***Desh ki dharti par***

by jannatjahan on June 04, 2009, 03:24:02 PM
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jannatjahan
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Insaniyat ki aaj sarebajar
boli lagi hai
ki aaj desh ki dharti par
achhaiyon ki holi jali hai
bik rahe iman yahan
sabji bhaji ke mol me
mridubhasiyon ke vachan
badale hain katu bol me
badal gaye hain dil sabke
dil me raaj haiwaniyat ka
kahan gaye wo sukun bhar din
pyar bhare insaniyat ka
pyaar ke badle dil ke nagar me
paison ka hai bolbala
zulm badh gaya hai is kadar jahan me
paison ke sath riston ka bhi
ho raha hai ghotala
charon taraf faili hai desh me
bhrastachar ki aag
mita sakte ho to mita do
lagi hai jo BHARAT MAA ke aanchal me
buraiyon ka badnuma DAAG.
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«Reply #1 on: June 04, 2009, 09:08:43 PM »
Waah bohot khoob!
Bohot achchhi tarah aap ne apne dard-e-watan ka izhar kiya hai...
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«Reply #2 on: June 05, 2009, 12:08:56 AM »
VERY NICE AND BEAUTIFUL CREATION JANNAT JAHAN JI. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: June 05, 2009, 06:06:18 AM »
Bohat Achche Shweta Ji,.
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«Reply #4 on: June 05, 2009, 09:23:45 PM »
Bohot Khoob Jannat Applause
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«Reply #5 on: June 10, 2009, 09:39:51 AM »
Quote from: Sayyid Randeri on June 04, 2009, 09:08:43 PM
Waah bohot khoob!
Bohot achchhi tarah aap ne apne dard-e-watan ka izhar kiya hai...


Thanks Sayyid ji...meri kavita me dard-a watan mehsus kiya aapne ...bahut badi baat hai ye mere liye...Thanks a lot Sayyid ji... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: June 10, 2009, 09:45:33 PM »
 Applause Applause Applause
bahut achi nazm likhi hai
watan ke pyaar par jaan bhi qurbaan hai
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«Reply #7 on: June 11, 2009, 08:05:26 AM »
Quote from: madhuwesh on June 05, 2009, 12:08:56 AM
VERY NICE AND BEAUTIFUL CREATION JANNAT JAHAN JI. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Thanks Dear Madhu..... Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: June 11, 2009, 08:16:38 AM »
Quote from: Azeem on June 05, 2009, 06:06:18 AM
Bohat Achche Shweta Ji,.
Thanks Dear Azeem... Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: June 11, 2009, 08:28:43 AM »
Shweta,

Bahut ache ! Applause

Keep writing Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: June 11, 2009, 08:34:07 AM »
Quote from: Rajbir on June 11, 2009, 08:28:43 AM
Shweta,

Bahut ache ! Applause

Keep writing Thumbs UP
Thanks Rajbir Ji.....aapne padhne ke liye time nikala..khusi huee Usual Smile
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«Reply #11 on: June 11, 2009, 08:41:40 AM »
Quote from: @kaash on June 05, 2009, 09:25:50 AM
bahot khoob likha hai aapne Jannat ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause Applause
Thanks Dear Kaash ji.... Usual Smile
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«Reply #12 on: June 11, 2009, 08:44:03 AM »
Lajawab Rachna Hai Shweta Ji.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause

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«Reply #13 on: June 11, 2009, 08:51:29 AM »
Quote from: Celmira on June 05, 2009, 09:23:45 PM
Bohot Khoob Jannat Applause
Thanks Dear celmira... Usual Smile
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«Reply #14 on: June 11, 2009, 09:02:53 AM »
Quote from: Nira on June 10, 2009, 09:45:33 PM
Applause Applause Applause
bahut achi nazm likhi hai
watan ke pyaar par jaan bhi qurbaan hai
Thanks Nira ji...sahi kaha hai aapne...watan ke pyaar par to jaan bhi kurbaan hai....... Usual Smile
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