DO BHAIYOAN KI KAHANI...

by mazHur on August 16, 2012, 12:03:14 PM
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Dil mein aaya jab shaitaan
Bhai ne maanga alag makaan.

Ghar mein jhagra karne laga
ghusse me maarne marne laga

kehna laga khaoon ga apna
oarhoon aur  pehnoon ga apna

ghar waloan se ho gae shikaayat
gharq hui sadyoan ki muhabbat

apni bolian bolne laga
nae mantaq gholnay laga

ghar walay pareshaan ho gaye
abhi jaagte the abhi soe gaye

maslay ka hal jab na pa sakay
grievances ko na mita sakay

tab baghi bhai kee ban aayee
par gaee bhayoan mein  judaee

apna hissa lay hee lia
ghar apna alaq lia bana

kuch saal tu guzray set hotay
phir ghar mein jhagray phoot paray

ghar walay us se khush na thay
kehne lagay ham jaate hein

roka tu bahut bhai ne usse
per ik na chalee us ke aagay

bhai ka ghar bhi toot gaya
ik ghar se dooja ghar bana

ghar bante hein aur tootatay  hein
rishtay bhi aakhir chootatay hein

bachhay jab ho te hein baray
ho jaate hein aksar woh paray

fitrat ke atal hotay hein usool
in se ulajhna tu he fuzool


kia niklay  inke baal o par
 parind bhi maangein apna  ghar

do bhai aise huay alag
ik jag mein buss gaye kayee jag

khush rahein abaad rahein
ghar walay saare shaad rahein!!













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«Reply #1 on: August 16, 2012, 01:52:24 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 16, 2012, 03:15:49 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: August 16, 2012, 05:59:10 PM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 16, 2012, 07:23:29 PM »
Dil mein aaya jab shaitaan
Bhai ne maanga alag makaan.

Ghar mein jhagra karne laga
ghusse me maarne marne laga

kehna laga khaoon ga apna
oarhoon aur  pehnoon ga apna

ghar waloan se ho gae shikaayat
gharq hui sadyoan ki muhabbat

apni bolian bolne laga
nae mantaq gholnay laga

ghar walay pareshaan ho gaye
abhi jaagte the abhi soe gaye

maslay ka hal jab na pa sakay
grievances ko na mita sakay badaa specific word use kiya hai aapney Usual Smile Usual Smile Usual Smile

tab baghi bhai kee ban aayee
par gaee bhayoan mein  judaee

apna hissa lay hee lia
ghar apna alaq lia bana

kuch saal tu guzray set hotay
phir ghar mein jhagray phoot paray

ghar walay us se khush na thay
kehne lagay ham jaate hein

roka tu bahut bhai ne usse
per ik na chalee us ke aagay

bhai ka ghar bhi toot gaya
ik ghar se dooja ghar bana

ghar bante hein aur tootatay  hein
rishtay bhi aakhir chootatay hein

bachhay jab ho te hein baray
ho jaate hein aksar woh paray

fitrat ke atal hotay hein usool
in se ulajhna tu he fuzool


kia niklay  inke baal o par
 parind bhi maangein apna  ghar

do bhai aise huay alag
ik jag mein buss gaye kayee jag

khush rahein abaad rahein
ghar walay saare shaad rahein!!
















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«Reply #5 on: August 16, 2012, 09:06:43 PM »

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«Reply #6 on: August 16, 2012, 09:08:34 PM »
thank you so much, y'all...my friends:)
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«Reply #7 on: August 19, 2012, 03:04:24 AM »
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«Reply #8 on: August 19, 2012, 04:11:39 AM »
Thank you  so much,
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