Dhuaan Dhuaan

by medha_jain3 on January 15, 2009, 08:43:23 AM
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26/11/2008,shayad is din ko koi bhi bharteeya nahi bhool paya hoga,or jab ye hadasaa hua tha to uttar se lekar dakshin tak purab se pashchim tak sab ne iska kada virodh kiya,sabke dil me kafi dard tha,magar mujhe ek cheej kafi ajeeb lagi ki iske kareeb 2 mahine bad hum log naye saal ke swagat ke liye jashn manate hue najar aaye,un sab jakhmo.n ko bhool gaye,un shaheedo.n ko bhool gaye jo ab humare bich me nahi hai,
              Kya hum log us din un logo ki yaad me jashn manane ki bajay un logo ke parivar ke liye duae or unake dukh me shamil hone ki himmat nahi kar sakte the...jab prashaashan khud is bat ka prachar kar rha tha ki is hadase ki wajah se nav varsh ka jashn na manaye...magar shayad hum ye nahi kar paye.


Dhuaan,dhuaan sa tha wo sama.n,
Roya,roya sa lag raha tha aasma.n !!
Chhin chuki thi kai zindagiya.n
Or kuchh baki thi kilakariya.n !!

Dahashath thi har dil me behisab
Apni hi baju.on me simata tha insaa.n !!
Aahat bhi hui zara si hawa ki,
To bezubaa.n sa tha wnha har insaa.n !!

Us dardnaak manzar ki khamoshi todati,
Ek masoom ke ashqo.n ki zubaa.n !!
Jo apane mile na the raftaar si jindagi me,
Wanhi paraye ban gaye the rahnumaa !!

Suna tha ki "Waqt har zakhm ka maraham hota hai"
Aaj dekha bhi ki kis kadar jashn me duba tha insaa.n !!
Bhoolne laga tha unako jo hue the is hadase me kurbaa.n,
Lafjo.n me hamdardi thi to labo.n pe thi muskaan !!

Bas soch kar main rah gai ki -
"Kitane roop badalata hai insaa.n !!"


Medha jain
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diya786
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«Reply #1 on: January 15, 2009, 09:32:52 AM »
bahut khoob Medha ji Applause
aap ke is jazbe ko mera salaam hai  icon_salut
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #2 on: January 15, 2009, 09:36:59 AM »
Quote from: medha_jain3 on January 15, 2009, 08:43:23 AM
26/11/2008,shayad is din ko koi bhi bharteeya nahi bhool paya hoga,or jab ye hadasaa hua tha to uttar se lekar dakshin tak purab se pashchim tak sab ne iska kada virodh kiya,sabke dil me kafi dard tha,magar mujhe ek cheej kafi ajeeb lagi ki iske kareeb 2 mahine bad hum log naye saal ke swagat ke liye jashn manate hue najar aaye,un sab jakhmo.n ko bhool gaye,un shaheedo.n ko bhool gaye jo ab humare bich me nahi hai,
              Kya hum log us din un logo ki yaad me jashn manane ki bajay un logo ke parivar ke liye duae or unake dukh me shamil hone ki himmat nahi kar sakte the...jab prashaashan khud is bat ka prachar kar rha tha ki is hadase ki wajah se nav varsh ka jashn na manaye...magar shayad hum ye nahi kar paye.


Dhuaan,dhuaan sa tha wo sama.n,
Roya,roya sa lag raha tha aasma.n !!
Chhin chuki thi kai zindagiya.n
Or kuchh baki thi kilakariya.n !!

Dahashath thi har dil me behisab
Apni hi baju.on me simata tha insaa.n !!
Aahat bhi hui zara si hawa ki,
To bezubaa.n sa tha wnha har insaa.n !!

Us dardnaak manzar ki khamoshi todati,
Ek masoom ke ashqo.n ki zubaa.n !!
Jo apane mile na the raftaar si jindagi me,
Wanhi paraye ban gaye the rahnumaa !!

Suna tha ki "Waqt har zakhm ka maraham hota hai"
Aaj dekha bhi ki kis kadar jashn me duba tha insaa.n !!
Bhoolne laga tha unako jo hue the is hadase me kurbaa.n,
Lafjo.n me hamdardi thi to labo.n pe thi muskaan !!

Bas soch kar main rah gai ki -
"Kitane roop badalata hai insaa.n !!"


Medha jain

Bahoth Badiya mere bhai !! Allah Tumhe Khush Rakhe kya likha bahoth qoob !!

