BHI KUDRAT KI BANAYI HUI CHEEZ BEKAR KI NAHI HOTI
TARAKIYAN KARTE KARTE INSAAN KA DIMAG BEKAR HOGAYA HAI
AAJ WO KHUD KO KHUDA SE BHI BADA SAMAJHNE LAGA HAI
KI APNE SUKH CHAIN KE LIYE KUDRAT KO MITANE LAGA HAI
EH INSAAN MAT KAR KABHI BHI TU KUDRAT SE MASTI
KUDRAT KO EK SECOND LAGTA HAI MITANE ME TERI HASTI..


wah kya baat hai Cara sb...  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: February 10, 2010, 03:56:31 AM »
Wah Adil ji n Cara ji.bahut hi khoob great creation.excellent.hats off.
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«Reply #12 on: February 11, 2010, 06:35:35 PM »
Wah Adil ji n Cara ji.bahut hi khoob great creation.excellent.hats off.

thank u madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2010, 08:54:09 AM »
 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: February 15, 2010, 09:54:37 AM »
Nice one Adil Ji
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