Qadeer Toopchi
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #3 on: January 15, 2009, 09:55:06 AM »
MEDHA ... kya kahu aap koh .. no doubt u have written it very beautifully ...


jasbir singh
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: January 15, 2009, 10:56:44 AM »
kya baat hai medhaji......

dhuaan-dhuaan is taraf har jagah tha dhuaan,
                                            jag-mag jag-mag us taraf har jagah thi roshni,
sanata tha, mare padre the insaan.
                                 khushiyan thi,naach rahete insaan.
         ya allah, insaano mein yeh kaisi insaanyiyat hai.
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #5 on: January 15, 2009, 01:57:57 PM »
Kuch theek nahi hain na tumhari bato me na hi tumhari poetry me.....kahi kuch bhari bhool kar rahi ho tum.

Bohat hi ghinauna aarop lagaya hain tumne sabhi bhartiyo par. Main chahta to tumhe jawab de sakta tha par phir logh yahi kehte ke Ghayel ki to aadat hain.

Anyway.........
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medha_jain3
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«Reply #6 on: January 15, 2009, 02:15:54 PM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 15, 2009, 01:57:57 PM
Kuch theek nahi hain na tumhari bato me na hi tumhari poetry me.....kahi kuch bhari bhool kar rahi ho tum.

Bohat hi ghinauna aarop lagaya hain tumne sabhi bhartiyo par. Main chahta to tumhe jawab de sakta tha par phir logh yahi kehte ke Ghayel ki to aadat hain.

Anyway.........

Sajid jee se sabse pahle mafi chahungi ki aapko meri poetry buri lagi,aap kah sakte hai jo aapko kahana ho,bt mene koi ghinouna aarop nahi lagaya bhartiyo.n.
     dubara aapse mafi chahti hu.

Medha jain
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medha_jain3
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«Reply #7 on: January 26, 2009, 07:13:46 AM »
Quote from: diya786 on January 15, 2009, 09:32:52 AM
bahut khoob Medha ji Applause
aap ke is jazbe ko mera salaam hai  icon_salut


Shukriya diya ji aapko meri koshish pasand aayi.

Medha jain
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medha_jain3
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«Reply #8 on: January 26, 2009, 07:15:39 AM »
Quote from: abdulqadeer on January 15, 2009, 09:36:59 AM
Bahoth Badiya mere bhai !! Allah Tumhe Khush Rakhe kya likha bahoth qoob !!

Qadeer Toopchi

Shukriya Qadeer ji.

Medha jain
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medha_jain3
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«Reply #9 on: January 26, 2009, 07:16:36 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on January 15, 2009, 09:55:06 AM
MEDHA ... kya kahu aap koh .. no doubt u have written it very beautifully ...


jasbir singh

Shukriya jasbir ji,bas ek koshish ki thi.

Medha jain
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medha_jain3
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«Reply #10 on: January 26, 2009, 07:17:23 AM »
Quote from: cara on January 15, 2009, 10:56:44 AM
kya baat hai medhaji......

dhuaan-dhuaan is taraf har jagah tha dhuaan,
                                            jag-mag jag-mag us taraf har jagah thi roshni,
sanata tha, mare padre the insaan.
                                 khushiyan thi,naach rahete insaan.
         ya allah, insaano mein yeh kaisi insaanyiyat hai.

Shukriya cara ji.

Medha jain
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abdulqadeer
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«Reply #11 on: January 26, 2009, 07:47:14 AM »
Quote from: sajid_ghayel on January 15, 2009, 01:57:57 PM
Kuch theek nahi hain na tumhari bato me na hi tumhari poetry me.....kahi kuch bhari bhool kar rahi ho tum.

Bohat hi ghinauna aarop lagaya hain tumne sabhi bhartiyo par. Main chahta to tumhe jawab de sakta tha par phir logh yahi kehte ke Ghayel ki to aadat hain.

Anyway.........

Ghayel Ji gustaqi maaf janab kiss angel se bul rahe ho app ke shayar ne bahrtiyon per ilzaam lagaya hai !!

Kavi ka maqsad unlogoon ki nishadehi karna hai jo kholi ankhon se ye manzar dekh rahe the !! aur waise log bahoth hain duniya me aur kavi ne  insaanoon ke taluf se baath ki hai hindustaniyon ki nahi aur jahan hindustaan ki baath ki wahan us jashn ka bhi zikar kiya hai jo is hadese ke turanth baad manaya gaya !! mere hisaab se kavi galath nahi bus thude se sudhar ki zarorath hai jo hum logon ki hausla afzai se dhire dhire aa jayega !!

Qadeer toopchi
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